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VN Ren'Py Strangers on Paper [Ch.2 v0.2.2] [Gloomy Ghost Studio]

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KammerJ

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Tags aren't added by the Devs as far as I know, but by the site mods, the planned tags are though.
It's highly recommended, the writing and art both are beautiful. The characters feel like real people.
Yea, i know. But i always have to chuckle a little when something like this happens. Most of the times, its only a missunderstanding what the Tag means anyways. Like in this case most likely
 
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KammerJ

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I gave it a try and read till the end of chapter 1. But it dint click with me.

The following words are my subjective opinion. Please keep that in mind.

I love the visuals, i love the overall style. The soundtrack, even if not very original, fits nicely and "wonster" made me laugh hard.
But still, the plot just dosnt fit with me.
I need a little bit more "action" now and then to keep me engaged. That dosnt have to be sex. For example, the broken laptop and a decent struggle to get whats already written on it back could have done the trick. Maybe something like that comes later, but im not hooked enough to find out.
There is also something missing with the characters. Im not sure what it is but after a hour of reading, im still totaly indifferent about them.
Its the same feeling i had in my youth when i read some of my mothers fantasy romance novels. I just wasnt the target audience, even if some of the scenes made my pupercent blood boil ^^'
But, i always could connect to the characters after 15-20 pages. Here, i cant.

With all that said, i still can see why others might like it.
A very slow plot development sure has its charm for some. And i know there are ppl out there how crave for the non hero friendship kind of story.
And if im right and this is written with a mainly female audience in mind, im very happy that they got this one!
Please note: this dosnt mean males cant enjoy this!!!

Because of taste, and probably wrong audience, i wont write a review, but if this were one, i would give it a 8 (maybe 9) out of 10.
Some deduction because there is a soundtrack but no ambience sounds (as far as i understand, if you do one, the other isnt that hard) and the rest is because the characters are missing something. See reasoning above.

Hope i wasnt to harsh here, i wish the developer(s?) all the best and for the fans all the fun they can imagine.

PS. sorry if my english is a little bumpy. Im not a natural.
 

Jonmanchu

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What is ummer 2025?where is summer 2025?coz my country has finished summer and entered rainy season :D
 

Baalzie

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The following words are my subjective opinion. Please keep that in mind.

Because of taste, and probably wrong audience, i wont write a review, but if this were one, i would give it a 8 (maybe 9) out of 10.
Some deduction because there is a soundtrack but no ambience sounds (as far as i understand, if you do one, the other isnt that hard) and the rest is because the characters are missing something. See reasoning above.

PS. sorry if my english is a little bumpy. Im not a natural.
Have to disagree... I tend to be annoyed by ambient sounds (And even MORE so by bad [they ALL are] SFX, usually sex related), so for ME, that'd count as a plus.
I also want you to know that as a fellow non-native English speaker, we BOTH seem to have a much better grasp of the language than MOST native speakers.
You did great!
Languages are counted as names, though, just like countries and nationalities, so they start with capital letters.
And apostrophes are great tools. Used to replace missing letters, usually in words made up of multiple words, and to accentuate ownership. ;)

None of the above was meant as criticism. Mostly just trying to teach the native English speakers a bit about writing their mother tongue. :0p
 
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Meiri

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So, expectations for chapter 3?
Becca: looking like she will go redhead, possible threesome with her friend from the band if you play your cards right? Maybe we start moving to something more serious? Probably too soon, I think the chapter will end up with Becca realizing she got feelings for us and will decide to distance from us, so we have last chapter to try save the relationship.

Amy: We continue trying to make her realize that marriage won't make her happy, maybe we try to break the engagement with the help of her sister, but I don't think we achieve it in this chapter, maybe her fiancé realizes, gets involved and tries to stop us.
 

KammerJ

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Have to disagree... I tend to be annoyed by ambient sounds (And even MORE so by bad [they ALL are] SFX, usually sex related), so for ME, that'd count as a plus.
I dont like sex sounds either. Such things are for expensive productions. But some clatter sounds in a train, here and there a bird when characters are outside, background chatter sounds in a bar or some stock rain. thats always nice to have and adds a lot of atmosphere.

None of the above was meant as criticism.
Dont worry, im not that easy to offend ;)
 

Discrepancy

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Played this for the first time and fell in love with Becca, especially when she is blonde :love:
The writing is pretty good and the characters pretty deep/interesting.
With all this said I just wish to see Becca on a more "porn" game, and this is no slight on this game, I just wanted to see more of her in more sex scenes/positions with animations and this is not that kind of game :(
Still can't wait for more :sneaky:
 
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Meiri

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Played this for the first time and fell in love with Becca, specially when she is blonde :love:
The writing is pretty good and the characters pretty deep/interesting.
With all this said I just wish to see Becca on a more "porn" game, and this is no slight on this game, I just wanted to see more of her in more sex scenes/positions with animations and this is not that kind of game :(
Still can't wait for more :sneaky:
Well at the very least I think next chapter we will have sex again, and I think at some point if we picked the right choices we may have a threesome with her and the friend from the band.

But yeah, there's less sex involved than other games.
 

TomamoNoku

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Well at the very least I think next chapter we will have sex again, and I think at some point if we picked the right choices we may have a threesome with her and the friend from the band.

But yeah, there's less sex involved than other games.
Isn't group sex(MFF) a threesome? The first page has this tag among those that will not be included.
I understand that the game could be very good without it, but I still think it's a shame, because considering that Becca and Eris seem to be bi, it also means that we won't have a throuple path :(. MCxBeccaxEris had the potential to be an interesting and convincing combination, something VERY rare.
 
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