I am blown away by the detail and variety of the art renders, especially in the sex scenes. There's a LOT of creativity in the positioning and perspectives so few other artists envision or attempt.
MEGA KUDOS!!
The story is interesting, though the lead in and character intro was a bit tedious, and could have used a bit more teasing/instant gratification, I like the running mysteries and twists.
I do find the programming tricks a bit excessive and tedious, leaving me with the fear that if I miss one of many marginal items (phone, view, etc.) that I may miss out on critical content.
Keep it up, but keep it cleaner and less tricky.