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Please keep the spam low. People have questions and don't want to scroll forever to find useful comments.
I think Zion could also do well with improved writing. I don't expect Shakesperean literary devices of course, but I think in the future updates he should go back and fix some typos and grammar while also making upgrades to the flavour of writing.
I'm kinda confused. I played the ch 3 demo version and haven't played since. I forgot about the objective, can anyone tell me what to do?
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I think the flavor will be a natural thing. I believe I got better at writing in the latest releases.
And about misspellings, I don't know what to say, Because this is what I do:
-I type in my e-mail, because there is one of the best online grammar correctors out there. It can easily catch things like then/them/than or though/thought.
-Then I send for Inez, who proofread everything.
-Then after it's include in the game, part of the team is dedicated to find misspellings. Which I correct before the final release.
I think some misspellings are unavoidable considering how much I write. The game will probably be 30h long by the end, if a person plays it for the first time.
I played the game since the beginning and i am very impressed with how much It has improved. I was only a bit unsatisfied with rafflesia, she was very hyped for a long time in the game, but when I saw the only scene i was disappointed. I expected something more than only a footjob. I was also hyped by the fact that duchess was said to have 3 scenes, seing only One was not what i expected.
This said it was a very good release, keep It up zion
This said it was a very good release, keep It up zion
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I'm not a native speaker myself and often have to use a dictionary to check if I spelled specific words correctly. Ofc when it comes to build up a sentence with proper grammar a tool can only get you so far.
But as long as it doesn't look like it's completely machine translated from japanese to english I can live with a few spelling mistakes or a little messed up sentences. I won't be the one who writes a novel about line 912 has those mistakes and line 500 is total crap because I'm not always sure if I'm right with my suspicion and yeah... if you can afford a native speaker to proofread your work or stick to your little tool to keep the standards up... do it.^^
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Don't worry, that was only a teaser hahahahaha
She'll have a scene for every hole in this game.
I just wished to develop her first, instead of her being a villain without personality.
I think there are 13. 5 succubus in demo, 1 leaf duchess, 2 leaf general, 1 with the angel, 1 with a queen's general, 1 incubus/random girl, 1 vampire and one with an imp. Some are story scenes however, not battles
Oh okay I can't wait for ch 4 then!!
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Okay I finished what is avaible of the game, and I will honest: Not very fan of BIG BIG ladies BUT, I play the game bc the gameplay, characters, lore and story are really good, I really like this one. Is way well-done and even being that good, it still had alot more potential.
This one, is already one of my favorites, with TLS.
This one, is already one of my favorites, with TLS.
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It might interest you that the dev said that the leaf clan is famous for very large boobs. Not every succubus clan will be the same.
Some of them will have normal sized boobs, others might even be very flat, variation is guaranteed.
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Oh, I forgot. I play on Android, and when checking the succubus info item in the dream gallery, I get stuck in the menu since there is no Back option.