Long story short: This game has the best character models I have ever seen in an AVN, the story has some intrigue, but the characters are a little cliched and behave in unusual ways, leading to some bad dialogue.
I want to congratulate the developer on the character models because they are so much better than their closest rival that it is hard to believe they are using Daz3D at all. Only Kaylee in Projekt Passion comes close to the quality here.
The environments are also quite exceptional, from the run down little shopping precinct, to the house and fields behind it, I have never seen a 'real world' setting look so good in an AVN.
The UI is fantastic and alleviates a lot of the boredom I was feeling with the standard ren'py layout. There's some really good graphic design work.
There's a few nice mysteries here, with the behaviour of the male tutor, the empty buildings out in the fields, and the reasons why the camp went FUBAR in the days before the story begins. I hope this isn't just a reason to reduce the number of characters, but actually ties into the plot.
The bad is that a lot of short cuts are taken. Instead of having scenes developing relationships in a believable way, some of the girls just teleport ahead and start behaving in ways that are completely inappropriate to the time they have spent with the MC. This inevitably leads to some rough dialogue that is painful to read.
Because I put such an emphasis on dialogue and character, I have to dock two stars. Which is a shame, because all the technical and visual art elements are as close to perfect as you can get. I hope to see some improvement to the characterisation and dialogue in the next update.