- Jul 15, 2017
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Personal headcanon: MC and MILF are son and mother. Mother's cheating husband is MC's stepfather. Makes all the dialog flow nicely.But when you set Helen's relationship to Mom there is a sentence."It is something between me and my husband..."
I find that kind of weird, it fits not so well.
You set the relationship at the beginning. No patch necessary, especially since it's such a short story.This sounds like it needs a patch