Dekarous

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Mar 23, 2019
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I'm enjoying the narrative. It's definitely a *bit* OTT. Only disappointment was the lack of actual scenes. I guess dekarous is still learning his trade so its certainly acceptable. Point is it does kind of go pretty ham on its premise. And if you're into that you'll probably enjoy it, or at worst, see it as a decent show of potential. Bugs seem to be the serious barrier at the moment, but comment above shows dev is aware and trying to fix them. Overall decent start. Throws you right in. You're already a massive wuss in a world of psycho sadistic college students. No gradual breakdown through poor in game choices. Thus perhaps no actual 'game' to beat.

He's telling you a story. You're either on board or not. Choices are restricted to which type of (very heavy) submission you enjoy: The sadist/humiliatrix. The bully. The psycopath. The manipulator. Or the one who sees you for who you are and wants you to become your very best submissive self (yo! elliot!). Consider right now its basically pre-alpha (game breaking bugs) you might want to wait for a bug fix. Never got to the games most controversial scene. Not exactly sure where we go from there mind you? I mean if it was your nuts perhaps you might still function (or even a chastity device), but on a narrative point of order: once my dick is chopped off, you're going to find it pretty hard to use lust as a weapon against me... id rather just drop out and go work in a 7/11 (assuming the whole world is filled with lunatics anyway).

So maybe if youre interested pop back once the bugs are fixed since thats pretty much going to definitely happen. If you want it to change its direction though... i dunno. Its probably not gonna. It feels very much like someone's sub world fantasy. It'd be like trying to get someones ero-fiction storyline changed. And he seems to want his dick removed :) No idea why. Guess that's real submission to him and his audience. But perhaps... and i say this with all the kink-positivity and narrative awareness i have... build to it? And give us lesser kinksters an out. Chastity - no problem. Even ball castration... we can maybe go with it. But my dick? Unless im wearing that death collar, i can promise you, you've lost your purchase over me. I dont care how sadistic you are. If i cant even hope to cum, i'm off to find a minimum wage job. College stopped being worth it.
Thanks for the input. You are given a choice whether you want your dick to go or not. Depending on your choice, the story will branch in different ways. You can be a self-sacrificing hero and protect your brother or put yourself first and abandon him (how much you abandon him will have its own branching choices). If you choose to be a self-sacrificing hero you will be unable to have any sort of real sexual intercourse with any of the girls in the future, except just pleasuring them alone. If you put yourself first and you let your brother suffer the consequences, you'll be able to make relationships and bonds freely.

I really wanted to put a very serious choice to make early in the game, which will define the kind of character you are going to play as. If you guys don't want to have your dick chopped off (as is the normal thing to want), you can just select your brother instead. Your relationship will be damaged a lot, but it can be saved in the future (if you want to save it that is). But, disclaimer, if you do select your brother to pass through castration instead of you, you won't be able to get the "hero" ending. There are multiple endings written out for the story, but if you want to be the goody-two-shoes who always puts himself back, you'll have to sacrifice your dick lol. That doesn't mean there aren't other "good" endings if you want to keep your dick btw.
 
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ipps

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Dec 27, 2018
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Hahaha, im just imagining some poor dude seeing the cute waifus and thinking to themselves, 'i'll just have a look at the comments to see if its worth the download'

...and coming to that post :)
 

KMJ96815

Newbie
Mar 25, 2019
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After getting a clean playthrough now, I think the choice was super easy. He's lucky I didn't cut off the damn thing myself, totally no interest in helping such a worthless turd so I guess at least for me no sympathy/emotional attachment to the character at all. (Although I guess the sad thing is maybe the MC is going to be forced to be this character too...at some point the curiosity for this game will not outweigh the negativity of the MC being railroaded into being too pathetic...)
 

Dekarous

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Game Developer
Mar 23, 2019
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After getting a clean playthrough now, I think the choice was super easy. He's lucky I didn't cut off the damn thing myself, totally no interest in helping such a worthless turd so I guess at least for me no sympathy/emotional attachment to the character at all. (Although I guess the sad thing is maybe the MC is going to be forced to be this character too...at some point the curiosity for this game will not outweigh the negativity of the MC being railroaded into being too pathetic...)
There will be choices to go against and betray your brother.

Btw if you guys find any bugs, make sure to inform me. I want the game to be as clean to play as possible.
 

KMJ96815

Newbie
Mar 25, 2019
81
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There will be choices to go against and betray your brother.

Btw if you guys find any bugs, make sure to inform me. I want the game to be as clean to play as possible.
Minor one. After you talk with brother at dance (if you refuse to help Gwen kick specifically) you go to bathroom but dialogue references Laura boyfriend or something to that effect.
 

lasglipas

Newbie
Jul 30, 2018
33
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Up front, I really like femdom, but this game is certainly not it. Femdom implies som sort of consent, meta-consent or consentual non-consent, which is mostly not happening in this game. Most of it is just straight up abuse. Also, I ran into the first game breaking bug after only a few minutes (you can go to the second level of the college, but can't go down again), which finally made me stop playing the game.

To give some constructive critcism, I actually liked the scene with Gwen in the class room (let's not talk about the opening line...). You decide to sit next to her after she told you that she'll pester you (yay for consent!) and she's torturing you during class. But I didn't really like the scene afterwards with the teacher. Way too heavy in my opinion.
 

Incognito Guy

totally not zazzaro
Jan 5, 2019
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Up front, I really like femdom, but this game is certainly not it. Femdom implies som sort of consent, meta-consent or consentual non-consent, which is mostly not happening in this game. Most of it is just straight up abuse. Also, I ran into the first game breaking bug after only a few minutes (you can go to the second level of the college, but can't go down again), which finally made me stop playing the game.

To give some constructive critcism, I actually liked the scene with Gwen in the class room (let's not talk about the opening line...). You decide to sit next to her after she told you that she'll pester you (yay for consent!) and she's torturing you during class. But I didn't really like the scene afterwards with the teacher. Way too heavy in my opinion.
There's a scene with the teacher?
 

wizenedwizard

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Aug 9, 2018
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Femdom implies som sort of consent, meta-consent or consentual non-consent
Gotta disagree with your main point there. Maybe if we're talking about gentle femdom or hiring a dominatrix that'd be true, but femdom simply means female domination, consensual or not. Wouldn't sweat though, since it looks like the childhood friend route with the blue-haired Sanae recolor will be your consensual gentle femdom route.
 

Avoidedknave

New Member
May 8, 2018
14
12
Ugh, the scene with Nicole is complete garbage

I should specify, why is the mc such a bitch? Fuck no I'm not going to lick her boots, but you force me to anyway? That pretty much a 100% no interest in the game anymore.

I'm all riled up and annoyed now

I'm probably going to keep editing this as I go.

Voltage doesn't kill people Ivy, literally everything about Ivy doesn't make sense. Who made this :T

So pretty much every girl in this game is psychotic, and the mc is a complete wimp, game needs femdom and humiliation tags

game is ridiculously sexist against the mc too, personally this is a 0 star game to me, wouldn't recommend
I can't say any character has any good traits, half the loading zones break the game, and the content is just not my jam

Here's a couple more screen shots, but I can't stomach anymore of the game, sorry
I pretty much agree, the rating on this game is too high for such a game I honestly woudn´t recomend it to anyone
 

Avoidedknave

New Member
May 8, 2018
14
12
*downloads and plays game tagged "female domination" and "humiliation"*
*is upset game contains femdom and humiliation*
:rolleyes:
yeah but it´s pretty extreme even for those tags, it´s nothing really consentual and the character actually tortured in some ways
 

noted88

Newbie
Jul 18, 2017
15
12
wow game totally goes too far for me in the end, if you know what i mean. Turned from a porn game to a horror one.
 

ninjasmurf73

Newbie
Nov 18, 2017
45
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Ugh, the scene with Nicole is complete garbage

I should specify, why is the mc such a bitch? Fuck no I'm not going to lick her boots, but you force me to anyway? That pretty much a 100% no interest in the game anymore.

I'm all riled up and annoyed now

I'm probably going to keep editing this as I go.

Voltage doesn't kill people Ivy, literally everything about Ivy doesn't make sense. Who made this :T

So pretty much every girl in this game is psychotic, and the mc is a complete wimp, game needs femdom and humiliation tags

game is ridiculously sexist against the mc too, personally this is a 0 star game to me, wouldn't recommend
I can't say any character has any good traits, half the loading zones break the game, and the content is just not my jam

Here's a couple more screen shots, but I can't stomach anymore of the game, sorry
Thanks so much for this review. I was hoping you could turn the tables on these characters. A good alpha male game needs to happen at some point.
 

Dekarous

Member
Game Developer
Mar 23, 2019
104
564
Thanks so much for this review. I was hoping you could turn the tables on these characters. A good alpha male game needs to happen at some point.
Not this game.
Up front, I really like femdom, but this game is certainly not it. Femdom implies som sort of consent, meta-consent or consentual non-consent, which is mostly not happening in this game. Most of it is just straight up abuse. Also, I ran into the first game breaking bug after only a few minutes (you can go to the second level of the college, but can't go down again), which finally made me stop playing the game.

To give some constructive critcism, I actually liked the scene with Gwen in the class room (let's not talk about the opening line...). You decide to sit next to her after she told you that she'll pester you (yay for consent!) and she's torturing you during class. But I didn't really like the scene afterwards with the teacher. Way too heavy in my opinion.
Game has "rape" and "sexual harassment" tags from day 1. Also, as wizened said, femdom in no way means consent. At least half the people who are into femdom are also into forced play. There will be consented routes in the game, but it seems like you already made your opinion.
Bug::
If you go to the dance place at any point really you cannot leave.
Fixed in next update, thanks :).
 
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