I gave it a try and read till the end of chapter 1. But it dint click with me.
The following words are my subjective opinion. Please keep that in mind.
I love the visuals, i love the overall style. The soundtrack, even if not very original, fits nicely and "wonster" made me laugh hard.
But still, the plot just dosnt fit with me.
I need a little bit more "action" now and then to keep me engaged. That dosnt have to be sex. For example, the broken laptop and a decent struggle to get whats already written on it back could have done the trick. Maybe something like that comes later, but im not hooked enough to find out.
There is also something missing with the characters. Im not sure what it is but after a hour of reading, im still totaly indifferent about them.
Its the same feeling i had in my youth when i read some of my mothers fantasy romance novels. I just wasnt the target audience, even if some of the scenes made my pupercent blood boil ^^'
But, i always could connect to the characters after 15-20 pages. Here, i cant.
With all that said, i still can see why others might like it.
A very slow plot development sure has its charm for some. And i know there are ppl out there how crave for the non hero friendship kind of story.
And if im right and this is written with a mainly female audience in mind, im very happy that they got this one!
Please note: this dosnt mean males cant enjoy this!!!
Because of taste, and probably wrong audience, i wont write a review, but if this were one, i would give it a 8 (maybe 9) out of 10.
Some deduction because there is a soundtrack but no ambience sounds (as far as i understand, if you do one, the other isnt that hard) and the rest is because the characters are missing something. See reasoning above.
Hope i wasnt to harsh here, i wish the developer(s?) all the best and for the fans all the fun they can imagine.
PS. sorry if my english is a little bumpy. Im not a natural.