VN Ren'Py Sun City [Ep.1] [FF Digital]

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BGRW2020

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You really need a lesson in English man, the use of him for a female etc... is extremely annoying, You are supposed to be a Dev - learn English if you wish to write in English
 
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*sigh* Another one of those games. Gorgeous visuals that are let down by an abysmal machine translation. The first few minutes were acceptable--except for all the "my love" shit that nobody of any age says--but the moment the MC arrived in Sun City the translation seems to have worsened. I'll persevere for now and hope for the best because--as I said--visually gorgeous.
 
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im only at the dinner with Maya and i gotta say, the MC is weird. It might be more of a writing issue actually. I didnt expect the MC to be like "this food is ass" i though he would be a little lighter with it. The Picture choice is ok i guess. Then if you refuse to stay loyal when you're away the MC just completely turns it around onto her and pretty much breaks up with her and leaves? If this is how the MC and/or the writing is going to be for the rest on the content that's out, it's...yeah. It's something. I've played a good few AVNs where the MC is like this at the start. They almost all get better as the story goes on. So here's hoping it improves.

Edit: it also seems that the voices aren't affected by the sliders at all? I got to the scene with Maya, and even with the sliders down to begin with, it was still pretty loud. I personally don't enjoy that. The sounds/voices I don't necessarily mind, but its just when the sliders that you would assume correlate with them dont work.

Edit 2: the grammar and word choice seem odd at times. I got to the point where you call back home to say you made it. MC refers to Maya as him a few times.
Another weird point goes like this
Maya: "i was worried about you. I was going to call (mc name) if you didn't call a little longer"
MC: "I should have waited a little longer."
Maya: "Don't be a dick (mc name)"
It's just small things along those lines that add up. I have no issue at all with some spelling or slight grammar mistakes because thats expected regardless of the game, but this one seems to be often, and I'm not far into the game at all.

Edit 3: yeah this MC seems like a straight asshole lmao
 
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Porthas

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The translation is abysmal. In this day and age of easy grammar and translation tools, there's no excuse for this.
 
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Porthas said:
The translation is abysmal. In this day and age of easy grammar and translation tools, there's no excuse for this.
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So true, but i think its more like, in this days normaly everyone around the world have to know english well enough to dont need a translator, because english is the bank language, so the world main language :)
 
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Probably missed a few, but corrected a bunch of the pronoun and relationship names, extract scripts.rpa and replace with this one
 
Dr. Javi

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How is this not marked as "abandoned?" There hasn't been a word from the dev in forever.
 
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