Yeah, I am not sure how I would've perceived the scene if I didn't already know what was about to happen.I replayed because my saves failed but I'm in the same boat as you. I knew what was happening and so it was obvious to me. Not sure if other players get it straight up. Also there's only like 2 frames that show Miss Marla, I wonder if that comes across right.
When Ocean redid the cinematic, he chose to take out the brief segment where Victoria is shown in the car headlights after the MC tried and failed to reach out and pull her back. I always though that was excellent visually because it clearly signaled exactly what was about to happen and had emotional gravitas.
Now, the cinematic goes from the MC trying and failing to pull Victoria back straight into a long shot of the scene after the accident.
My first impression was that the scene no longer made it immediately clear that Victoria was hit by a car. But I'm not a first-time player, so I don't know if that's a valid impression.