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I would dispute that Ch 4 was a downgrade. I've never been a huge fan of Zion's writing (he tends to focus on things that could easily be referenced in cutscenes, his scene with Queen Domina adds nothing that we weren't already aware of and was more a clunky, awkward way to introduce the top 4 generals and the queen, that kind of stuff could get cut), but I honestly couldn't have been asked to pay attention to any of the dialogue outside the new waifu, and only because she gave those succubus vibes. I did pay attention to certain scenes, and... yeah. Zion's writing needed refinement, but there was narrative consistency in what he was trying to present.You're right, Chapter 4 was excellent story wise. On the other hand at the level of the sex scene it is just the number which has decreased. These are things that happen when you work on several projects at the same time.
Much of chapter 4 feels like a "get it done just to get it done" move. The maps are boring (moreso than previous maps), the waifu scenes, while a neat bonus, are way too plentiful and tend to rely on cliches more than character development. The stronk tsundere who can't cook trope for the tribal lady felt way too forced. Her mother never pushed her to learn how to cook? The fuck?