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Damn, it's not just MC you're making a far more interesting character!I like it the way it is, where Roxxy has no particular reason to like Anon or want to have sex with him, and he has to slowly win her over with his other characteristics. Roxxy doesn't like him for the ways that he's like Dexter, but for the ways that he's not like Dexter. By getting her off in the locker, having money, not being a bully, helping her pass French class, coming with her to get her cheerleading uniform, helping her get her mom out of jail... so, being a considerate, decent guy who treats her right, he's able to win her over even though he's not her type. Roxxy proves Tina's point that, if he treats women right, they'll be able to overlook his shortcomings.
Out of curiosity, do you do a lot of creative writing outside of this project? You seem like you either have a lot of experience or just a natural knack for characterization