VN Ren'Py Strong Desire [Ep.7a] [TheBlueInk]

[Peri3481]

I'm not paying for this one so my opinion is worth zero, but if I were, and I downloaded the new update, I'd be pretty hacked off. One dressing room screw and otherwise scene after scene of endless set-up pseudo-corporate chit-chat. A script editor is urgently required.

 

[Tomy75]

MC still owns 66% of everything.
he's just not an Official Part of the company... and i think this competition-thing is to make it all more logical for the public

Maybe, but something is very shady here: why is Diana assigned to help the MC? If I understand correctly, she’s Marvin’s wife right? (Timo called her ‘mom’ and called Marvin ‘dad’) so her best interest is for MC to fail right?

I really enjoy this VN but too many things are unclear and confusing, making it hard to focus on.

 

[JoeTheMC84]

I do a lot of skipping in these games so i lose a lot of the plot but did the dev change Anna's design or are there two different Anna's cause she went from being a brunette to a blond then back to a brunette

It is explained that she and her mother were meeting with someone who owned a salon and so they dyed her hair blond for fun but it just needed to be washed out to go back to normal.

 

[Hungover00]

It is explained that she and her mother were meeting with someone who owned a salon and so they dyed her hair blond for fun but it just needed to be washed out to go back to normal.

The question of 'why' is answered in game, but not out of game. Why change the Anna model at all, the salon visit isn't necessary for the plot, or really anything. What's the upside of that?

 

[motseer]

Damn! Sometimes I read this thread and I have to double check to see if I'm in the right thread. Anna has a few frames of hairdresser slice of life and it's an issue? Gimme a break. Somebody can't see Diana helping MC? Somebody else doesn't understand the need for a power struggle? First, remember the need to keep MC hidden and unaware of his heritage? It's the core of the plot. Remember his Dad being so fearful he ran from it? It's supposed to be something sinister. Remember MC finding some suspicious activities in the corporate banking numbers? Notice the conference table with 4 shifty looking male characters on one side and all the women and MC on the other? There's more than just symbolism going on here... The reader is pretty nearly told, in so many words, that the "contest" is a delaying tactic to provide time to expose the corrupt parties before MC takes over. In the corporate world, having a controlling interest in shares does not 100% guarantee control.

All the information is there in the story... Oh, wait... Am I disregarding all the opinions from those who haven't read it at all or skipped a lot? Hmmm... I guess I would suggest reading it first; then having the conversation.

Jus' Sayin'

 

[kktcross]

The question of 'why' is answered in game, but not out of game. Why change the Anna model at all, the salon visit isn't necessary for the plot, or really anything. What's the upside of that?

prob did custom renders of her with that style as patreon reward and decided to use that model for that scene since he did put time and effort into changing model etc... no idea if it was like that or not i am not supporter but would make sense since he does lot of custom renders on patreon

 

[OWSam000]

Welcome to the plot that you are against the husbands or sons of the women you are fucking and breeding.
You are not only stealing your enemy's wife or mother, but further destroying them in every perspectives.
Really exciting for the final reveal of MC true identity publicly, and the faces of your enemy when they saw their wife and mom pregnant.

 

[TigerWolfe]

It is explained that she and her mother were meeting with someone who owned a salon and so they dyed her hair blond for fun but it just needed to be washed out to go back to normal.

Which I'm 99.9% certain is not how hair color works at all, blonde is subtractive not additive, you can't wash out a bleach job.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

Apparenrly MC has 66% his dad 5% Frank 25%. I think he'll just play along to catch whoever is the traitor in the company, if he takes command now the rat will just keep hidden (hope that kid gets cucked too but idk if he has a gf, sure doesn't look like it but money...), also a good time to takes everyone's wives, winning or lossing he'll be the CEO.

Yeah was thinking the same thing, definately wanna fuck his mom in front of him and knock out his teeth at the same time Like that scene from the game “away from home”

 

[LemonTree 83]

Really exciting for the final reveal of MC true identity publicly, and the faces of your enemy when they saw their wife and mom pregnant.

Now that you mention it....
MC got no family name from the start, right?

And its only during the Conversation with Dad, that you can choose one.... followed by his(?) wish to take over the company with Grandfathers family name.

But i dont think that others than Marvin would be shocked by that reveal, they dont know the history.
Ok, maybe Mr-Gray-douche...

 

[Ramagar]

Yeah, that part confused me. I thought it was a done deal. Now there is a competition?

I am pretty sure that the MC taking over all of Frank's assets is a done deal. However, with that said, I think all of what is going on is to see just who is loyal and who is in it for just the money. Doing the test is one good way to find out who is on whose side so to speak.

I am fairly certain that all the greedy asshats will all side against the MC.

 

[kktcross]

Thanks for the long post. I read it and this is a pretty long answer too, lol. I mean... who knows, others might want to know the answers as well.

I will give some pointers as follows:

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And sorry if there are many other questions or suggestions that I didn't answer here.
Yep, I am fully aware that I apologized more than once. I'm just trying to be nice here.

Cheers

first things first great to see game progressing smoothly last time i played there were only 2 chapters in old style beffore rework well done new models look great

i am currious what plan do you have in mind to make MC suceed in race for CEO position hope is not some cliche investing in tech startup TO THE MOON lol (all startups bleed money as fuck at beggining and have nothing to show after only 6 months) from what you told us about MC in your story he is good at improving existing bussineses so i guess he will take over couple small ones and turn them around with his attention to detail and management skills

only thing that in my opinion needs little more attention are lewd scenes some are quite good (nurse or 3some at clothing store) and some are rushed either short and they miss or there is not enough dirty talk/domination/breeding talk etc.

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lots of devs struggle with writing dialogues nothing wrong with that just need more time and practice you will write banger dialogues eventually i believe in that and i am sure you can find someone who can help you a little here on forum

all in all great so far cant wait for what you have in store for us thanks and have good one

 

[Hungover00]

prob did custom renders of her with that style as patreon reward and decided to use that model for that scene since he did put time and effort into changing model etc... no idea if it was like that or not i am not supporter but would make sense since he does lot of custom renders on patreon

Plausible.

 

[Naruto6]

Strong Desire [v0.5.1.1] Unofficial Android Port + JokerLeader's WT Mod + IC Patch

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Could you please update your android port to the latest version? V0.6A

 

[asahibito]

Updated my Gallery mod for game version Episode 6A.

The mod now features ability to rename and set relationships for the replays.


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[1800 Mr. Tourture]

Kind of disappointed Dr Maggie is white. I understand that her daughter could be mixed race or adopted, but having a black milf would have been a great addition

 

[JenusKudo]

I like this game, but what strikes me are those tattoos on some women. Don't get me wrong, I have tattoos myself, but this is ridiculous. I don't understand why some dev's putting half a body full of idiotic tattoos on women.

Here's the problem... You have tattoo... So you think a little bit of tattoo is ok but the full body tattoo is not ok.... On the other hand, I don't have a tattoo and I consider it a red flag for friendship or relationship

 

[HentaiKami]

I like this game, but what strikes me are those tattoos on some women. Don't get me wrong, I have tattoos myself, but this is ridiculous. I don't understand why some dev's putting half a body full of idiotic tattoos on women.

Because there's people that like that kind of tattoos and the dev wants to cater for those people and themselves. It's not rocket science. We each have our likes and dislikes and it's ok to not like what everyone else likes. No need to disparage other people's taste in things like that.

And i'm saying this as a person who is ambivalent about tattoos, not reason for me to like or dislike someone's looks. Unless the tattoo is intentionally offensive or made by complete amateur and poor quality.

 

[1800 Mr. Tourture]

There's also a few scenes where it focuses on the tattoos, so it's likely they have some important significance. Especially when its only 2 women and they both have similar ones

 

[Dragon1982]

There's also a few scenes where it focuses on the tattoos, so it's likely they have some important significance. Especially when its only 2 women and they both have similar ones

valid point