VN Ren'Py Completed Stories of Submission: Learn Your Place [Final] [Zee Vital]

3.00 star(s) 8 Votes

Azure Sun

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Apr 15, 2021
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Well, just finished it (not that it took very long). It's gotta' be said, while I like femdom (otherwise I wouldn't have come within 100 meters of this game), I don't like the message that was shared here. Someone mentioned it in a review earlier, and I have to agree, the creator doesn't really understand how modern BDSM relationships work. It's a give and take, with needs being fulfilled on both sides. While it could be argued that MC was satisfied, it also must be noted that he was incredibly mentally and emotionally broken this entire game, invalidating his satisfaction somewhat since he clearly wasn't in a proper frame of mind.

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Lesson for the kids, if anyone ever says "It's not about you, it's all about me!" in ANY relationship, BDSM included, outside of a pornhub video (with actors), run away. You'll want nothing to do with that. It'll only end badly.

I understand that this is fictional, an indie game, but the reason I'm pointing these things out is because it is clearly (supposed to be) based on modern BDSM relationships. Overall, I ended this one with a sour taste in my mouth. Good thing I didn't have to waste too much time on it.
 

Mwaysinful

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Jul 13, 2025
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This was very short. The relationship between the MC and the domme is not plausible, everything happens too fast and there id no complicity or chemistry between them.

The MC has no reason to do anything that happens in the game, and the relationship is very shallow.

There is nothing of interest in this game
 
3.00 star(s) 8 Votes