VN Ren'Py Abandoned State of Mind [Ep. 3] [Korentin]

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monksims

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Interesting story so far. I like very much renders. I especially loved the lighting on Liv's face before they stood up. It was gorgeous (yes, face too ;) .)
 
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Hmm, this is an interesting game/story so far, quite different in a good way :) Also appreciate the different models that has been used, lovely ladies all of them so far, MC's model is also refreshingly different from most games.
Definitely gonna keep following the game, keep it up Korentin :)
 
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I really like this game and that was a solid update. It has something... I don't know how to explain it, so I'll just say that it feels unique. Interesting story, decent writing, beautiful women. What's not to like?
 
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> But don't expect Sandbox/Freeroam

thank you.

It is a great game with a very unique and interesting setting. Looking forward to playing the future updates.
 
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ivanov95

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Very good game! Original plot, good lucking MC, not like the other skinny with fucked up hairstyles! The girls are also very good and not like the rest of the used ones! Can't wait for more and good luck with the game!
 

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Nice looking renders and cool story :) Just a shame there is no movement during the sex scenes :/
 

Sulring Durgul

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I have very mixed feelings about this game...
The visuals can be very beautiful, but most of the night scenes are way too dark to see anything.
The ladies look good, with gorgeous bodies.
The story, on the other hand, is a hot mess. Weird mystical forces seem to be at play but we don't get any explanation. Things happen around the MC and he is incredibly passive.
Dialogues are confusing, you have no idea who you are or what you are supposed to do, and most of the choices you are given don't seem to have much impact on events. Mainly you can choose to have sex or not with two of the girls.
I usually love mysteries but I really don't know what to make of this...

Maybe future updates will give us some background and explain things a bit?
 
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Korentin

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I have very mixed feelings about this game...
The visuals can be very beautiful, but most of the night scenes are way too dark to see anything.
The ladies look good, with gorgeous bodies.
The story, on the other hand, is a hot mess. Weird mystical forces seem to be at play but we don't get any explanation. Things happen around the MC and he is incredibly passive.
Dialogues are confusing, you have no idea who you are or what you are supposed to do, and most of the choices you are given don't seem to have much impact on events. Mainly you can choose to have sex or not with two of the girls.
I usually love mysteries but I really don't know what to make of this...

Maybe future update will give us some background and explain things a bit?
The next episode will give you an example of the kind of things a courier is expected to do.

Hopefully, I can maintain a sense of mystery without it causing too much frustration. Time will tell if I succeed.

Every story isn't right for everyone :)

Edit: and if anyone else feels some or all night scenes are too dark please let me know (naming the scene would be very much appreciated).


Thanks for the feedback!
 
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Korentin

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This week has been a bit lacking render wise since I've been experimenting with a few things and been somewhat indecisive on nailing down the details of the episode.

With that more or less done progress should pick up from now on.

As I've mentioned elsewhere in the thread and from what should be somewhat obvious from events in episode two, the next episode focuses on the courier's main job.

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As always, thanks to everyone for playing and it's always a pleasure to read comments about it.
 

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very less content otherwise looks good
finished in 8-12 minutes because of the long texts at intro and the useless ramble in between
hoping for more story in future updates
 

Korentin

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Work on episode 3 is progressing steadily, although a bit slower than I'd like at the moment. There are just too many things I have to take care of because of the current situation.

One of my goals with the episode is to provide the reader/player with the opportunity to choose a couple of different approaches to the situations he'll be confronted with.

And this time it's not about if he'll sleep with someone or not ;)

Depending on your past choices, one particular variable I've been tracking is also coming into play, be it in a lesser way.

Anyway, here's another tease:
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Korentin

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Another week has gone by and work is progressing nicely. Not much to say other than I hope you'll all like the direction the game is taking.

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Stay safe out there!
 

Korentin

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Time sure flies by these days! I'm behind my schedule, which is a bit annoying, but it's been hard to stay focused these last few weeks for several reasons.

I'm not releasing any more teasers from the upcoming episode since it would be too spoilery. Instead, I'm going to show some cut renders from earlier drafts of episode 1.

What?! Someone might find them interesting :)

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Just as jokes the lady showing the briefcase made me ask where Howie Mandel is and how much the Banker was offering.

Not a fan of Thor with a sword, mainly because of the very cartoony lightning or energy effect.

Also I am hoping the frog has some actual story significance.
 
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