We are our own worst critics..
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I know how you guys feel: I’m currently trying to write a punishment for Helen after all the shit she put Mia through, but I’m trying to find one that isn’t too brutal.
That and I’m writing some other non-STS stories on FF.net and writer’s block sucks ass.
That and I’m writing some other non-STS stories on FF.net and writer’s block sucks ass.
Man, I still love Eve. But I can't help but put her in an NTR situation. 
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Man, I still love Eve. But I can't help but put her in an NTR situation.
Sorry to hear that.
I guess I can say what my ideas were for other endings.
E1 (MC losing less than 2 rap battles and beating Tyrone): MC and Eve celebrate by pelting the gang with stink bombs and evicting them from the park, then MC comes home with Eve and she surprises him with neko-style lingerie, then they fuck and it's a happy ending.
E2 (MC losing less than 2 rap battles and being defeated by Tyrone): This is more of a humiliation gangbang for Eve.
E3 (MC losing 2 rap battles or more and beating Tyrone): Eve developed feelings (or pity) for Tyrone and the gang and lets them stay in the park, but they still have to get stink bombed. Same neko lingerie ending as in E1.
E1 (MC losing less than 2 rap battles and beating Tyrone): MC and Eve celebrate by pelting the gang with stink bombs and evicting them from the park, then MC comes home with Eve and she surprises him with neko-style lingerie, then they fuck and it's a happy ending.
E2 (MC losing less than 2 rap battles and being defeated by Tyrone): This is more of a humiliation gangbang for Eve.
E3 (MC losing 2 rap battles or more and beating Tyrone): Eve developed feelings (or pity) for Tyrone and the gang and lets them stay in the park, but they still have to get stink bombed. Same neko lingerie ending as in E1.
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Glad to see that I'm not the only one that thinks futa is gross.
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I have nothing against futanari in general...
But I don't pursue it so I have very small opinions about it...
But I just don't care for trap Eve...
Female Eve is just so much better....
Better for the story, more emotional, just everything!
My point is, I'm not trying to discourage anything, you like what you like...
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My stance on Futa is that so long as it’s penetration involving women and not men then it can be attractive for me.
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Don’t worry I also prefer vaginas, I’m just saying my thoughts on Futa.
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I feel like this is better then the other one....
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That’s the problem with the redesigns: they each bring something great but in exchange for leaving other great things behind.
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Like I miss Annie’s old attire since it fit her personality so well as opposed to the sports look her new jacket has. (Still looking forward to banging her milf Mom Lucy, my 2nd favorite girl behind Mia!)
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Jenny, Debbie and Diane’s designs are better.
Mia’s redesign is good, love to see some girl-on-girl action between the original and redesign Mia.
Mia’s redesign is good, love to see some girl-on-girl action between the original and redesign Mia.
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Grace is my fav character, she is so hot, love to see her in so many outfits, and with Eve god mmmmm
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Do you think that there should be a MC/Grace scene without Odette too?...