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negazoz

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I wonder if the best ending for MC is just him getting tossed out and finding a new life. No netorase, a complete 100% NTR regardless of trust. At this point, it's between him burying himself or just getting kicked out onto the dusty trail. Welp, we all know this isn't played for the ending; it's about the journey.
 
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Kuroila

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Lot of potential, i love the cosplayer daughter, the other daughter is cute too! the twitter system is peak, i hope you use it better than others games!

I just deslike a little the gameplay loop: Wake up > Go to work > Get money > Talk with someone > sleep
 
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LksLight

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This one... I don't really know what to say about this game. It looks like it has potential, and enough care was put into its design to say that it isn't low effort. The plot seems to be going in an interesting direction, and the characters (despite being straight up koikatsu) are good enough. Now... It's been years since it was first released here as a demo, and there's still close to no content at all. And, to make matters even worse, now there's a MASSIVE memory leak. I had the game eating up to 25gb of ram, and if I didn't kill the process it would probably keep eating even more.

Anyway... I won't give it a review because there's not enough content for me to review. But, as of yet, I believe it deserves a 3.5 at most.
 
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Kuviragames

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3. Major things I really hope will be implemented for the next update
- Message or little note after reaching the end of the current content. I was repeating the same day until I checked the Pictures folder to find out I already saw everything.
- Explanation why we need to gain their trust. What is the benefit? Since it's an NTR focused game it can't be to save them from NTR.
- Daily cycle is annoying as hell. Increase the amount of money a little bit and remove at least Saturday and Sunday the need to go to work.
 

Carnelian.dev

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This one... I don't really know what to say about this game. It looks like it has potential, and enough care was put into its design to say that it isn't low effort. The plot seems to be going in an interesting direction, and the characters (despite being straight up koikatsu) are good enough. Now... It's been years since it was first released here as a demo, and there's still close to no content at all. And, to make matters even worse, now there's a MASSIVE memory leak. I had the game eating up to 25gb of ram, and if I didn't kill the process it would probably keep eating even more.

Anyway... I won't give it a review because there's not enough content for me to review. But, as of yet, I believe it deserves a 3.5 at most.
1)There isn't a lot of content in the game right now because development was on pause for most of the time, and I was mainly focused on implementing new mechanics instead of adding content.
Originally, the game didn’t even have plans for a Twitter system, or a phone system at all. There was no unified house map with blind spots, and no status screen.
It’s really difficult to add meaningful content before the core mechanics are in place, because I would just have to rework it all later to fit the new systems.


2)As for the memory leak — I apologize for that. Fixing it is currently my top priority.
Thank you for not giving the game a low rating because of it. Optimization will be improved, content will be added gradually, and I hope you’ll check back after a couple of updates!
 

Carnelian.dev

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3. Major things I really hope will be implemented for the next update
- Message or little note after reaching the end of the current content. I was repeating the same day until I checked the Pictures folder to find out I already saw everything.
- Explanation why we need to gain their trust. What is the benefit? Since it's an NTR focused game it can't be to save them from NTR.
- Daily cycle is annoying as hell. Increase the amount of money a little bit and remove at least Saturday and Sunday the need to go to work.
Lot of potential, i love the cosplayer daughter, the other daughter is cute too! the twitter system is peak, i hope you use it better than others games!

I just deslike a little the gameplay loop: Wake up > Go to work > Get money > Talk with someone > sleep
Right now, it doesn’t feel great to play because there’s not enough content. In the future, there will be more activities in the city, more daily events at home, and ways for the main character to earn some extra money. I’m also working on a passive skill system that should help diversify the gameplay. I won’t say too much about it here — I have a devlog on Boosty that goes into more detail.


Also, by design, the player shouldn't be able to buy Twitter posts as soon as they appear. The idea is that the existence of those posts makes you realize something suspicious is going on — but you can't find out exactly what. Then new posts start appearing, while you're only just uncovering what happened a few days ago.
All of this is meant to create a feeling that you're not in control, that you're missing something — which fits perfectly with the NTR genre.
Yes, right now it doesn’t really work because there's not enough content yet
 
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Arkade

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Seems very promising- but this thread started in april 2023?... and there's been one update?.. Assuming it was on hiatus and expects more consistent updates now?.
 

JeanBibon

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Looks very promising if done correctly, I'd suggest looking heavily at the NTR Online game to see what really works well when it comes to mystery NTR, corruption and H scenes writing
 
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Hentai_Desu-ka?

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I don't know how difficult this would be to code & make your own plug-in for this specifically, but if you can figure it out I think that'd be really cool. For the in-game Phone UI as well for when you introduce the Emily's Computer UI functions in the game.

Make them just as navigate-able as a normal RPGM UI but specialized obviously to look a certain way. Like when you click to open phone functions then the UI should open up and be as easy to navigate as simply using your cursor to touch and click the features. And once you implement the ability to use Emily's PC, open a UI that looks, feels and functions as closely to what it feels like when on an actual PC as possible.

I hope you don't feel overwhelmed by such a suggestion or anything, I'm just wondering if it can be done.
 
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