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imadumb

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About the butcher case, it was pretty easy to figure out to be honest, it would be fun if was a little bit more impossible to know
 

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About the butcher case, it was pretty easy to figure out to be honest, it would be fun if was a little bit more impossible to know
Interesting. What hint made you realise his identity if I may ask?
Very interested in knowing which hints the players noticed and which not...
 

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Interesting. What hint made you realise his identity if I may ask?
Very interested in knowing which hints the players noticed and which not...
first Toni saying he never try to make ppl pay for the painting /// serial killers doing this kind of thing is common, paint the target, kill the target, then, the sad story about killing the beloved one, that was the final one, the guy became mad and killed her, but, at first, Toni saying he never receive money was pretty fishy, also, the thing about he painting the serial killer to ppl know how he is = making it hard to the police figure out he was the one, bcs he made a diferent body shape
 
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I'm very impressed with the quality of everything in the last chapters i saw, i mean, everything was ok/good until now, but, now, its really impressive, like, quality of renderings, animations, and with sounds now, everything is really becoming, a masterpiece (plz don't say ima sucking balls here)
 
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I'm very impressed with the quality of everything in the last chapters i saw, i mean, everything was ok/good until now, but, now, its really impressive, like, quality of renderings, animations, and with sounds now, everything is really becoming, a masterpiece (plz don't say ima sucking balls here)
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Flynn974

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I'm very impressed with the quality of everything in the last chapters i saw, i mean, everything was ok/good until now, but, now, its really impressive, like, quality of renderings, animations, and with sounds now, everything is really becoming, a masterpiece (plz don't say ima sucking balls here)
Thank you. Been trying to improve over time, and I think I did, at least render quality-wise, so that's rly nice to hear...
 

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About the butcher case, it was pretty easy to figure out to be honest, it would be fun if was a little bit more impossible to know
Making it impossible to guess would just be bad writing. It being able to be guessed is good writing. I'm not saying everything has to be obvious, and I for one didn't see this as obvious, but trying to make things impossible is not the way to do things.

People being able to see where a story is going from the hints and clues in your writing is a sign of good writing, changing things to what people haven't or can't guess just to surprise people is terrible writing
 

imadumb

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Making it impossible to guess would just be bad writing. It being able to be guessed is good writing. I'm not saying everything has to be obvious, and I for one didn't see this as obvious, but trying to make things impossible is not the way to do things.

People being able to see where a story is going from the hints and clues in your writing is a sign of good writing, changing things to what people haven't or can't guess just to surprise people is terrible writing
yep, agree, but a middle ground would be thrilling ( i mean, i t was fantastic already, but i figured out too fast and was a little bit, without the "i knew it" element when something is harder to know, u know?) but, that was amazing until now ////////// i didn't saw this 1692296415213.png but i don't think i'm in chapter 9 already too, i didn't saw the thing when a new chapter start, probally, i like to see the walkthrough after i end a chapter u know, to see if i got the better choices
 
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imadumb

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Okay, ima really loving this novel too much right now
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