Kinda feels like the grammar is getting worse and worse by the update. Stick4Luck , I get that you're not a native English speaker so I know it's not something you can just fix on a whim. But we're well into the second game now, and I would assume you'd want to at least attempt to improve on it over time. There are many scenes where I can barely even figure out what they're trying to say, it often gets really close to just being gibberish.
I've loved Succubus Contract since the first game and it has the potential to be amazing, but it really needs some serious proofreading because it does get ridiculous sometimes. Even when it's not completely unintelligible, it still reads like it was written by someone in elementary school which really detracts from how hot many of the scenes could be.
I end up rewriting nearly every single line of dialogue in my head because of it, at which point I'm basically just playing a glorified digital picture book instead of a VN. Which is a shame, because I wasn't lying when I said it has the potential to be amazing.
Also, it was a bit disappointing to see there's no option to let that lockerroom shower scene continue, kinda sucks that it gets interrupted no matter what you do. Oh, and the BDSM club photoshoot (with Averia), would've been so much better if it had ended with a cumshot, as well as when the MC services the two clients while working at the club. Missed opportunity to not have those scenes end on a high note if you ask me.
Wasn't the point of the futa path that the MC needs to swallow cum (or a pill, yes) in order to keep her pussy? Seems like a pretty good reason to have those scenes end with a bit more of a climax than what we saw here, and definitely more interesting than seeing her take a pill.
I've loved Succubus Contract since the first game and it has the potential to be amazing, but it really needs some serious proofreading because it does get ridiculous sometimes. Even when it's not completely unintelligible, it still reads like it was written by someone in elementary school which really detracts from how hot many of the scenes could be.
I end up rewriting nearly every single line of dialogue in my head because of it, at which point I'm basically just playing a glorified digital picture book instead of a VN. Which is a shame, because I wasn't lying when I said it has the potential to be amazing.
Also, it was a bit disappointing to see there's no option to let that lockerroom shower scene continue, kinda sucks that it gets interrupted no matter what you do. Oh, and the BDSM club photoshoot (with Averia), would've been so much better if it had ended with a cumshot, as well as when the MC services the two clients while working at the club. Missed opportunity to not have those scenes end on a high note if you ask me.
Wasn't the point of the futa path that the MC needs to swallow cum (or a pill, yes) in order to keep her pussy? Seems like a pretty good reason to have those scenes end with a bit more of a climax than what we saw here, and definitely more interesting than seeing her take a pill.
