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Then no one will die because she's best girlnext year is the update in which mia starts killing all girls that are better than her
I like your ability to build fantasies, which is why I signed up for you.Yes,very good game !!
The mc is brutally raped in the middle of the night by an obsessed yandere,
he is cheated and cucked by all the girls,
after which he builds a beautiful relationship with Helen,
who also cheats on him with the biggest BBC's she can find !!
so everyone knows that Eve is the bestThen no one will die because she's best girl
So, all girls die...and then there is Helen, which will probably murdered because she was caught spying on Mia's killing spree...quite the grimdark developmentnext year is the update in which mia starts killing all girls that are better than her
Nahhh, Helen is the real mastermind, Mia is the gofer.So, all girls die...and then there is Helen, which will probably murdered because she was caught spying on Mia's killing spree...quite the grimdark development![]()
so no one will be alive then? except helen... and hell, she might get killed cause she doesntt look unfuckable onlinenext year is the update in which mia starts killing all girls that are better than her
If so i really hope we can kill Helen, or ship her off to somewhere together with MillerNahhh, Helen is the real mastermind, Mia is the gofer.
would give my soul to see the mc settling down with helen while the POV chages to the big titty art teacher's boyfriend who then fucks everyone senselessIf so i really hope we can kill Helen, or ship her off to somewhere together with Miller
You were just told he's not her boyfriend browould give my soul to see the mc settling down with helen while the POV chages to the big titty art teacher's boyfriend who then fucks everyone senseless
And where do we get the crane to lift that body?If so i really hope we can kill Helen, or ship her off to somewhere together with Miller
there are people here who believe mia isnt a yandere... are the lies i tell myself really that much bigger than that? lemme have thisYou were just told he's not her boyfriend bro
True, that is a problem...so another sad victim of the local wendigos, i'm sure they appreciate a victim with some meat on the bones.And where do we get the crane to lift that body?
Nolemme have this
If anything it is Miller who gets fucked senseless by the guys who own him. But hey he can have Helen for all i care, don't think anyone would miss her.big titty art teacher's boyfriend who then fucks everyone senseless
The pacing is bad and the MC is awkward and has no personality. Despite that the game is good overall.
Mike is obnoxious as hell though. I can't stand the guy as it is, I'd gladly shut him up if I could.
Also, Miller helping out the MC with the girls is weird and unwarranted. He's the father figure the MC needs I guess, which is lame, but whatever. I'd rather have Miller leave the MC to his own devices or be able to decline his help. I'm more into independent protagonists who don't need or want help myself though, so maybe that's just me.
Not sure if anyone has addressed this already, but something which makes little sense is how quickly Eve opens up to the MC.
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Mind you, this is their second time talking (the first one shouldn't even count). Sure, Eve is awkward and pretty direct, but you don't disclose that stuff so lightly to a stranger. Maybe she wanted to get it off her chest and she felt like she could trust him. I don't know, just another example of poor pacing to me.
She's been sarcastic here. Sure there's pacing issues but not with that exchange.The pacing is bad and the MC is awkward and has no personality. Despite that the game is good overall.
Mike is obnoxious as hell though. I can't stand the guy as it is, I'd gladly shut him up if I could.
Also, Miller helping out the MC with the girls is weird and unwarranted. He's the father figure the MC needs I guess, which is lame, but whatever. I'd rather have Miller leave the MC to his own devices or be able to decline his help. I'm more into independent protagonists who don't need or want help myself though, so maybe that's just me.
Not sure if anyone has addressed this already, but something which makes little sense is how quickly Eve opens up to the MC.
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Mind you, this is their second time talking (the first one shouldn't even count). Sure, Eve is awkward and pretty direct, but you don't disclose that stuff so lightly to a stranger. Maybe she wanted to get it off her chest and she felt like she could trust him. I don't know, just another example of poor pacing to me.
I agree the pacing is the worst part of this but what I think you failed to point what makes the pacing so bad is some of the interactions come across as we spent more than 1 day with the girls. If the game we had 3-5 days go by the pacing would of felt so much better with the interactions to mee. Now for that to happen more content would of needed to be created otherwise it would of felt barley happened in that time frame.The pacing is bad and the MC is awkward and has no personality. Despite that the game is good overall.
Mike is obnoxious as hell though. I can't stand the guy as it is, I'd gladly shut him up if I could.
Also, Miller helping out the MC with the girls is weird and unwarranted. He's the father figure the MC needs I guess, which is lame, but whatever. I'd rather have Miller leave the MC to his own devices or be able to decline his help. I'm more into independent protagonists who don't need or want help myself though, so maybe that's just me.
Not sure if anyone has addressed this already, but something which makes little sense is how quickly Eve opens up to the MC.
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Mind you, this is their second time talking (the first one shouldn't even count). Sure, Eve is awkward and pretty direct, but you don't disclose that stuff so lightly to a stranger. Maybe she wanted to get it off her chest and she felt like she could trust him. I don't know, just another example of poor pacing to me.
How is she being sarcastic? At most she's trying to act unbothered but she looks uncomfortable with that exchange.She's been sarcastic here. Sure there's pacing issues but not with that exchange.
Aside from the dense first day, what kind of pacing issues? Asking for a friend.Sure there's pacing issues but not with that exchange.