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danwind24

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can you help me?? please, i cant talk again with the witch that capture the succubus to get the last fragment of the dream stone, what can i do??
 

Porn_Jesus

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can you help me?? please, i cant talk again with the witch that capture the succubus to get the last fragment of the dream stone, what can i do??
Are you using an old save file? I never had problems with that. You actually don't have to start the talk by yourself. Once you started the quest you go to the succubus and stop her before she can drain you. The witch will aid you, have another talk and then disappear.
 

TheNovelist

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So does this game features any corruption? Sometimes I do like the genre but with good execution and do not really hurt any good storyline. Otherwise it will be a heartbreak if any of the main heroine suddenly got corrupted and such.

P/s: this game tutorial is so damn long.
 
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maybe it will more exciting if suddenly MC have sunshine grace like escanor

when succubi try to dry his life force....they will melt like butter because the grace power

lol
that is what i am thinking

because i predict this game will make mc have the power of angel and succubi
 

Porn_Jesus

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So does this game features any corruption? Sometimes I do like the genre but with good execution and do not really hurt any good storyline. Otherwise it will be a heartbreak if any of the main heroine suddenly got corrupted and such.
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P/s: this game tutorial is so damn long.
The devs stay true in story telling and offering background information so we players can understand what's going on. Luckily you can skip it.
 
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Porn_Jesus

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How about the main heroine that you romances? (not there yet) I would NOT like them to be corrupted or such.
There is no main heroine.^^ You will have the choice to romance four love interests in total for each era. I doubt Zion will let them get in harms way (someone said he will have his revenge if that happens :D) but maybe we have to save them from danger later.
 
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Zion of Olympus

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I think Zion could also do well with improved writing. I don't expect Shakesperean literary devices of course, but I think in the future updates he should go back and fix some typos and grammar while also making upgrades to the flavour of writing.
I think the flavor will be a natural thing. I believe I got better at writing in the latest releases.

And about misspellings, I don't know what to say, Because this is what I do:
-I type in my e-mail, because there is one of the best online grammar correctors out there. It can easily catch things like then/them/than or though/thought.
-Then I send for Inez, who proofread everything.
-Then after it's include in the game, part of the team is dedicated to find misspellings. Which I correct before the final release.

I think some misspellings are unavoidable considering how much I write. The game will probably be 30h long by the end, if a person plays it for the first time.
 

Alex4422

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I played the game since the beginning and i am very impressed with how much It has improved. I was only a bit unsatisfied with rafflesia, she was very hyped for a long time in the game, but when I saw the only scene i was disappointed. I expected something more than only a footjob. I was also hyped by the fact that duchess was said to have 3 scenes, seing only One was not what i expected.

This said it was a very good release, keep It up zion
 
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Porn_Jesus

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I think the flavor will be a natural thing. I believe I got better at writing in the latest releases.

And about misspellings, I don't know what to say, Because this is what I do:
-I type in my e-mail, because there is one of the best online grammar correctors out there. It can easily catch things like then/them/than or though/thought.
-Then I send for Inez, who proofread everything.
-Then after it's include in the game, part of the team is dedicated to find misspellings. Which I correct before the final release.

I think some misspellings are unavoidable considering how much I write. The game will probably be 30h long by the end, if a person plays it for the first time.
I'm not a native speaker myself and often have to use a dictionary to check if I spelled specific words correctly. Ofc when it comes to build up a sentence with proper grammar a tool can only get you so far.

But as long as it doesn't look like it's completely machine translated from japanese to english I can live with a few spelling mistakes or a little messed up sentences. I won't be the one who writes a novel about line 912 has those mistakes and line 500 is total crap because I'm not always sure if I'm right with my suspicion and yeah... if you can afford a native speaker to proofread your work or stick to your little tool to keep the standards up... do it.^^

How many sex scenes are there in CH3 and with whom?
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is there any scenes with attesatia except the mouth to mouth one ?
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