Okay... Foremost - there are MANY grammatical errors in the text, commas, capital letters, etc. For example - there are 3 simple rules in English when you capitalize Landlady (Mom) or other relations... It's just random for now. Or just wrong naming!
Some talks looks like thinking and vice versa. Totally messy.
Many strange scenes with wrong dissolve in code. And some scenes just abruptly starts or ends.
Plot, just weak. Something just happening, almost
without any reasons or logical motivation. So no, plot not bad, its just doesn't exist.
Renders good, but not animations.
I'm not gone ruin rating more by review, but right now it's 2/5 star game at best. Let's wait new update...