VN Ren'Py Strong Desire [Ep.7a] [TheBlueInk]

[catnapper]

so does anyone want to tell me how the kid went from owning 70% of the company to literally zero? and his fathers 5% is also apparently gone too? Because apparently the future CEO is awarded 5% Annas family owns 37%, Frank owns 9%, Public owns 25%, and then there's 24% that are owned by the grandfathers friends or whatever. You tried to twist your game to be suspenseful and completely fucked up the math. Unless your saying gramps had to sell off the entire 70% of a multi-billion dollar corporation to pay off debts when he died...which is ludicrous. So the ENTIRETY of his grandfathers 70% controlling interest in a multi-billion dollar megacorporation disappeared...and he now owns NONE of the company.

Edit: ok, now i'm really confused...because they're now talking about his family (him, his mother, and sisters and father) having ownership righrts despite the numbers up above literally saying they own 0% of the company.

There were two wills.
The information from his father came from an old will - the will was changed by the grandfather shortly before his death (the father was not told about this change).
The information Madison gives you is the correct (up to date) information.

One anomaly (about the money) remains, your father tells you that your great-grantfather started the business after the Second World War, but Madison tells you that your family has vast wealth that has been accumulated over centuries (I know they are not incompatible, but it makes it look that your father knows diddly about squat).

 

[FatYoda]

There were two wills.
The information from his father came from an old will - the will was changed by the grandfather shortly before his death (the father was not told about this change).
The information Madison gives you is the correct (up to date) information.

One anomaly (about the money) remains, your father tells you that your great-grantfather started the business after the Second World War, but Madison tells you that your family has vast wealth that has been accumulated over centuries (I know they are not incompatible, but it makes it look that your father knows diddly about squat).

I know about the two wills, i'm just saying they have no reason to include him at all in the CEO race...he owns zero percent of the company. and the fact the dev thought he should just erase the ENTIRE stock portfolio to make this work...its too much. I get it they wanted to add drama and make it a race, but the dev erased the kids entire interest in the company...not just some, or even most...ALL of it. This is a multi-billion dollar corporation that he owned 70% of and they acted like his debts were relatively minor and then suddenly BAM Billions of dollars in stock...all gone. The math is still all wrong anyway because they listed all the stock holders and it added up to 100% and they didn't mention his fathers 5% ownership, and unless his father is a complete moron who can't read his own stock portfolio adn didn't notice that he didn't own any of it for the last 20+ years that 5% is still there.

 

[Nadira]

TLDR; The math ain't mathing.

 

[FatYoda]

also...not sure if someone has mentioned it before, but sex during pregnancy is completely safe in a normal healthy pregnancy and ESPECIALLY that early.

 

[sac812]

so does anyone want to tell me how the kid went from owning 70% of the company to literally zero? and his fathers 5% is also apparently gone too? Because apparently the future CEO is awarded 5% Annas family owns 37%, Frank owns 9%, Public owns 25%, and then there's 24% that are owned by the grandfathers friends or whatever. You tried to twist your game to be suspenseful and completely fucked up the math. Unless your saying gramps had to sell off the entire 70% of a multi-billion dollar corporation to pay off debts when he died...which is ludicrous. So the ENTIRETY of his grandfathers 70% controlling interest in a multi-billion dollar megacorporation disappeared...and he now owns NONE of the company.

Edit: ok, now i'm really confused...because they're now talking about his family (him, his mother, and sisters and father) having ownership righrts despite the numbers up above literally saying they own 0% of the company.

There were two wills.
The information from his father came from an old will - the will was changed by the grandfather shortly before his death (the father was not told about this change).
The information Madison gives you is the correct (up to date) information.

One anomaly (about the money) remains, your father tells you that your great-grantfather started the business after the Second World War, but Madison tells you that your family has vast wealth that has been accumulated over centuries (I know they are not incompatible, but it makes it look that your father knows diddly about squat).

I know about the two wills, i'm just saying they have no reason to include him at all in the CEO race...he owns zero percent of the company. and the fact the dev thought he should just erase the ENTIRE stock portfolio to make this work...its too much. I get it they wanted to add drama and make it a race, but the dev erased the kids entire interest in the company...not just some, or even most...ALL of it. This is a multi-billion dollar corporation that he owned 70% of and they acted like his debts were relatively minor and then suddenly BAM Billions of dollars in stock...all gone. The math is still all wrong anyway because they listed all the stock holders and it added up to 100% and they didn't mention his fathers 5% ownership, and unless his father is a complete moron who can't read his own stock portfolio adn didn't notice that he didn't own any of it for the last 20+ years that 5% is still there.

For what it's worth, during the time I spent editing/revising the script, the "math" is probably the one thing I spent the most time on. I had several conversations with the dev over the course of a couple of weeks trying to make sure I understood his intent, as well as the various machinations occurring behind the scenes. I'm an editor, so I was focused primarily on a coherent story, but I'm also a data analyst IRL and making sure all the numbers added up was and is *very* important to me.

All that said, the situation is inherently confusing by design. There are multiple additional variables that haven't actually been revealed yet, and who's aware of what in terms of MC's and Frank's families does not always line up. Different players are privy to different information and there isn't one character who actually knows *everything*. All I can say is be patient and let things play out. But yes, it's a bit messy and probably requires a little suspension of disbelief. I did the best I could.

unless his father is a complete moron

This aspect was somewhat reduced to context clues in the narrative, but... he pretty much is. The short version is that because of his related childhood trauma, he stays as far away from the "business" side of things -- physically and emotionally -- as he can, which in turn results in a pretty staggering level of ignorance.

 

[sac812]

also...not sure if someone has mentioned it before, but sex during pregnancy is completely safe in a normal healthy pregnancy and ESPECIALLY that early.

Yeah, that part really bothered me, too. I think I actually toned it down from the original script, but I'll have to revisit and see if there's another way I can approach that exchange without impacting plot points/existing renders.

 

[balboa2151]

hello, I don't know if anyone has the answer to my question buuuuuuut, I'm using the 0x52 mod and when I type in harem a bunch of names come up but the names are mostly from Anna's family and other Li's, for instance I am having intimate relationships with both Cho and Emy but they're not in the harem list that comes up, also, the tag says incest and MC and Macy are intimate but they are also not in the harem list, is MC's family already part of the harem automatically since the incest tag is there??? I would appreciate any help. thanks

 

[shamtiiomi]

hello, I don't know if anyone has the answer to my question buuuuuuut, I'm using the 0x52 mod and when I type in harem a bunch of names come up but the names are mostly from Anna's family and other Li's, for instance I am having intimate relationships with both Cho and Emy but they're not in the harem list that comes up, also, the tag says incest and MC and Macy are intimate but they are also not in the harem list, is MC's family already part of the harem automatically since the incest tag is there??? I would appreciate any help. thanks View attachment 4797125

why u use that if already is a wt mod? and btw the choices are pretty easy u fuck them or not.....ur choice...

 

[zeromike]

The game is simply about screwing everything that moves and people are upset about the math? The story is waaaaaaaay out there to begin with. A huge harem of women who seemingly are in some master plan to have the Mc impregnate as many as possible is basically the story. I think I got that right but I haven't played for awhile. I think I liked the game more before the whole "plan" was revealed. Now it doesn't do much for me. The cuckqueen, the company, etc, etc are all pretty silly to begin with. Wait until he adds lesbo and the game will really get dumb.

 

[Lucid Lancer]

The game is simply about screwing everything that moves and people are upset about the math? The story is waaaaaaaay out there to begin with. A huge harem of women who seemingly are in some master plan to have the Mc impregnate as many as possible is basically the story. I think I got that right but I haven't played for awhile. I think I liked the game more before the whole "plan" was revealed. Now it doesn't do much for me. The cuckqueen, the company, etc, etc are all pretty silly to begin with. Wait until he adds lesbo and the game will really get dumb.

Didn't the dev already mentioned that there will be No lesbian content, or am i mistaken? Because that was the main reason i even tried this game, i sincerely hope dev won't go back on their word here.

And as for other things you mentioned i personally don't mind it much, i don't really seek out nor expect fine literature writing when it comes to porn VNs. A decent MC who isn't a fucking doormat and not forcing the fetish down the player's throat, is good enough for me.

 

[Lynava]

I still can't understand how people can't like girl on girl.....

 

[zeromike]

I still can't understand how people can't like girl on girl.....

It's simple, because it's just simping in lieu of being a cuck. There is no difference between when two women fucking behind your back vs some dude fucking behind your back except the lack of a dick. The threesome etc are just poly crap as well. I still don't understand why men who are always crying for porn-like content just don't go watch porn. Lesbian obsession is common on F95 simply because most men are simps and cucks. That's why you don't understand why some men don't like it.

 

[Lynava]

It's simple, because it's just simping in lieu of being a cuck. There is no difference between when two women fucking behind your back vs some dude fucking behind your back except the lack of a dick. The threesome etc are just poly crap as well. I still don't understand why men who are always crying for porn-like content just don't go watch porn. Lesbian obsession is common on F95 simply because most men are simps and cucks. That's why you don't understand why some men don't like it.

I like lesbian content because there's no guys in it, you know. I don't like guys, so why would I watch them?

 

[zeromike]

I like lesbian content because there's no guys in it, you know. I don't like guys, so why would I watch them?

lol well if you are female and a lesbian then it's really a non-issue isn't it? What does that have to do with why men obsess about them? IF you're a guy who only likes when women fuck than you have other issues. I play the game for me not to watch other people do stuff. For me it's really about the story. Lesbians in a male MC game always turn the story into a poly game. It's not a harem once women start sleeping with other women. That doesn't even consider when women are doing it behind the MC's back which is straight NTR. NTR is about cheating not dicks so that is one of the reasons why I can't stand the whole lesbo thing. Again if you're a female and a lesbo than the comment doesn't even apply to you. Knock yourself out to your heart's content lol.

 

[zeromike]

Didn't the dev already mentioned that there will be No lesbian content, or am i mistaken? Because that was the main reason i even tried this game, i sincerely hope dev won't go back on their word here.

And as for other things you mentioned i personally don't mind it much, i don't really seek out nor expect fine literature writing when it comes to porn VNs. A decent MC who isn't a fucking doormat and not forcing the fetish down the player's throat, is good enough for me.

I saw a poll recently about whether it would be added or would be optional or would simply be left out. Maybe it's an old poll but I just assumed it would show up for the easy content if the dev was even open to adding it. I could be responding to an old poll I suppose.

 

[jamming10001]

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[shamtiiomi]

It's simple, because it's just simping in lieu of being a cuck. There is no difference between when two women fucking behind your back vs some dude fucking behind your back except the lack of a dick. The threesome etc are just poly crap as well. I still don't understand why men who are always crying for porn-like content just don't go watch porn. Lesbian obsession is common on F95 simply because most men are simps and cucks. That's why you don't understand why some men don't like it.

yeah well cheating is cheating,but there is a diference ,....no dick doesnt mean isnt cheating but it means that the cuck in you is not asit peaks...

 

[MrDude1977]

It's simple, because it's just simping in lieu of being a cuck. There is no difference between when two women fucking behind your back vs some dude fucking behind your back except the lack of a dick. The threesome etc are just poly crap as well. I still don't understand why men who are always crying for porn-like content just don't go watch porn. Lesbian obsession is common on F95 simply because most men are simps and cucks. That's why you don't understand why some men don't like it.

I agree i really don't get the whole lesbian fetish on this site and most Harem stories seems like that's their go to thing to make a Harem make sense. When in reality it doesn't make sense because then it isn't a Harem anymore it's a poly relationship. IMO Harem is fantasy any way why do they need to try and make sense of it? I may be a Hypocrite but i don't like my women in my Harem to sleep with anybody but me even though i'm screwing everybody lol. I've had discussions with ppl saying it's not fair for the women or they say well what are they suppose to do during a threesome "twiddle their thumbs" I'm like no they can sit on my face lol. I mean i get it ppl have different fetishes but dang don't shove it down our throats in every Harem story.

 

[MrDude1977]

Didn't the dev already mentioned that there will be No lesbian content, or am i mistaken? Because that was the main reason i even tried this game, i sincerely hope dev won't go back on their word here.

And as for other things you mentioned i personally don't mind it much, i don't really seek out nor expect fine literature writing when it comes to porn VNs. A decent MC who isn't a fucking doormat and not forcing the fetish down the player's throat, is good enough for me.

From what i understand there was 2 different writers and the one that promised no Lesbian content is no longer writing. And the writer now is trying to push for Lesbian content. I use to be a patreon and from what i seen in Patreon most of the ppl there either says they don't care as long as it is avoidable or they don't want it, very few ppl say they wanted it so IMO it's really the Dev that's pushing for it, he says he'll do a poll to see if it get's added later. I think he's hoping to add more Patreons if he puts lesbian content in. TBH i think it's a waste of time because most of the Patreons he has only support him because when he first started this project he said no Lesbian content, More and more people are like me and is getting tired of the Lesbian content being added to Harem stories and that's why people have started to support him, because lets be honest the story is not really that good. I mean it's not terrible but I was willing to support a dev that finally has the guts to say NO i'm not adding Lesbian/Bi content. But now? I don't know i hope the poll tells him to shove it on the Lesbian content. I find it funny he disabled the comment section that announced the possiblity of lesbian content. I'm pretty sure it's because ppl was complaining about it. lol

 

[redoubt27]

yeah well cheating is cheating,but there is a diference ,....no dick doesnt mean isnt cheating but it means that the cuck in you is not asit peaks...

finally, a rational mind...

Yes, cheating is cheating, but by 'literal' definition, a female can't 'cuck' you...she ain't male and can't get your woman pregnant.

I try not to get into the mind of those who don't enjoy seeing two or more hot women get it on, but when I consider it, I get it. They don't want their woman with no one else but them.
But why settle for one scoop of your favorite ice cream when you can have two, or more...

As for lesbian content in this game, make it optional, problem solved.
If someone is so hard-core anti-lesbian they don't support the product because there's optional content, well, that's their choice, but what a poor unfortunate, miserable soul...

I'm 100% pro-lesbian content, as long as the women involved are hot...
And let me watch and eventually get involved...