I love it too, generally, but not in this case. I was already annoyed with the epilogue-ish bit in One Night Stand and I'm strongly opposed to any sort of sequel because it defeats the purpose. After all, if it turns into a relationship, then, by definition, it wasn't a one night stand
I've heard your thoughts on this in the past, and just like then, I still fully agree with your stance
I actually don't remember if I've already told this to you, but since it's been several months since ONS ended, I think it's okay to say this publicly.
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(Before we begin, I want to clarify that I was the one who made the final call, so I'm the one to bear responsibility for the ending)
Originally, the scene (soft route) was supposed to fade to black when Elena leaves the room, as David looks in her direction. As stand-alone experience, that was the ideal point for me to end the story. So, no "One Month Later..."
But Junior felt it was lacking and asked me (with zero pressure) if we could add something else to "wrap up" things more nicely.
By that time, the story I had wanted to tell was already told beautifully, and it was especially because of this amazingly talented guy who was both patient and dedicated to finish the whole thing despite the poor earnings from the project.
And considering how we weren't going to continue the series anyway, the "one month later" was just my secret way of saying thank you to Junior
Sure, it was not the ending I had in mind. But considering what I had made with him, the decision didn't feel like a compromise even in the tiniest sense.
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However, now that I'm actually continuing the story in
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, that ending no longer works for those two characters
So, I've actively retconned that ending (while also keeping the scene as is) into something else.
Like Kotte said above, (if you skip just the last two lines of the pdf) the whole thing will feel like a more "natural" epilogue to their meeting.
So, if anyone was not quite happy with the ending of the soft Route,
I'd kinda recommend reading this pdf (and just skip the last two lines) for a somewhat better ending.
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PS: The hard Route was meant to end like that from the get go though. That bastard simply could not let go of his chance and had to see if he could get more.