VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Book 1 Steam] [STWAdev]

[cxx]

The "obsession with MC" has actually started since Part 1, in my opinion. Elspeth found in MC a life partner, and she is not going to let him go.

well she has to learn to share.

 

[JJJ84]

well she has to learn to share.

Well, she is doing that (given her reaction to MC revealing he fucked V), at least until things become official between her and MC.

And it's almost a certainty we'll need to make a choice between all these LIs (given dev's previous game, we had to make a choice for the definitive LI) it's more likely more and more these LIs will not be okay with sharing anymore, with more Chapters of the game go past.

 

[arkypoub]

Which is why I said it. Dude. Comprehension skills. I expect people here not be, like, 5 years old. Dude.

Tried it and doesn't work for this version.

Why trying something which is not updated dude (you seem to love this word)? And btw, it works. It's just not updated. Comprehension skills, etc... Anyway welcome in my BL. Oh and please, don't DL it when it will be updated. You wouldn't want to dl the work done by a child, would you?

 

[maroek]

He just fought last update. MMA fighters don't fight every other day, there's months between matches.

And you think this game is going day-to-day?

Plus we need to build up the tension between MC and the ex con for their fight. No point having an intro like that and rushing into it.

Well, that was hinted earlier, in the 5th update if i recall. Though, I'd do it right after Valentine put one of the belts on his waist, if I were doing it. Going against the toughest matchup he ever had would've been much more climactic right after he became the champion.

Nobody is doing 4k renders and animations in a month, nobody at all.

who needs a fucking 4k anyways? A proper HD is all 99% of us are looking for.

I had to start over from scratch, again, I only played Elspeth's path, but I liked it, I really liked seeing how much Elspeth loves Valentine, she loves him much more than I expected, and seeing how happy she is with him made me happy too.

Good update, I'm happy, I'm not interested in anyone else, and after seeing Elspeth in this update, I won't even consider doing a gameplay focused on another girl, I would feel very guilty.
If you haven't played it yet, leave Elspeth for last, play the other girls' paths first!

The animations are horrible, but I never liked the animations in this game, I only comment on that because it was mentioned above.

Something to report:
The whole scene of her blinking was with this on the screen, even with her blinking working.
I don't know if the dev usually visits the thread, so someone report it later.
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We are in total agreement. I knew Els was the go to LI in this game from the moment I saw her, and even though I still expect her to be involved with, probably giving the order personally, Zaina's death. I think that would be the last straw of Valentine's demise. I already have so many scripts on how this AVN can end, and most of them end with Valentine's death.

 

[POVREVIEW]

I want my LI to be the car it seems like the easiest to please

 

[Walter Victor]

Well, she is doing that (given her reaction to MC revealing he fucked V), at least until things become official between her and MC.

And it's almost a certainty we'll need to make a choice between all these LIs (given dev's previous game, we had to make a choice for the definitive LI) it's more likely more and more these LIs will not be okay with sharing anymore, with more Chapters of the game go past.

Perhaps, but the developer has stated (back near the beginning of the game) that there will be at least 2 throuples.

Your guess is as good as mine as to which girls will be included in any of them.

 

[lorkdubo]

Perhaps, but the developer has stated (back near the beginning of the game) that there will be at least 2 throuples.

Your guess is as good as mine as to which girls will be included in any of them.

I thought Ines and Vi as a guaranteed throuple, which could still be but there is no concrete proof in game. Now, on the other hand, i can almost guarantee an Elspeth and Vi throuple given the amount of thirst between them and the game jabbing at us about them.

 

[JJJ84]

He just fought last update. MMA fighters don't fight every other day, there's months between matches.

And you think this game is going day-to-day?

Not to mention with fighters, there's different factors involved which may extend those months intervals in between matches, such as injuries, all the other fighters already getting matchups (so noone available for the fighter to fight at this moment), and others.
That could be 3 months, 5 months or even longer, depending on the situation.

Heck, take Michael Chandler for example.
Dude literally waited around 2 years (longingly lol) for Conor for their fight, only for Conor to pull out of their fight the last moment due to toe injury

 

[Bombmaster]

Walter Victor
I have a feeling that Vi and Ines is going to be the throuple esque.
My second choice would be kana+Amrit.
lorkdubo
Els dont share tho.
but maybe somehow Vi enter two different throuples, seems too much...

 

[lorkdubo]

Walter Victor
I have a feeling that Vi and Ines is going to be the throuple esque.
My second choice would be kana+Amrit.
lorkdubo
Els dont share tho.
but maybe somehow Vi enter two different throuples, seems too much...

There are those "interesting girls" points, though. The one I can see as a solo route is Kana.

 

[JJJ84]

I thought Ines and Vi as a guaranteed throuple, which could still be but there is no concrete proof in game. Now, on the other hand, i can almost guarantee an Elspeth and Vi throuple given the amount of thirst between them and the game jabbing at us about them.

Vi & Ines I could see as a good possibility.

Not so sure about Els & Vi though.
This update showed that both are incredibly possessive towards MC & see each other as a huge competition (something that Amrit doesn't seem to have with either of them).
And while there was a line from Els saying (iirc) "I could eat her (V) up." in her dialogue with MC and her congratulating V for MC shagging her, that effect I feels cancels out with Els saying "I'll make him mine. (and I don't interpret that as sharing lol)" & V saying "I won't lose to her (Els)." etc

But I guess only time will tell.

 

[JJJ84]

Walter Victor
I have a feeling that Vi and Ines is going to be the throuple esque.
My second choice would be kana+Amrit.
lorkdubo
Els dont share tho.
but maybe somehow Vi enter two different throuples, seems too much...

While Amrit has a good relationship with Kana and is her fan, I think they have more of a mentor & student like relationship than a couple.
After the update, I think following could be possible throuples;

- Vi & Ines
- Amrit & Ines (these two have gotten really close and cozy in this update)

I think Els & Kana will remain solo exclusive paths.

There are those "interesting girls" points, though. The one I can see as a solo route is Kana.

I remember seeing those points when using KoGa's WT mod in the past, but he now stopped working on the mod so there's no way to check.
I do definitely remember Amrit having the "interested in girls" points though, but as for the rest I dunno.

But I think just one or 2 throuple options should be enough.
Any more than that, and I think it may become overkill.

 

[Bucketbot89]

I know it's never going to happen, but I personally would like to see the throuple paths given to the side girls, Serena/Katie, or the two ring girls, for example.

Although echoing everybody else, I think Vi/Ines is all but a lock.

 

[maroek]

Not to mention with fighters, there's different factors involved which may extend those months intervals in between matches, such as injuries, all the other fighters already getting matchups (so noone available for the fighter to fight at this moment), and others.
That could be 3 months, 5 months or even longer, depending on the situation.

Heck, take Michael Chandler for example.
Dude literally waited around 2 years (longingly lol) for Conor for their fight, only for Conor to pull out of their fight the last moment due to toe injury

You are missing the fact that the game jumped from Christmas to early spring at best, almost instantly. Creative works like books, movies, games are not real time. Apart from 24, and some others.

 

[Joint311]

I chose the black outfit for Kana, but she is still in the white one is this a bug or is there anyother variable that i'm not aware of?

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[Dark Silence]

- Amrit & Ines (these two have gotten really close and cozy in this update)

Hopefully not too close. I'm on Amrit solo path.

 

[GeoffG]

I thought Ines and Vi as a guaranteed throuple, which could still be but there is no concrete proof in game. Now, on the other hand, i can almost guarantee an Elspeth and Vi throuple given the amount of thirst between them and the game jabbing at us about them.

It's clearly going to be Ines and Amrit. They've had a flirty twosome vibe going since the start

 

[Krytax123]

I chose the black outfit for Kana, but she is still in the white one is this a bug or is there anyother variable that i'm not aware of?

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She even explains it to you in the scene bro, she said that's (the black one if you have chosen it) is the new Kana Hojo outfit but for this evening she called herself something else and was anonymous (thats why she choose a different, the white, outfit).

About the throuple discussions: I cant see a throuple involving Els AT ALL. Even if she would like it (she doesnt) , its not really possible considering her status and everything, she isnt a "free" college gal, shes the heir of a massive legacy which seems to be very important to her (her responsibility, not the status).

Kana/Amrit and Vi/Ines may be possible.

 

[Joint311]

She even explains it to you in the scene bro, she said that's (the black one if you have chose it) is the new Kana Hojo outfit but for this evening she called herself something else and was anonymous (thats why she choose a different, the white, outfit).

About the throuple discussions: I cant see a throuple involving Els AT ALL. Even if she would like it (she doesnt) , its not really possible considering her status and everything, she isnt a "free" college gal, shes the heir of a massive legacy which seems to be very important to her (her responsibility, not the status).

Kana/Amrit and Vi/Ines may be possible.

well that was embarrasing... i kinda didnd't pay atention at it but after replaying it i feel like a dumbass

 

[JJJ84]

You are missing the fact that the game jumped from Christmas to early spring at best, almost instantly. Creative works like books, movies, games are not real time. Apart from 24, and some others.

lol and you're missing my point that sometimes fighters may go extensive periods without fights.
There's fighters who are constantly active and fights frequently (like 3 or 4 times a year), whereas there are also fighters who fight much much less like once or twice per year, it depends on the fighter).

So why does it even matter that MC didn't have a fight in this chapter?
There's nothing guaranteeing or implying that MC is one of those most active fighters.
Nor did the dev make a promise saying "there will be a fight every chapter" lol

So even with the game jumping from Christmas to early Spring as you said, I see no issue with it.
And even if he's an active fighter, I just don't see this as that big of an issue that you seem to be making it out to be (shrugs)

The Fights will come with the Tourney when the dev feels it's ready; and as Ava said before, I have a feeling this is intentional to build up MC vs Marshman fight, & to have it coincide with Amrit and the current champion fight.
There's no point in just having a fight in just for the sake of it when it serves no purpose in the story without building things up.

Not to mention, while MMA is a big part of MC's life, it's not the only thing going on with him.
The center he works at, not to mention the relationship with the girls (like supporting Kana with her return), it's all gotta be balanced.

I'm kinda getting the impression that you're expecting a fight in every chapter, but I highly doubt that will actually be the case with this one.
My guess is, we'll either have one or, perhaps two at most fights for MC before the game finishes.