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SteelyDan14

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It's a really original approach and it is really well done, but I can't get past everything is being done on the phone... just doesn't work for me. Regardless, the dev has done something completely original and wanted to stop in and give some love to the dev in case they stop in here.

Very cool and good luck!
 
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Nova Minx

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I'm liking & watching this one.

My only problem is it's starting to feel linear in favor of the hotwife/sharing and the cheating aspect isn't being given equal exposure, at least at this point. (It is early right now so my opinion is just a passing thought at best)

I think the menu needs to be given some attention too, placing all the options on the phone image template, like a gallery option ect.
 
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I'm liking & watching this one.

My only problem is it's starting to feel linear in favor of the hotwife/sharing and the cheating aspect isn't being given equal exposure, at least at this point. (It is early right now so my opinion is just a passing thought at best)

I think the menu needs to be given some attention too, placing all the options on the phone image template, like a gallery option ect.
Linear? How so? Or are you saying that hotwife route is getting more attention than the cheating?
 

Nova Minx

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Linear? How so? Or are you saying that hotwife route is getting more attention than the cheating?
Both actually. When the girlfriend asks for a second time about hotwife/sharing kinks, it's a red flag for me. In regards to a linear story.

As of now, the hotwife/sharing/cuckold story is the main focus & not cheating.

But, it is still in it's infancy. This is why i added, this is just a passing thought of an opinion.
 
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Both actually. When the girlfriend asks for a second time about hotwife/sharing kinks, it's a red flag for me. In regards to a linear story.

As of now, the hotwife/sharing/cuckold story is the main focus & not cheating.

But, it is still in it's infancy. This is why i added, this is just a passing thought of an opinion.
Hm it makes sense that if you refuse hotwife option once then it shouldn't ask you twice. But yeah most games are like this. You just gotta keep pressing no until u get what you want.
 

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A kiss happened before this version but thats up to you to consider it as cheating or not.
Technically it wasn't as it was part of a game and she likely knew what would happen if result went one day.
I'm more interested in the massage ending. I hate cliffhangers, lol.
 
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Technically it wasn't as it was part of a game and she likely knew what would happen if result went one day.
I'm more interested in the massage ending. I hate cliffhangers, lol.
Thats why I told them it's up to them. Many would still consider kiss a cheating thing even if it was for a game. But again, this game focuses on sharing so not a surprise at all.
 

Filipis

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Both actually. When the girlfriend asks for a second time about hotwife/sharing kinks, it's a red flag for me. In regards to a linear story.

As of now, the hotwife/sharing/cuckold story is the main focus & not cheating.

But, it is still in it's infancy. This is why i added, this is just a passing thought of an opinion.
For now, it's mostly NTS.

But it's my personal favourite when there's an option to turn NTS into NTR by 'chickening out', and 0.4 just proved that's what's gonna happen: at the end of the update, you are given an option to tell the wife to give a pillow to Marcus downstairs while still in her panties - or tell her to get dressed before doing so. And if the wife is "corrupted" enough, she will go in her panties (and give a little show to Marcus) regardless of what you tell her.

So, the cheating path is well on it's way, where the wife will stop respecting or asking for your input. And I can't wait!
 
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For now, it's mostly NTS.

But it's my personal favourite when there's an option to turn NTS into NTR by 'chickening out', and 0.4 just proved that's what's gonna happen: at the end of the update, you are given an option to tell the wife to give a pillow to Marcus downstairs while still in her panties - or tell her to get dressed before doing so. And if the wife is "corrupted" enough, she will go in her panties (and give a little show to Marcus) regardless of what you tell her.

So, the cheating path is well on it's way, where the wife will stop respecting or asking for your input. And I can't wait!
wow i never saw things that way. But isn't this a bit too fast if what you said is true?
 

Nova Minx

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For me cheating in a story, it shouldn't be obvious. Looking at a decision, i don't want to look at the choice and know this is going to lead to this or that. I like nuance and ambiguity. And for an adult story/game that isn't what is necessarily needed or wanted or is just difficult to achieve that.

One of my favorite games on the site a kinetic story with no choices and is about a wife cheating on her husband. Before i download it and play it, i know this is what i'm getting.

For this story right now, thinking about it, i would write the cheating aspect with one of the male antagonists finding the the wife's phone on the coffee table. Looking at the photos she has been sharing with her husband. Angling a cheating opportunity like that. Steering right away from the tropes usually associated with NTR stories.
 
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Very good game, good dialogues and the pace of the narrative. It is good that there is no dispersion on unnecessary branches (like mother, sister or daughter). Everything is clear and to the point. There is still little content, but what there is already gives great hope. I really hope that the author will not abandon the game and will actively supplement it
 
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For me cheating in a story, it shouldn't be obvious. Looking at a decision, i don't want to look at the choice and know this is going to lead to this or that. I like nuance and ambiguity. And for an adult story/game that isn't what is necessarily needed or wanted or is just difficult to achieve that.

One of my favorite games on the site a kinetic story with no choices and is about a wife cheating on her husband. Before i download it and play it, i know this is what i'm getting.

For this story right now, thinking about it, i would write the cheating aspect with one of the male antagonists finding the the wife's phone on the coffee table. Looking at the photos she has been sharing with her husband. Angling a cheating opportunity like that. Steering right away from the tropes usually associated with NTR stories.
I can see how that is interesting. But problem is some might not like that ambiguity. If they want to see sharing then they would want to choose every option that will surely lead to it. And too much ambiguity can make us confused.

So a half-half would be nice imo. Most ntr tropes I have seen are blackmail or a loyal wife who would do anything to save her hubby from a difficult situation. I don't mind those and something different can also be interesting but it takes some courage for a dev to test that.
 

Filipis

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wow i never saw things that way. But isn't this a bit too fast if what you said is true?
Not really. When I say "a show", she literally just turns around to show him her ass (still wearing panties).
For the beginning of the cheating path, I'd say it's actually a perfect start.

LadyLana , hopefully the cheating stuff keeps getting spicier!
 

Filipis

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For me cheating in a story, it shouldn't be obvious. Looking at a decision, i don't want to look at the choice and know this is going to lead to this or that. I like nuance and ambiguity. And for an adult story/game that isn't what is necessarily needed or wanted or is just difficult to achieve that.

One of my favorite games on the site a kinetic story with no choices and is about a wife cheating on her husband. Before i download it and play it, i know this is what i'm getting.

For this story right now, thinking about it, i would write the cheating aspect with one of the male antagonists finding the the wife's phone on the coffee table. Looking at the photos she has been sharing with her husband. Angling a cheating opportunity like that. Steering right away from the tropes usually associated with NTR stories.
Well, yeah, the cheating in this story clearly won't be a simple one-off choice. Like I said, you have to begin the NTS/sharing stuff with the wife, then later down the line, you have to make "chicken" choices where you want to pull back a bit - but by that point, she is too "corrupted" to listen to you and begins taking the initiative. There's no 3rd option that leads to cheating, you will have to combine NTS and Faithful options to get her to cheat. When and which options to combine, as evident, won't be so clear-cut.
 

Nova Minx

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Cheating doesn't need some deep corruption in a story to work. It can be a random surprise situation (the kiss at the party is one of those situations) that is escalated and the aftermath is dealing with the emotions and excuses, or the secret affair continuing. A connection to the protagonist is what sparks the players emotions of jealousy and helplessness. We already have that in part with the cameras being installed.

I don't want the developer to read our discussions and change anything. I want the story they have to unfold for us. That is why most of us watch these games and stories on the site. We are fed a little bit more.

The context of my first comment was more to do with a fear that this rather new NTR Phone story (and they have been billowing out of the latest update pages) will fall into the same trap of decision making not meaning or changing anything. Most negative reviews of such games mention that.
 
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