NGL was a little disappointed when it ended in exactly the same place as it did the last 2x. It does look a little better than before though. That aside, if you really wanted to improve things add some sound. Sex noise and moans at a minimum. Maybe voice clips or sounds to add something to each individual character and emphasize their personalities, or the emotion they are experiencing. Still think it feels extremely rushed, in that virgin dude is bedding his virgin step sisters, that he happened to meet that very day. Also, was the mc's dong embiggened? I don't remember it being elephant sized the last go around, it was only horse sized last time iirc.