VN Ren'Py Completed Stay Online [v1.0] [LadyLana]

[Saint John]

I started with a lot of prejudice. But the story is really solid.

The choices are very good.

I really liked the loyal wife route.

The cheating wife route is really well thought out. Julia succumbs to her hormones and gives Marcus what he wants. It is very good that when you find out about it, the divorce is immediately granted and the VN is finished. The latest poolside scene, added to delay the divorce until the busines can get back on track and not upset the followers, is perfect.

I looked at the scenario where the MC wants and likes these things to happen and that route is good for those who like open marriages but it doesn't appeal to me in general. I didn't find it weird that Marcus gave his wife a facial blowjob, but I don't find it believable that she sent this cum on face picture to her husband.

Thank You Creators

 

[Filipis]

I started with a lot of prejudice. But the story is really solid.

The cheating wife route is really well thought out. Julia succumbs to her hormones and gives Marcus what he wants. It is very good that when you find out about it, the divorce is immediately granted and the VN is finished. The latest poolside scene, added to delay the divorce until the busines can get back on track and not upset the followers, is perfect.

What are you talking about?

With 0.9, the story has MC completely ignore his wife's cheating and do or comment nothing about it at all - hence the complaints. Yes, we have the game-over screen in 0.8, but nobody wants that in their NTR game...

 

[Saint John]

What are you talking about?

With 0.9, the story has MC completely ignore his wife's cheating and do or comment nothing about it at all - hence the complaints. Yes, we have the game-over screen in 0.8, but nobody wants that in their NTR game...

It's a VN with some pretty good NTR elements.

A foreign man fucking your wife and cum on her face and photographing it and sending it to you is enough to be NTR.

 

[wolfling11]

It's a VN with some pretty good NTR elements.

A foreign man fucking your wife and cum on her face and photographing it and sending it to you is enough to be NTR.

Nope it isn't NTR means stealing someone's significant others

 

[Return_To_Monke]

It's a VN with some pretty good NTR elements.

A foreign man fucking your wife and cum on her face and photographing it and sending it to you is enough to be NTR.

NTR isn't only about the act but the emotions behind it. There needs to be decent buildup to the events. Otherwise it's like watching some porn.

 

[Saint John]

Nope it isn't NTR means stealing someone's significant others

NTR isn't only about the act but the emotions behind it. There needs to be decent buildup to the events. Otherwise it's like watching some porn.

I am more interested in VNs where women cheat secretly from their husbands. That's in this VN. i like it

I apologize that I may have misinterpreted the concept of NTR because other VN's every time I choose NTR routes, a BBC fucks the MC's wife in front of the MC.

Actually in this VN Marcus takes the MC's wife away from him, I guess that doesn't fit the NTR concept you want.

 

[Filipis]

I am more interested in VNs where women cheat secretly from their husbands. That's in this VN. i like it

I apologize that I may have misinterpreted the concept of NTR because other VN's every time I choose NTR routes, a BBC fucks the MC's wife in front of the MC.

Actually in this VN Marcus takes the MC's wife away from him, I guess that doesn't fit the NTR concept you want.

Due to lack of proper punctuation, it looks like OP is saying this isn’t true NTR - but they are saying NTR means “being stolen from”, which Marcus is doing with Julia. And this VN does have the wife cheat ‘secretly’ with her lover, but she doesn’t know it’s not really a secret to MC.

All that’s left is for the dev to handle the resolution of the cheating properly, but it doesn’t look like it will be.

 

[Saint John]

Due to lack of proper punctuation, it looks like OP is saying this isn’t true NTR - but they are saying NTR means “being stolen from”, which Marcus is doing with Julia. And this VN does have the wife cheat ‘secretly’ with her lover, but she doesn’t know it’s not really a secret to MC.

All that’s left is for the dev to handle the resolution of the cheating properly, but it doesn’t look like it will be.

I agree with you. I think the real work is to write about the feelings of a cheated person when he finds out.

I'm not turned on by billions BBCs fucking your wife at the same time, making fun of this cheating.

 

[wolfling11]

I agree with you. I think the real work is to write about the feelings of a cheated person when he finds out.

I'm not turned on by billions BBCs fucking your wife at the same time, making fun of this cheating.

At this point BBC porn/NTR is lame and oversaturated Genre and its boring Thanks to Lana she didn't go the same route

 

[Saint John]

At this point BBC porn/NTR is lame and oversaturated Genre and its boring Thanks to Lana she didn't go the same route

I agree. In a way, Lana's success in this VN is based on what her wrote. (I think Lana is successful with her story in this VN.)

Getting rid of the BBC stereotype and taking a route that does not approve of deception. This seems to have raised the expectations of those playing the VN.

This VN So far it has met my expectations. i wait new update a impatience.

Thank you Lana

 

[wolfling11]

You guys have any Idea or prediction about what would happen in this path ? since in the other one she got caught cheating(again)

 

[wolfling11]

Something tells me next update is gonna be a Bang

 

[Mikadio2887]

Does anyone know when the next update coming

 

[Filipis]

Does anyone know when the next update coming

The game is on a monthly release schedule, so early May.

 

[wolfling11]

Status Update

 

[19Castiel23]

coming soon

 

[Filipis]

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While I don't mind Julia hooking up with Marcus' friend, I don't want to see her become a wanton slut at the end of the story either. Hopefully, the amount of partners for Julia is limited...

 

[19Castiel23]

While I don't mind Julia hooking up with Marcus' friend, I don't want to see her become a wanton slut at the end of the story either. Hopefully, the amount of partners for Julia is limited...

I wouldn't be surprised if Marcus and her friend fuck Julia at the same time soon

 

[wolfling11]

Wonder what happened to her friend and how marcus let this happen lol

 

[Saint John]

Wonder what happened to her friend and how marcus let this happen lol

Finally the BBC