VN Ren'Py Summer Scent [v0.6.5a] [The Naughty Captain]

[An Ace Among Men]

I haven't planned a canon ending. I will have to, if I ever decide to make a sequel.
If I had to write the story "as a forward novel" as you say... I think it would be either the throuple path or Kelly's path.
But ifagain, it wouldn't be compatible with the idea of a sequel.

Well, now I am just more anxious to see what you have planned with both of those going forward. Thanks for the answer though.

 

[Tjock]

check list for throuple:

• 70+ points for both girls
• talk to Cassie in lingerie shop instead of Eve
• select "this morning was hard" when talking to Eve at Cassie's house (the scene happens when you choose not to meet Kelly)
• choose "I don't accept" on day 4 end (choose this or previous, choosing both is not compulsory)
• select "I'll tell you everything" when talking to Cassie on day 5
• select "I choose no one"

on sis love route there is a sex scene on day 5
what exactly happens on day 5 for you

Thanks for the reply, altough I played through it all again and got the throuple path even though I went to meet Kelly.

 

[An Ace Among Men]

Played twice (sis love and hate) can't get more than a hand job.. I must be fuck'n up somewheres??

Well assuming you want to just romance Eve (the blonde), you have to kiss Cassie and then when you see her in the pool you have to not turn around. You'll lose points with Cassie but if you're only wanting Eve then it will work itself out. That is not even going into the other routes. For those, I recommend using the jog wheel of your mouse to rollback choices until you get the answer you want.

 

[Deleted member 3006697]

Well assuming you want to just romance Eve (the blonde), you have to kiss Cassie

Just don't kiss Cassie or offer foot rub when given the options
choose "thank you" on this scene
Eve love path is triggered after you apologize to her, it has nothing to do with Cassie love path

 

[sorco2003]

Without Cassie`s kiss works. Eve go to MC room equally.

 

[helix223]

That bad ending came out of nowhere! some disturbing shit man. I can see if there were an option to do some rapey stuff to cassie along the way that would trigger that kind of ending. but hell no, none of the choices I made would lead me to believe something like that was going to happen. Fuck that ending!

 

[An Ace Among Men]

That bad ending came out of nowhere! some disturbing shit man. I can see if there were an option to do some rapey stuff to cassie along the way that would trigger that kind of ending. but hell no, none of the choices I made would lead me to believe something like that was going to happen. Fuck that ending!

I am going to guess that you just got it? I wrote and deleted something similar when I did too. I agree it does seem to be the absolute darkest timeline. I also agree that the rape was a bit far, and the "click" was a bit far, and then not turning the weapon around and beating that pos with it was too far...But go back, play through another way. Get the threesome route, get a relationship with just one of the girls, or hell even neither of them just to see the story progress. I cannot guarantee that it will make up for what you felt but maybe now we all know that these two are not just going away. Maybe the nice Captain is planning on letting us go completely midevil in the last chapter. At least I hope so. But no, go try again. But first go watch some damn kitten videoes, my god haha.

 

[helix223]

I am going to guess that you just got it? I wrote and deleted something similar when I did too. I agree it does seem to be the absolute darkest timeline. I also agree that the rape was a bit far, and the "click" was a bit far, and then not turning the weapon around and beating that pos with it was too far...But go back, play through another way. Get the threesome route, get a relationship with just one of the girls, or hell even neither of them just to see the story progress. I cannot guarantee that it will make up for what you felt but maybe now we all know that these two are not just going away. Maybe the nice Captain is planning on letting us go completely midevil in the last chapter. At least I hope so. But no, go try again. But first go watch some damn kitten videoes, my god haha.

Honestly I was way more bothered by the sisters reaction when she finds out what happened to cassie

 

[Naxos]

Loving this game, so far got no bad end's but I'm probably going to end up with one eventually.

I'm playing the Cassie lov and Eve sub-love route...

Must admit I don't feel bad for cheating on Cassie after discovering she and Eve lied in the truth or drink game and she's cheating on him with Eve. Though it does make me question why I'm ok with sneaking behind her back but I'm feeling utterly betrayed by that confession from her. Then again, I am a harem fan but hate sharing even among the girls so guess it all makes sense.

Captain, thanks for the game, while all the girls a cute, the Eve sub-love is by far my favourite. Might have to do a replay where I just go for alone on that route.


On thing that does bother me, is the MC told Eve he would take her before Cassie (in my playthrough) and then totally breaks that word. Trying to get her to completely trust him in the sub route and then breaks his word is not very trustworthy.

 

[Naxos]

The Naughty Captain I don't know if it's been asked or explained (I haven't checked) but can you explain a bit on the Cassie dom points? What I mean is there are a number of times she's getting dom points that don't make sense to me. For example telling Eve her ass is fantisic get's Eve sub points, but also Cassie dom points.

there was one choice (can't remember exactly which) between Eve love or Eve sub and either way Cassie got dom points. I love the sublove route with Eve but absolute hate femdom so seeing Cass get dom points makes me a little worried for the future even if she hasn't done anything domineering with the MC.

Only thing that kind of makes sense is that it will somehow mean she'll accept the MC's relationship with the sister and maybe take a dom role over the sister as she's going sub, at least on the sub routes. Anywhere near the mark on that?

 

[Droftaw]

The Naughty Captain I don't know if it's been asked or explained (I haven't checked) but can you explain a bit on the Cassie dom points? What I mean is there are a number of times she's getting dom points that don't make sense to me. For example telling Eve her ass is fantisic get's Eve sub points, but also Cassie dom points.

there was one choice (can't remember exactly which) between Eve love or Eve sub and either way Cassie got dom points. I love the sublove route with Eve but absolute hate femdom so seeing Cass get dom points makes me a little worried for the future even if she hasn't done anything domineering with the MC.

Only thing that kind of makes sense is that it will somehow mean she'll accept the MC's relationship with the sister and maybe take a dom role over the sister as she's going sub, at least on the sub routes. Anywhere near the mark on that?

The Cap has previously explained, whilst you still continue to receive the dom points, if you dont pick the trigger "giving Cassie a foot rub" they wont affect the storyline

 

[The Naughty Captain]

I have played the entire game. I deleted the portion of my post to which your reply refers. Normally when I am posting it is while I am working in my home office. It breaks the monotony. In the case of the post in question, I was checking my personal and business emails when I took a minute to look at replies here. My post was sent in haste and I now don't agree with it. I have said in other forums that I don't really want these games to be 100% realistic. If the relationship between Cassie and MC followed a more normal timeline, players (including me) would become bored with it. You could not have it take game months to develop. I apologize for that post. I guess what I actually thought was that the severity of the bad ending was not proportionate to the length of the relationship. A two day girlfriend catches you kissing your sister so all the LI's have to die. I don't hate your game. As any of the seasoned players can tell you, the continued conversation in this thread only helps your game. If I wanted to make sure that I was not helping you, I would have had this conversation in private or just completely walked away from the game.

Someone posted that they found it amusing that there were so many players upset by what happened in a porn game. Perhaps that statement helps illustrates what has happened here. I usually support between 15 to 20 games. Right now I support 12, you would have been number 13. Games that I support for some stupid reason or have very little content I usually only donate a buck. Games I like better I give at least $5/month. I have to say that one of the measures I use to determine how much I give is by how much I like the characters. Based on the negative comments you have in this thread you can see that you created a story where a lot of people cared about your characters. The reason they are angry with you is because you brutally killed off characters about which they cared. It is avoidable and it is my understanding that you plan to make that ending easier to avoid. It is still true that there will be players who would have considered supporting your game who will decide against doing so if they stumble onto this ending. I used to look at data to make predictions of consumer behavior for a living, I have plenty of data on this particular topic.

No hard feelings, don't worry.
To be honest, I always knew that my game wasn't for everyone. Some will like it, some will not. Some will support me, some will not. I have made my peace with that. I know that with that story, I won't compete with big names of this industry, and not even with the small ones. I know it. I'm okay with it. I'm not going to change it.
Scene 7 is strong and triggering material, it is true. And Summer scent is for players who enjoy a game with heavy consequences. I know it can't please everyone and I'm fine with it.

Well assuming you want to just romance Eve (the blonde), you have to kiss Cassie and then when you see her in the pool you have to not turn around. You'll lose points with Cassie but if you're only wanting Eve then it will work itself out. That is not even going into the other routes. For those, I recommend using the jog wheel of your mouse to rollback choices until you get the answer you want.

Romancing Eve starts with properly apologizing to her.
You don't have to kiss Cassie.

The Naughty Captain I don't know if it's been asked or explained (I haven't checked) but can you explain a bit on the Cassie dom points? What I mean is there are a number of times she's getting dom points that don't make sense to me. For example telling Eve her ass is fantisic get's Eve sub points, but also Cassie dom points.

there was one choice (can't remember exactly which) between Eve love or Eve sub and either way Cassie got dom points. I love the sublove route with Eve but absolute hate femdom so seeing Cass get dom points makes me a little worried for the future even if she hasn't done anything domineering with the MC.

Only thing that kind of makes sense is that it will somehow mean she'll accept the MC's relationship with the sister and maybe take a dom role over the sister as she's going sub, at least on the sub routes. Anywhere near the mark on that?

You don't have to worry about dom points.
If you are not on the dom path, they won't impact your playthrough.
If you don't massage Cassie's feet and do not accept her contract later on, you are safe from any femdom content.
Cassie won't peg you out of nowhere if you didn't activate the dom path.

 

[Deleted member 2755092]

You don't have to worry about dom points.
If you are not on the dom path, they won't impact your playthrough.
If you don't massage Cassie's feet and do not accept her contract later on, you are safe from any femdom content.
Cassie won't peg you out of nowhere if you didn't activate the dom path.

Oh???? I thought her dom points would affect things later down the line, so I avoided them like the plague!
That, could well be why a few of us had troubles getting the amount of points required.

 

[enfurnoh]

Eve solo love
Eve solo sub love
Eve solo hard sub

Can you please explain the differences here? Ok, the love route is obvious but what's the difference between the sub love and hard sub route? I'm a completionist so will have to try all the combinations.

 

[Deleted member 3006697]

Can you please explain the differences here? Ok, the love route is obvious but what's the difference between the sub love and hard sub route? I'm a completionist so will have to try all the combinations.

sub love is bdsm+romance
in this MC cares about Eve
(recommended)

hard sub is brutal bdsm
MC doesn't cares about Eve and is just there for sex

 

[enfurnoh]

sub love is bdsm+romance
in this MC cares about Eve
(recommended)

hard sub is brutal bdsm
MC doesn't cares about Eve and is just there for sex

Thanks, but I was asking more about how you follow the paths and how they appear. I did what I thought was the sub path (assuming there was only one) and it was fairly hard, but he clearly cares about her. So I'd like to know how the Cap differentiates them and how you follow them.

 

[Naxos]

Thanks, but I was asking more about how you follow the paths and how they appear. I did what I thought was the sub path (assuming there was only one) and it was fairly hard, but he clearly cares about her. So I'd like to know how the Cap differentiates them and how you follow them.

There are a few choices along the way that separate them.

Like warning her or not when she is giving you the first BJ.
Or letting giving her the choice later to be yours or simply telling her she's yours.

 

[Deleted member 1399911]

Must admit I don't feel bad for cheating on Cassie after discovering she and Eve lied in the truth or drink game and she's cheating on him with Eve. Though it does make me question why I'm ok with sneaking behind her back but I'm feeling utterly betrayed by that confession from her. Then again, I am a harem fan but hate sharing even among the girls so guess it all makes sense.

Yea.. That's one of the things that annoyed me too.. And in that they keep talking about 'the purple one' while your trying to be intimate with them.. Gotta compete with a fucking sex toy..

 

[Naxos]

Yea.. That's one of the things that annoyed me too.. And in that they keep talking about 'the purple one' while your trying to be intimate with them.. Gotta compete with a fucking sex toy..

Yeah and Cassie telling him that the toy was better, fair enough for a first time but still. (P.S. No one needs comment on this, I've read Captain's comments, I'm just venting my feeling it would be dishearting to hear, but I'm sure he'll improve)

That and them not talking about the conversation with Linda. Real life me has some major insecurities about being excluded (part of why I really don't like women in harems getting it on without the mc, why I couldn't tell Cassie to carry on with Eve) so I'd be feaking out and getting very pissed off with them refusing to tell him about the conversation. I'm hoping that it again was something that pushes them towards a harem or sharing him someway.

I'm also really hoping that choosing the risky kink earlier doesn't mean he'll end up sending photos or videos to Steve of any of them. Again another of my weird issues. I have no problem with them being kinky and doing something in public in front of strangers, but doing it in front of some guy they know is a no-no.

 

[Deleted member 1399911]

Yeah and Cassie telling him that the toy was better, fair enough for a first time but still.

That and them not talking about the conversation with Linda. Real life me has some major insecurities about being excluded (part of why I really don't like women in harems getting it on without the mc, why I couldn't tell Cassie to carry on with Eve) so I'd be feaking out and getting very pissed off with them refusing to tell him about the conversation. I'm hoping that it again was something that pushes them towards a harem or sharing him someway.

I'm also really hoping that choosing the risky kink earlier doesn't mean he'll end up sending photos or videos to Steve of any of them. Again another of my weird issues. I have no problem with them being kinky and doing something in public in front of strangers, but doing it in front of some guy they know is a no-no.

Yea.. That secrets shit is getting annoying to me too.. Kind of wish we had the option to walk out of the room when Eve told us to get naked instead of telling us what we wanted..

And there was the breakfast scene where they talked about 'kissing and touching' but we could clearly tell they weren't telling all the details.. Like they don't trust the MC at all.. Why do they want the be in a relationship without mutual trust?