Btw did a re-start yesterday, and is it just me or does it feel less smooth, for example the new parts of the car crash scene made the "wouldn't it be easier to just put you down" comes out differently without the "A simple Cut" "Right here", without it the gun part seems misplaced.
To me the first seems much more from someone that is crazy enough to do it, the second version seems too vague and "what if" and not an actual threat to her life. (i am not sure how i feel about the prolonged hand holding) The rest of the scene feels right, though.
If the idea is to have a less deranged mc then the reaction to him also needed to change.
Another is nami being disappointed with us not having brought her rolls, i fell its also not as good as the original, originally she goes away from the mc with an exaggerated but cute "pose" in the new one she places her arm in the table.
really like the rest of the scene after this though.
As he wakes up after the nightmare, really early also doesn't work as well, in the original we find nojiko, cleaning some dishes/making breakfast, wearing a kimono/ robe, this changed to her sitting on the counter top in her underware, which doesn't make any sense, feels like "Real scene -> Porn logic"