VN Ren'Py Completed Stories of Submission: Learn Your Place [Final] [Zee Vital]

2.70 star(s) 7 Votes

shakey2

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Characters sucked and the story has a horrible "message". Honestly I kept reading hoping the characters would develop and we'd get to see the dom had more to her, but instead what I got in the end was a shallow self absorbed bitch who doesn't actually understand BDSM and is just using it as an excuse to be abusive. This is a story about a guy who goes from 1 bad relationship to an even worse one. There is no "good" ending here, hell i'd argue the "bad" ending is still better than the "good" ending. And I'm pretty sure legally he could have sued her for taking advantage of his mental state to financially ruin him and steal his money. Frankly I think it's very likely that she would have got shot or stabbed by him after that ending considering his mental state.

Author is a lazy greedy fuck trying to charge 4$ for these scraps of "content". It's such a shame since the art is actually good, what little there is of it at least.
 

VKKV

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And I'm pretty sure legally he could have sued her for taking advantage of his mental state to financially ruin him and steal his money. Frankly I think it's very likely that she would have got shot or stabbed by him after that ending considering his mental state.
that right there is why i compared the BDSM to 50 shades in my review.
 
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Bridget_The_Nun

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Developer makes a believable starting premise on game series and price sit accordingly
Everyone else that didn't buy the game or understood the premise.
Game expensive, story short, abooose ABOOSE!
C'mon a literal train wreck of a man being dominated by a woman, it's neither wholly unbelievable nor unrealistic for these situations to happen, furthermore I've seen a few of you comparing the game to other "Free Games" that "More content"... I'd like to remind you that most of those free games have some sort of Patrons backing them up with monthly subsidies in the house of three or more figures a month, while this is an independently published game with decent art and writhing that's finished and not ongoing with, I assume, further chapters being made available in the future in the same manner depending on how much this game gets purchased.
 

shakey2

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Developer makes a believable starting premise on game series and price sit accordingly
Everyone else that didn't buy the game or understood the premise.
Game expensive, story short, abooose ABOOSE!
C'mon a literal train wreck of a man being dominated by a woman, it's neither wholly unbelievable nor unrealistic for these situations to happen, furthermore I've seen a few of you comparing the game to other "Free Games" that "More content"... I'd like to remind you that most of those free games have some sort of Patrons backing them up with monthly subsidies in the house of three or more figures a month, while this is an independently published game with decent art and writhing that's finished and not ongoing with, I assume, further chapters being made available in the future in the same manner depending on how much this game gets purchased.
Personally I said it wasn't worth the price tag precisely because I have a sense of value from purchasing games on various sites like nutaku, DMM, and steam. So you can say I have a different sense of value than you do, but that doesn't mean my standard for judging it is wrong.

Who said it was unbelievable or unrealistic that he would be dominated? Of course he could realistically be into getting dominated by her in his state of mind, it's where the story goes after that some of us had a problem with.

Unless the author plans on adding more to the original 4$ product those extra chapters don't mean much. Yeah I don't expect a dev to endlessly feed people free content. But if I don't feel the value of the original product matches the entertainment value actually received then I'm not gonna give them even more money. I might buy the sequel chapters if they are more in line with what I expect from a 4$ game.
 
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Rastafoo

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Stories of Submission Femdom Domination porn game developed by Zee Vital (20).jpg

The cuck ending was a fantastic surprise. I recommend if you don't wanna risk an indie vn.
 

Rastafoo

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Jun 6, 2018
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Developer makes a believable starting premise on game series and price sit accordingly
Everyone else that didn't buy the game or understood the premise.
Game expensive, story short, abooose ABOOSE!
C'mon a literal train wreck of a man being dominated by a woman, it's neither wholly unbelievable nor unrealistic for these situations to happen, furthermore I've seen a few of you comparing the game to other "Free Games" that "More content"... I'd like to remind you that most of those free games have some sort of Patrons backing them up with monthly subsidies in the house of three or more figures a month, while this is an independently published game with decent art and writhing that's finished and not ongoing with, I assume, further chapters being made available in the future in the same manner depending on how much this game gets purchased.
Finally someone with a brain.
 

Pooploser64

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Developer makes a believable starting premise on game series and price sit accordingly
Everyone else that didn't buy the game or understood the premise.
Game expensive, story short, abooose ABOOSE!
C'mon a literal train wreck of a man being dominated by a woman, it's neither wholly unbelievable nor unrealistic for these situations to happen, furthermore I've seen a few of you comparing the game to other "Free Games" that "More content"... I'd like to remind you that most of those free games have some sort of Patrons backing them up with monthly subsidies in the house of three or more figures a month, while this is an independently published game with decent art and writhing that's finished and not ongoing with, I assume, further chapters being made available in the future in the same manner depending on how much this game gets purchased.
Well to quote a certain moderator on this site.
If every opinion against the game is trolling for you, you're wrong.
People have a right to comment on the good or bad of the game. That's not trolling.
 

hazurasu

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i think this good. the story is good enough even tough full game is short. Nude scene only 3
1. Good Ending
1. Bad Ending
1. in the middle of game (near ending)
so yeah, if you guys want play AND ACTUALLY HAVE A FETISH of FEMDOM or YOU NEED SOMEKIND of that, i think, this game will be great for your.
and for you that only need Sex scene for a lady that femdomed you... you came to wrong place, this game not selling that. this game only selling the story, with cheap amount of money.
and yeah, i think developer create this game to grab money so they can create new squel game, (the story next for this game is story when the mc finally become the sex slave of the woman) and yeah, i think that fair enough for the game that doesn't even open crowd funding for the game, so i hope people will understand why this game so short.... i think that the case why this game is short...
for story alone, i think rate is 10/10 (sorry but i think story is best enough for satisfy me)
for the art is 7/10 (not bad, but quite good enough)
and i really hope that because of the selling of this game, the sequel will become real in future,
 
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