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Zion of Olympus

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so the random mobs will be a permanent thing or until said complications are fixed??
A permanent thing. The complications are part of the RPGM limitations.
They will drop more interesting items in the future and are easy to skip if you choose so.
This also fits what I have planned previously, to show that succubi control lesser demons.
 

crazydave3226

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i hope the lesser demons drop money in the future. I got some really cool stats until i had to restart all over
 
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I like the game, though I noticed a few bugs in gameplay as well as noting that the money system in the game is very skewed. I would also like to see separate story lines maybe one with the mc siding with the succubi (ether ruling, serving, or coexisting) possibly expanding the game world you are building. Rooting for you.
Ps is it possible for the game to be converted to apk?
 

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I like the game, though I noticed a few bugs in gameplay as well as noting that the money system in the game is very skewed. I would also like to see separate story lines maybe one with the mc siding with the succubi (ether ruling, serving, or coexisting) possibly expanding the game world you are building. Rooting for you.
Ps is it possible for the game to be converted to apk?
I think someone ported on the internet. But it is not an official release. I will try to learn once a finish the game for me to release an official version.
 

Zangiefu

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The story is quite pleasant to be honest, gameplay is good too.

Loved the footjob scene, the CG art in general is really amazing so keep up the good work bro !
 
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I just created the Solar System, ad wished to share with you guys:
Yrdarvyr Solar System.jpg

Yrdarvyr Solar System2.jpg

-Yrdarvyr is where the game takes place, with a bastion of angels and now suffering an invasion from hell coordinated by the Succubus Queen;

-The Tower of Ashes was conquered by the succubus, and the population either became cattle or slaves to build a might tower

-And the Minister of Truth, where the elves have gone after they left Yrdarvyr. The entire world is a forest.
 

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I've only played the first version you released, and the truth is that it seemed like a jewel to be polished.
I regularly go through the forum waiting for a big update, a couple of hours of content, I don't mind waiting and the truth is that in my opinion you are putting a lot of pampering the game. I don't know if you do it alone or have people helping you but congratulations.
I expect a lot from you and this game, a hug.
 
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I've only played the first version you released, and the truth is that it seemed like a jewel to be polished.
I regularly go through the forum waiting for a big update, a couple of hours of content, I don't mind waiting and the truth is that in my opinion you are putting a lot of pampering the game. I don't know if you do it alone or have people helping you but congratulations.
I expect a lot from you and this game, a hug.
It's me and the artist. Thank you so much! A Hug back!
 

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"Minister of Truth"
Should probably be 'Ministry', unless you're going for an intentional engrish vibe.

Personally don't get the idea behind having what looks like single-focus planets. For example, I can't imagine anyone naming a planet a 'Tower' or 'Ministry' of anything in real life, even if you were to have a huge tower on that planet. And having a forest cover the entire planet doesn't work for environmental reasons. (Did you know that sand reaching Brazil from Sahara is actually an important component of their rain forest's ecosystem?) Obviously you don't have to care about environmental science, but at least personally there is that odd tinge of 'how do you not have poles, mountains, deserts, or oceans".
 
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"Minister of Truth"
Should probably be 'Ministry', unless you're going for an intentional engrish vibe.

Personally don't get the idea behind having what looks like single-focus planets. For example, I can't imagine anyone naming a planet a 'Tower' or 'Ministry' of anything in real life, even if you were to have a huge tower on that planet. And having a forest cover the entire planet doesn't work for environmental reasons. (Did you know that sand reaching Brazil from Sahara is actually an important component of their rain forest's ecosystem?) Obviously you don't have to care about environmental science, but at least personally there is that odd tinge of 'how do you not have poles, mountains, deserts, or oceans".
Interesting questions.

-The elves actually consider the planet a living entity and therefor a member of their ministry. The one who shall stand tall and drive back hell itself.
PS: On a second thought, looks like minister and ministry indeed have different meanings in English. Thank you for that, I shall correct.

-How do you think ancient or alien people (in this case humans on the bronze age or elfs) would name a world? If you take a look at ancient Greek astronomy they would name planets like Hesperus (evening star) or Phosphorus (light-bringer). One thing is for certain, ancient people would not name planets or stars "Kepler-27 C" or "GJ42B" like we now do.

-It's not impossible when it comes to elves. They are not called World Shapers out of nowhere, bringing life to dead planets, like the Ministry of Truth used to be. Much like Mars, for example.
 
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-How do you think ancient or alien people (in this case humans on the bronze age or elfs) would name a world? If you take a look at ancient Greek astronomy they would name planets like Hesperus (evening star) or Phosphorus (light-bringer). One thing is for certain, ancient people would not name planets or stars "Kepler-27 C" or "GJ42B" like we now do.
The names you gave as examples are the key here. Both Hesperus and Phosphorus are single words and flow easily off the tongue. I suppose the North Star isn't, but the name also ties directly to it's important function.

By contrast, a tower of anything is not a description of the planet, it is a description of something on the planet. Imagine naming the "United States of America" "Wall Street" because that part of the country is the only part that the people who make the decisions care about. It wouldn't make sense, even if Wall Street was five times more important than it already is.
Now I'm not great at names myself, but if I was naming it it'd be something like "Little Abyss", or "Pandemonium's Palate," perhaps translated to Greek/Celtic.

The idea of the planet being alive and a single organism is an interesting idea and completely sidesteps my points about planet names, because at that point the inhabitants would view it not as a planet but as a weapon/organ which would shift their views including their naming conventions correspondingly. Curious.
 

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The names you gave as examples are the key here. Both Hesperus and Phosphorus are single words and flow easily off the tongue. I suppose the North Star isn't, but the name also ties directly to it's important function.

By contrast, a tower of anything is not a description of the planet, it is a description of something on the planet. Imagine naming the "United States of America" "Wall Street" because that part of the country is the only part that the people who make the decisions care about. It wouldn't make sense, even if Wall Street was five times more important than it already is.
Now I'm not great at names myself, but if I was naming it it'd be something like "Little Abyss", or "Pandemonium's Palate," perhaps translated to Greek/Celtic.

The idea of the planet being alive and a single organism is an interesting idea and completely sidesteps my points about planet names, because at that point the inhabitants would view it not as a planet but as a weapon/organ which would shift their views including their naming conventions correspondingly. Curious.
Ohhh. You have a problem with the translations themselves being used as names, not the translation itself. Don't worry, Yrdarvyr, the main world for this game, means "Conflict" for Angels. I decided to release the solar system with the Literal translations of the planets names because I have yet to find a good sounding name for The Ministry of Truth and the Tower of Ashes. I could also easily explain why they are called that.

-Tower of Ashes was renamed like this after the succubus conquest of the planet. For succubus, they do not perceive planets like we do, but instead as "seats" or "towers" for their power. Since the planet is the closest to the sun creating a very barren and grey land, they renamed "Tower of Ashes". Succubus rename "Tower of ..." after their conquest.

-The Ministry of Truth is indeed considered a living entity by the Elves. The Elven government is ruled by Ministries (Defense, Spirit, Guidance, War, etc) using entire planets as headquarters for the specific Ministry. But never before have they created "Ministry of Truth". The elves wished to leave the Solar System, but many decided to stay and create a Ministry in that giant world you can see on the Solar System map. They created forests and fortified that world with magic, preparing for a possible invasion from hell. But what should they call their new Ministry? They choose the "Truth", out of arrogance, in showing that they will drive back anyone who dares invade their domain. Showing everyone (all the elves who left the system) that they were right in staying, they will show the "truth".

As you can see, I'm trying to give different perspectives to alien races about planets. As the generations progresses, humans will also give them names, probably saints or angels names (since the lore doesn't have actual gods).
 
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Is it right to say to say that you are a JoJo's Bizarre Adventure fan? I refuse to believe that those "stand proud" and "Yare Yare Daze" in the scenes with the General were for nothing
 

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That was a really good response, and I respect the level of thought you've put into fleshing out your project. Reaffirms that the lore won't just be a vehicle for a guided tour a la Monster Girl Quest. I'll be looking forward to this all coming together.
 
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Sorry to ask Zion of Olympus , but is it possible for you to share any full body render (like those of the Succubus or the side characters) of Bunny or the MC's friends that gone to different directions? I'm curious since we only saw their faces
 
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