Recommending Story-first games

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Thanks for the feedback!

I answered a lot of questions and concerns in the game thread already, but if there is something you like to know ... Just ask :)
 

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New Tlaero's game is out: Chasing Beth, another story set in the Elsaverse. Basically a kinetic novel but quite interesting narrative within that setting's boundaries
Somehow we've ended up with another wacky brawl on the game thread over Tlaero's male MCs, who some players dislike because she writes them with rather distinctive (emotionally mature) personalities and doesn't allow tabula rasa-esque agency.

It's the same damn complaint again and again: "I want to play an alpha male stud, who is also a snowflake around any female LI who might have feelings for other guys... and I want every game to be a zero emotional commitment safe space for my harem/incest preferences, where narrative integrity is a tertiary consideration." [My response... fine, go play WVM and the 50 million other games that cater to your tastes!]

This whining, naturally, annoys poor Tlaero -- who doesn't like to be accused of hating men (by creating emotionally mature characters?!) -- and it annoys me, because I don't like to watch intelligent devs get tangled up with shitposting morons.
 
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Somehow we've ended up with another wacky brawl on the game thread over Tlaero's male MCs, who some players dislike because she writes them with rather distinctive (emotionally mature) personalities and doesn't allow tabula rasa-esque agency.

It's the same damn complaint again and again: "I want to play an alpha male stud, who is also a snowflake around any female LI who might have feelings for other guys... and I want every game to be a zero emotional commitment safe space for my harem/incest preferences, where narrative integrity is a tertiary consideration." [My response... fine, go play WVM and the 50 million other games that cater to your tastes!]

This whining, naturally, annoys poor Tlaero -- who doesn't like to be accused of hating men (by creating emotionally mature characters?!) -- and it annoys me, because I don't like to watch intelligent devs get tangled up with shitposting morons.
That pretty much sums up the average complaints, yeah. It's even more infuriating in this game as after each 'fail' you have a perfect explanation of the reasons why the MC (or any mature person who actually loves their partner, btw) should act as intended. They just don't get the message even though is explicitly said in one of the T&T unavoidable interactions: caring about the other's happiness above your own is the first sign of real love, which is what the game is all about (at least regarding that relationship: love is the answer even if it hurts and you could end up alone). But people want "agency" as an euphemism to ditch a character they didn't like, without even trying to understand the game's setting for that couple (they are already together because they love each other, so they should act as they do, supporting and trusting each other) nor the constraints of the overall storyarch. Well, I guess we should be used to it by now
 

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But you did a wonderful job of defending me, Moskys. Thank you!

Tlaero
Yay, we have our first celebrity in the story-first thread :D Seriously though, you are an outstanding writer Tlaero. Whenever you release something new in the Elsaverse, even text-only, I find myself in awe of how you've yet again managed to expand the universe so delightfully. Like, "Triple A" is probably my favourite story of yours, and I still cannot believe just how well it fits with all the previous games. You must be planning everything years in advance, right?
 
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But you did a wonderful job of defending me, Moskys. Thank you!

Tlaero
Indeed, three cheers for moskyx for defending our favourite dev against rank stupidity! :cool:(y)

Tlareo, one of the observations you made in your most recent Chasing Beth post is that you write for 'a niche' audience. That's true, I'm afraid... at least relative to the norm on this hellsite.

But... here, on jufot's story-first thread, you'll find most of your fans and audience (many of us are your patreons, too).

We love devs who create compelling narratives with distinctive characters, and who ensure those characters remain credible and true to themselves (despite whining/pleading from players). We hate the 'porn logic' demanded by the mass audience (particularly on this site) and prize realistic depictions of emotion and relationships.

So, you're among friends and admirers here.

Lastly, Tlaero -- contra the whining on the Chasing Beth thread... I _love_ your male MCs. You demand real emotional commitment, sacrifice and selflessness on the part of your men... in other words, that we are as good as we have the potential to be, in order to be worthy companions for your strong female characters. As someone who has been with the same (brilliant, beautiful) woman for closing in on two decades, your male MCs remind me of what I can and should be for her...
 
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By the way, I've added links to all games in the OP, including individual links for Elsaverse entries. Hopefully, that'll make them more discoverable :)

Lastly, Tlaero -- contra the whining on the Chasing Beth thread... I _love_ your male MCs. You demand real emotional commitment, sacrifice and selflessness on the part of your men... in other words, that we are as good as we have the potential to be, in order to be worthy companions for your strong female characters. As someone who has been with the same (brilliant, beautiful) woman for closing in on two decades, your male MCs remind me of what I can and should be for her...
Hear, hear! I echo Raife's feelings, and my wife loves your writing like I do.
 

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Yay, we have our first celebrity in the story-first thread :D Seriously though, you are an outstanding writer Tlaero. Whenever you release something new in the Elsaverse, even text-only, I find myself in awe of how you've yet again managed to expand the universe so delightfully. Like, "Triple A" is probably my favourite story of yours, and I still cannot believe just how well it fits with all the previous games. You must be planning everything years in advance, right?
Thank you!

I do a combination of planning years in advance and leaving myself room to expand things. When I started Dreaming with Elsa, I planned out the major arc of the first four games. Not as detailed as you might think. You'll notice that the characterization of Xara changed from DwE to RfJ. But I knew who the bad guy was, what his plans were, and how we were going to defeat him. I didn't have any idea about Darkness Falls until we got near the end of Saving Chloe and Mortze made that killer image of Blake and Won after the SC credits. But I wrote AAA at the same time as Darkness Falls, so they were planned out together. Etc.

I'm seriously happy that you like AAA. I know that people come to my stories for the naked pictures. It's a significant request from me to have people read a whole novella that doesn't have any pictures at all.

Edit: It's wonderful that you play these games with your wife. I always revel in the stories of couples who are able to enjoy erotic fiction together.

Tlaero
 

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The first one I would recommend is called Sunstone. The first arc is completed (volumes 1-5) and it is a lesbian rommance BDSM story. It is very well written and tells the tale of 2 women looking online to find someone to explore their kinks with and how that purely sexual relationship evolves into more. The story is well written, the characters have depth and the art is absolutely gorgeous.
OMG, Sunstone was fantastic. I won't write BDSM, not because I'm morally apposed (if it's consensual, go for it) but because nothing I could do would hold a candle to that masterpiece.

Tlaero
 

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I do a combination of planning years in advance and leaving myself room to expand things. When I started Dreaming with Elsa, I planned out the major arc of the first four games. Not as detailed as you might think. You'll notice that the characterization of Xara changed from DwE to RfJ. But I knew who the bad guy was, what his plans were, and how we were going to defeat him.
That sounds very impressive given the scale of your universe. It's hard to believe one can sustain the dedication, enthusiasm, and discipline required not only to maintain but actively improve and expand a world for almost a decade. I cannot sing your praises enough :)

I'm seriously happy that you like AAA. I know that people come to my stories for the naked pictures. It's a significant request from me to have people read a whole novella that doesn't have any pictures at all.
I've touched this on the Chasing Beth thread, but as amazing as Mortze is, I'm pretty much only interested in your words. When you originally "retired", it felt like a real loss. Even if you stop developing VNs one day, I hope you'll always keep writing. It doesn't even have to be erotic really.

Edit: It's wonderful that you play these games with your wife. I always revel in the stories of couples who are able to enjoy erotic fiction together.
Indeed. In my experience, couples who can openly talk about - and experience - sexual subjects together have much healthier relationships. My wife is also on F95, but she mostly avoids commenting as it tends to attract unsavoury attention. People like you (and a few others, mostly on this thread) provide a nice counterbalance, so your presence is much appreciated :)

EDIT: My wife says that her favourite Elsaverse character is Anastasia, with some very relatable struggles. Mine remains Chloe. ;)
 
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Somehow we've ended up with another wacky brawl on the game thread over Tlaero's male MCs, who some players dislike because she writes them with rather distinctive (emotionally mature) personalities and doesn't allow tabula rasa-esque agency.

It's the same damn complaint again and again: "I want to play an alpha male stud, who is also a snowflake around any female LI who might have feelings for other guys... and I want every game to be a zero emotional commitment safe space for my harem/incest preferences, where narrative integrity is a tertiary consideration." [My response... fine, go play WVM and the 50 million other games that cater to your tastes!]

This whining, naturally, annoys poor Tlaero -- who doesn't like to be accused of hating men (by creating emotionally mature characters?!) -- and it annoys me, because I don't like to watch intelligent devs get tangled up with shitposting morons.
I must say it didn't seem like half the shitstorm I expected to see after I had read your post, unless the staff deleted tons of silly posts, but still I don't get these complaints about the lack of freedom to play as an arse. Many games with choices and a male MC tend to tie rewards to one 'personality' style so you kind of need to guess anyway what the dev's views on 'proper' masculinity are. And yes, in many older games those implicitly prescribed views were horrible. And who's to say devs can't put limits on the ? Don't these people know things like KNs exist? All very strange.

But you never see these types protesting the lack of freedom of choice in Japanese retard-in-Lecherville games. :cry:

Oh, and another suggestion for you, jufot and Nyravrod: Ladykiller in a Bind
 

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unless the staff deleted tons of silly posts
I don't know if it's related, but a handful of my comments from many different threads, going back months (!!) were deleted by staff today. Maybe it's part of a larger clean up effort? Who knows...

And who's to say devs can't put limits on the ? Don't these people know things like KNs exist? All very strange.
In my experience, the people who complain about this almost universally exhibit repugnant views, so if anything their presence on a thread actually tells me the game is probably worth checking out :)


Oh, and another suggestion for you, jufot and Nyravrod: Ladykiller in a Bind
Oh, thanks for the recommendation! I've read a lot of praise for this one back when it was first released, but never really gave it a chance. Perhaps it's time to change that.
 

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I don't know if it's related, but a handful of my comments from many different threads, going back months (!!) were deleted by staff today. Maybe it's part of a larger clean up effort? Who knows...
I doubt it is part of a larger effort, moderation here seems too incidental for that even though it's sometimes pretty heavy-handed. Like police driving a riot van into a street and doing a drive-by shooting after getting a call about a cat stuck in a tree. They probably just acted on reports.

Oh, thanks for the recommendation! I've read a lot of praise for this one back when it was first released, but never really gave it a chance. Perhaps it's time to change that.
The VN strongly stresses consent, although the implementation has been criticised too, of course... The Wikipedia article says it all, really. A lot of it is impossibly high standards imo, especially for LGBT devs and games. It doesn't change that the writing is super powerful.

It's also really impressive that the dev got this much out of Ren'Py. Some of the best presentation you'll ever see in a VN. I think I've hyped it enough now. :geek:


Nyravrod might want to check Make Love Not Waagh!, a fantasy romantic raceplay maledom KN, with a fully monogamous relationship. Totally cute imo despite the SM. The semi-political angle of "looking forward, not looking back" on slavery may however be disagreeable. The story is nothing super deep but it avoids a lot of the porn logic that you see in many more story-driven VNs. I don't think it will be of interest to other thread regulars.
 
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I must say it didn't seem like half the shitstorm I expected to see after I had read your post, unless the staff deleted tons of silly posts, but still I don't get these complaints about the lack of freedom to play as an arse.

But you never see these types protesting the lack of freedom of choice in Japanese retard-in-Lecherville games. :cry:

Oh, and another suggestion for you, jufot and Nyravrod: Ladykiller in a Bind
It wasn't too bad... certainly not compared to jufot's _Hillside_ brawls of yore... but it monumentally pissed me off to hear one or two posters essentially accuse Tlaero of hating men. Nothing could be further from the truth, as far as I'm concerned. My own view is that some of these posters have obvious personal issues that have nothing to do with Tlaero... but jeeez, they certainly have at her in a way that I see as very much not on. (And they are _still_ at it... yikes, what is wrong with this guy?!)

Thanks for the recommendation, Jaike... I'll check it out.
 
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it monumentally pissed me off to hear one or two posters essentially accuse Tlaero of hating men. Nothing could be further from the truth
That whole screed is nauseating. I get it though, if your perspective on relationships is warped to such an extent, these games really must feel like "anti-men".

they certainly have at her in a way that I see as very much not on. (And they are _still_ at it... yikes, what is wrong with this guy?!)
If this story was written by a man, I imagine there'd be some colourful commentary around how the developer is a "soy boy" or a "beta cuck", but in my experience the fact that it's written by a woman makes these people all the more angry, like it's a personal affront to them. The guy from that thread dresses it all up in politeness and decorum, but his seething contempt is palpable. I mean, look at this shit:

I know that there are very few women who truly believe in gender equality. Even less of them can tell amazing stories and create solid games with such theme. I am fine if you are not one of them, but I'm not going to stop looking for it and I am not ashamed about it. ;)
I hate this entire characterization, including that fucking sarcastic wink at the end. I know you and moskyx have tried to show him the light, but I fear the only winning move is to not play...
 
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I know you and moskyx have tried to show him the light, but I fear the only winning move is to not play...
Yeah... I think you're right. That guy feels damaged to me... like he's mad about something else that happened to him, rather than something Tlaero wrote.

I wouldn't normally have gotten involved... but accusing Tlaero of hating men _really_ cheesed me off. It still does.
 

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Thank you, Raife. And thank you for inviting me to this thread.

Tlaero
[Bows low] -- I genuinely admire you, and have for years. The capacity for empathy and decency you give to some of your characters, like Joel, is inspiring.

My favourite T&M character, though... is probably Christine. She is awesome. :cool:
 

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There's a reason why in most places I go on the internet, I pretend to be male. "Tlaero" is the main exception.

Tlaero
I cannot understand why you seem to attract such bizarre, unjustified anger from some quarters of this hellsite... although I have a few guesses related to issues we discuss regularly on this thread.

A (substantial) segment of male players react extraordinary negatively to _any_ indication that a female LI _might_ be attracted to another man. They campaign incessantly to label any game with a female LI that fails to show robotic loyalty to the male MC as 'NTR.' In response, quite a few devs have, primarily for financial reasons, altered their projected narratives or character arcs in order to essentially write-out male NPCs that might dissuade this large segment of hyper-sensitive male players from trying their games. (My sense, Tlaero, is that the guy who started ranting on the _Chasing Beth_ thread fell into precisely this category of player.)

The net effect of this pressure has destroyed the credibility of the narratives in quite a few otherwise promising games, and reduced female LIs to two-dimensional ciphers, rather than fully-realized, credible portraits of real women.

There are, of course, a few devs like you, Tlaero, who resist this dynamic and craft distinctive male MCs and female LIs (or female MCs and male LIs) that don't fit the pattern preferred by this mass of players (such players also tend to favour 'harem' games, which I find totally unrealistic and deadly dull). This allows you the freedom to create stories that evoke real emotions... I just wish there were more devs like you.

I have views on the type of man who insists on unrealistic portrayals of women LI relationships... but I'll forgo sharing those here. Suffice to say that I find it difficult to be patient and conceal my contempt.

Fortunately, there's this story-first games thread: one of the reasons jufot started it was to help muster players who favour the sort of narrative-driven games you create... both to share tips and favoured titles, but also to back devs like you (morally and financially). Please keep making games like _Chasing Beth_ and strong, brave, self-contained and deeply empathetic male MCs like Joel.
 
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