VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Book 1 Steam] [STWAdev]

[maroek]

she spies mc having sex with 1 of other girls.

That's Vi and Ines' room so I assume Valentine and Vi are having sex.

No. Valentine is actually quite intelligent, and it is an important reveal in the story that he has been playing up the "dumb jock" stereotype in his career choices largely because that is what is expected of him, not because that is who he actually is. And McNab never gave off "dangerous" vibes even for a second. He actually embodies the "patient father" role in how he interacts with the group, and in how he stopped Valentine from getting revenge over Zaina's death. Neither of them are aggressive at all outside of the ring, or combat, where it is totally appropriate for them to do so.



Again, not even close. Vi's family issues stem from her brother's abandonment of her after they lost their parents, and the way he isolated her from Valentine (hiding his letters, etc). Her brother's death was actually more of a relief to her than a traumatic experience. And you're leaving out the dog attack and physical scars that are Vi's true trauma. Those are what often cause her to become paralyzed and unable to function. Ignoring that major event in her life is very strange. And revealing perhaps in its omission, because it was a situation where Valentine's physical strength, courage, and assertiveness, likely saved Vi's life from a dangerous animal. That kind of masculinity is seen as very positive and desirable in the eyes of the opposite sex, as that particular threat proves.

The one-sided and pejorative narratives you suggest are simply too forced to be believed. They don't fit the events of the story, or the characterizations, and they fall into a hypoagency vs hyperagency trap for each sex that is honestly insulting.

At this point I'm pretty cerain that McNab is gay, and probably have a thing for Valentine, and having sex with his agent. And I am not sold on the cause of Vi's scars is dog attack. Remember there was no dogs around while she, Ines, and Valentine were going to home, from the Vet Centre. Yet she saw the crowd and froze. I believe Valentine saved her form a gang assault. He wouldn't have ended up with cuffs in a police station for killing an animal. He also had gotten prosecuted and ended up in the military, which wasn't by choice. Which means he was sentenced, though mitigated in defense of another.
And Valentine is definitely playing dumb, when he actually is quite smart. He's just giving people what they expect from him, while he gets away with shit like his Casanova persona and being literally a mass murderer, and stay emotionally detached.

BTW, I have a hunch that Elspeth (my favourite girl) is somehow behind Davis killing Zaina.

P.S This is the most fulfilling story and my favourite adult game off all-time. I would've become patron if I had the means, even though updates are way too far between.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Remember there was no dogs around while she, Ines, and Valentine were going to home, from the Vet Centre. Yet she saw the crowd and froze.

There actually was a large dog in the crowd, It's easy to miss but it is there.
But, I don't think she was attacked by a dog only, in chapter 6 he is interrogated by police and the detective said something about another dude who is in the hospital and not in a shape to talk(besides from Vi) and Valentine had bruised knuckles, so I don't think it's only a dog, perhaps some asshole dog owner was part of it too.

 

[maroek]

There actually was a large dog in the crowd, It's easy to miss but it is there.
But, I don't think she was attacked by a dog only, in chapter 6 he is interrogated by police and the detective said something about another dude who is in the hospital and not in a shape to talk(besides from Vi) and Valentine had bruised knuckles, so I don't think it's only a dog, perhaps some asshole dog owner was part of it too.

Oh, yeah. Right behind the guy with a package.
But Vi's scars don't look like from a dog bite. Chin, maybe but how can a dog bite you on the abdomen, almost perfectly straight, like a scar from appendicitis surgery?

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Oh, yeah. Right behind the guy with a package.
But Vi's scars don't look like from a dog bite. Chin, maybe but how can a dog bite you on the abdomen, almost perfectly straight, like a scar from appendicitis surgery?

Dogs do have claws too. Jump on someone bite, claw, maul etc. so nothing off with the scars.
Until the story outright say the scars from a dog attack I'll be sceptical because it looks too much like a red herring but it is the most plausible explanation so far.

 

[maroek]

Dogs do have claws too. Jump on someone bite, claw, maul etc. so nothing off with the scars.
Until the story outright say the scars from a dog attack I'll be sceptical because it looks too much like a red herring but it is the most plausible explanation so far.

Claws cause parallel cuts, not a single one and dog nails are blunt. The can't cut deep even if you try to hold the dog's paw and try to stab one with it. You'd only end up breaking the paw bones.

I really think you are confusing dogs with bears. I mean, mauling? Really? Are you sure that you know what a dog is?

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Claws cause parallel cuts, not a single one and dog nails are blunt. The can't cut deep even if you try to hold the dog's paw and try to stab one with it. You'd only end up breaking the paw bones.

I really think you are confusing dogs with bears. I mean, mauling? Really? Are you sure that you know what a dog is?

verb
verb: maul; 3rd person present: mauls; past tense: mauled; past participle: mauled; gerund or present participle: mauling

1. (of an animal) wound (a person or animal) by scratching and tearing.

Maul is a correct word.

Their nails are blunt only if it has proper care. I am not sure what type of fragile dogs you are talking about but dogs are extremely dangerous animals, I saw irl what they capable of. Paw bones won't break that easily and the scars does not look like stab wound. Only thing make sense what you said is parallel cuts but they are not fresh wounds, there is a possibility that only single deeper cut left mark.

So let me reverse the question, are you sure that you know what a dog is? Maybe you are confusing dogs with chicks.

 

[maroek]

verb
verb: maul; 3rd person present: mauls; past tense: mauled; past participle: mauled; gerund or present participle: mauling

1. (of an animal) wound (a person or animal) by scratching and tearing.

Maul is a correct word.

Their nails are blunt only if it has proper care. I am not sure what type of fragile dogs you are talking about but dogs are extremely dangerous animals, I saw irl what they capable of. Paw bones won't break that easily and the scars does not look like stab wound. Only thing make sense what you said is parallel cuts but they are not fresh wounds, there is a possibility that only single deeper cut left mark.

So let me reverse the question, are you sure that you know what a dog is? Maybe you are confusing dogs with chicks.

Well, I had some dogs (and cats) in the past like Rottweiler and a full-blooded Kangal etc. and never ever in my life have I seen a dog attacking with its paws. Dogs have paw, not claws.

And, no! A dog's nails will always be blunt unless their human does something in the range of animal cruelty, like not letting it ever walk and in that case never trim its nails. A cat can cut you deep to make you bleed even if you cut its nails but a dog can't no matter what.

Maul isn't the correct word when you're talking about canids.

 

[Lathe29]

Dude played too much World of Warcraft and thinks maul is a bear specific attack.

Its a game, dude's using the assets available. I wouldn't dig too deep in to what the scars look like.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Maul isn't the correct word when you're talking about canids.

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Here a few news channels that used maul for dog attacks, I think you should let them know they used wrong verb.

Dogs have paw, not claws.

Humans have hands, not fingers.

Did you know that claws and nails aren't the same thing? They're not, and dogs have claws. Here are some of the differences between the two structures and some other interesting facts about dogs' claws.
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Claws perform jobs for those that have them. In some animals, claws are meant for digging or climbing. In others, like dogs, they're meant for grabbing and holding onto prey. Our human nails can't do those things nearly as well.

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[maroek]

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Here a few news channel that used maul for dog attacks, I think you should let them they used wrong verb.

Ever heard of metaphors?

I am done responding to your butthurt.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Ever heard of metaphors?

I am done responding to your butthurt.

 

[SerHawkes]

I'm hoping to break her in properly. But how Vi reacts will be interesting to see.

Vi will either...

Die interally and play it off, saying good for Ines.
Kill us and cut off our dick.
Want in on the action next go round, with Amrit also wanting to tag team.

 

[ThorinKing]

Well, I had some dogs (and cats) in the past like Rottweiler and a full-blooded Kangal etc. and never ever in my life have I seen a dog attacking with its paws. Dogs have paw, not claws.

And, no! A dog's nails will always be blunt unless their human does something in the range of animal cruelty, like not letting it ever walk and in that case never trim its nails. A cat can cut you deep to make you bleed even if you cut its nails but a dog can't no matter what.

Maul isn't the correct word when you're talking about canids.

"Maul" is appropriate for any animal. Even human.

It's also a form of hammer used in combat and for driving wedges for splitting wood. But, you'd need to have a functional brain and an IQ within at least five points of the number used for this forum to likely know that.

 

[MF_DOOM]

maybe but how can a dog bite you on the abdomen

Maybe she fell down and cut herself, or it's just a design flaw.

Either way, The police interrogation in chapter 6 doesn't fit with just a dog attack.

 

[Monetka_]

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[McGreed]

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[Monetka_]

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[SerHawkes]

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Literally the most over rated of the girls... Yall make me sick.

 

[Canto Forte]

Literal supreme commander for this house and of MC and of his trainer and of everyone we know .. you better get used to being her minion, gamer.

Literally the most over rated of the girls... Yall make me sick.

MC migth be retired, but he is in reserves and she runs him still.

 

[MF_DOOM]

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No title screen this week, keeping it brief
As of writing 2256 renders are posed, with about 2247 finished rendering. Been decently smooth sailing as I move into the back third or so of the update.
Animation tweaks have been going well as I wait on renders. But not much on this end otherwise.
That's it today, nothing fun or interesting so just dropping in quick.
Thank you as always for the support. I hope you have a lovely rest of your week.
Sláinte!