VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

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Ragnar

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You may not realise that I wrote this just to exaggerate, it is completely understandable.

The last time I saw someone who could make such a logic was in a kindergarten.
I guessed Els wasn't a virgin, but I didn't think she would have the experience of a porn star.
It was like Mc was fucking any slut, no feeling at all.
Frankly, it was a complete fiasco for me.
Yeah, you calll her a slut and the ones at fault here are those who point out that your take on the character is stupid.
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Vopeco

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Give me my Amrit&Vi path and I'll be as happy as clam. :giggle:
I don't think I'd mind that tbh, I usually just want monogamous routes but I care about both of them a lot and don't want to hurt either given they have the longest and deepest friendships/connections to the MC. My only problem with Amrit is that god awful belly button tattoo, the other tattoos look fine but that one is a bit much. Other than that she's just too adorable.
 

tydog99

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Really good update, especially for Els content, but not really a fan of the lewd animations. They look so different from the regular renders that it throws it off a bit. I don't remember the animations looking that way in previous chapters.
 
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Jericho85

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Really good update, especially for Els content, but not really a fan of the lewd animations. They look so different from the regular renders that it throws it off a bit. I don't remember the animations looking that way in previous chapters.
If we're being honest, the animations are kind of a weak point for this VN. Lots of unnatural body movements. The Kana scene in the last update was particularly bad with body physics as well as the Katie scene.

The static renders are fantastic though. I didn't didn't really like Ines much at first, but that french booty has won me over.
 

Mr. Muscles

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yeah and she was a soldier, not unheard of in the military that people are fucking when there is nothing else to do
You guys come up with the most interesting responses when you could just have said: Human beings are horny.

Some folks here must wander outside (maybe?) and wonder if every girl they walk by is a virgin.
 
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MF_DOOM

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If we're being honest, the animations are kind of a weak point for this VN. Lots of unnatural body movements. The Kana scene in the last update was particularly bad with body physics as well as the Katie scene.

The static renders are fantastic though. I didn't didn't really like Ines much at first, but that french booty has won me over.
Yup, I have to agree with this one, the VI boob job also was a bad one IMO.
 

SonsOfLiberty

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Compressed version? I can't spend 7Gb on for one update or is there any only update file?
Did you try using search for either? Because both are posted. Set your search settings to most recent, that way most recent compressed/update only show up earlier...they are both on page 137....
 
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misfolk

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The static renders are fantastic though.
There was one hilariously bad render in this update: Valentine and Amrit running through the streets of London. No shadows and a weird angle.

Oh, and in one of the renders in the club McNab miraculously grew a flattop.
 
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Bmagada

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my take is Els could compartmentalize emotions from just sex.

passive agressive cope
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And she would hook up with a random guy if she was horny, But never waking next to him in the morning,
or giving kisses in the kitchen. A women can have a past and still be a boss. If the writing make sense.
I can counter this by saying the one thing she keeps hammering home is she wants a partner and she seems to get a better release by fighting people. She needed to get into that fight on the beach. Its not that she couldn't just go bang people and not feel guilty, but it works counter to her goal of having someone understand her and be her partner and shes extremely goals orientated. Extremely and her goal is a match. I mean besides her weird competitive streak that works counter to those goals. It even undermines her intelligence a bit. A lot of her bravado and trying to be in control is a wall. She doesn't do things because shes just badass or a boss, she needs to be seen that way. In control all the time. She wouldn't even get drunk with the rest of them and she needed to be sober when she finally slept with him. A lot of this VN is going deep into the idiosyncrasies of these women and I'm betting something really bad happened to or around her and she had zero control over it.

I did find it funny she tried doing dick measuring with a guy that was a boots on the ground tier operator, especially with what happened with his woman. A solid military tradition. She does sound exactly like the intel people we deployed with in Iraq....."I saw something in a file or a video so I've seen more" types. She might have seen some shit, but our fair MC had his fingers in it. She sees it as a bragging point, he clearly doesn't. She says her clearance let her see more. Its not like she doesn't have reason to be full of herself without it, but quoting a close friend, shits different when its on your face and you can taste it, you were granted permission to look into the grinder and we were thrust into it.
 
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Bombmaster

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I can counter this by saying the one thing she keeps hammering home is she wants a partner and she seems to get a better release by fighting people. She needed to get into that fight on the beach. Its not that she couldn't just go bang people and not feel guilty, but it works counter to her goal of having someone understand her and be her partner and shes extremely goals orientated. Extremely and her goal is a match. I mean besides her weird competitive streak that works counter to those goals. It even undermines her intelligence a bit. A lot of her bravado and trying to be in control is a wall. She doesn't do things because shes just badass or a boss, she needs to be seen that way. In control all the time. She wouldn't even get drunk with the rest of them and she needed to be sober when she finally slept with him. A lot of this VN is going deep into the idiosyncrasies of these women and I'm betting something really bad happened to or around her and she had zero control over it.

I did find it funny she tried doing dick measuring with a guy that was a boots on the ground tier operator, especially with what happened with his woman. A solid military tradition. She does sound exactly like the intel people we deployed with in Iraq....."I saw something in a file or a video so I've seen more" types. She might have seen some shit, but our fair MC had his fingers in it. She sees it as a bragging point, he clearly doesn't. She says her clearance let her see more. Its not like she doesn't have reason to be full of herself without it, but quoting a close friend, shits different when its on your face and you can taste it, you were granted permission to look into the grinder and we were thrust into it.
Your points are good. Just expressing my opinion about if she was going to have a fling would be a one time off, out of the grid no stakes. I do concur about her need for a equal partner, better yet equal in her own judgment. Because I feel she is colder and ruthless. Playing in the infamy route hearing your own thoughts about her is interesting.
 

RoryTate

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I did find it funny she tried doing dick measuring with a guy that was a boots on the ground tier operator, especially with what happened with his woman. A solid military tradition. She does sound exactly like the intel people we deployed with in Iraq....."I saw something in a file or a video so I've seen more" types. She might have seen some shit, but our fair MC had his fingers in it.
This observation reminds me a bit of the Dunning-Kruger effect, but for trauma. Many people aren't familiar with the actual D-K paper, and don't realize that while it shows that people who are less familiar with a subject tend to overestimate their ability or understanding of it, the paper also observes that people who are objectively considered experts in a subject will tend to downplay or doubt their own abilities. So while Els talks at length about her experiences (though she doesn't give any specifics) to present the idea that she is an expert about wartime trauma and atrocities, MC instead stays quiet and perhaps doesn't fully realize the large gap in their understanding of the subject. Or maybe "familiarity with the subject" is the more appropriate description here, because direct personal experience doesn't always mean that a broad understanding of something has been gained. That still requires analysis and thought after the fact.

Of course, this all assumes that the source of both Els and MC's mental challenges is just the bad memories they carry, and that's a bit simplistic of a diagnosis I think. It may sound strange to say, but I've seen some recent talk that PTSD has less to do with "trauma", and more to do with – in the case of veterans entering civilian life at least – being cut off from a high-functioning, high-trust, highly goal-oriented environment. That's a bit of a long discussion that doesn't belong in this thread though, so I'll just say that I wouldn't be surprised if MC, Els, and others in the Veterans Centre will find a lot of healing by reforming those "high-trust" conditions and simply being part of something bigger than themselves. And sport – like MMA – can often be a strong substitute for that military environment, since you have to rely on a very close-knit team to succeed, and the outcome is clear, with high stakes. So MC's passion about fighting makes a lot of sense, since it is likely very much a way for him to heal and rediscover that strong sense of purpose that he has lost.
 
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