Dekarous

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I feel like this game is trying to be like Tower of Trample, but the setting (modern day college campus) is completely wrong for the scenes, resulting in them constantly breaking suspension of disbelief. Nicole scenes are all awful, especially the one at the ball, where people watch and laugh and are fine as she literally cuts your dick off... like nobody would be ok with that, someone would call the police, people would hold her down, and she'd probably get sent to a psych ward or something.... Ivy is heavy handed (threatening death not exactly great, he could literally just call the police and the wristband and whatever she uses to trigger it are physical evidence), and also breaks suspension of disbelief, even for a porn game... Very poor game, constantly breaks immersion with ridiculous impossible scenarios, 1/5 imo. Ivy scenes need to be touched up, Nicole needs to be completely rewritten, "Rapey rapey time faggot" needs to be removed, younger brother character is honestly unnecessary and at least I personally would enjoy the game more without him.
The game is not trying to be realistic, it's fantasy for a niche type of people. Ofc its not realistic for no one to act when a girl cuts your cock off, everyone knows this, but it's still a humiliation/castration fantasy. If you're not into that then ofc you won't like it, I didn't make this game for everyone.
 

Dekarous

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So are we ignoring that this game just uses a bunch of straight stolen/recolored art? Like beyond the incredibly shit writing I feel like that's more of a problem
All the artwork used is royalty free from artists or 3rd party software. If it comes to my attention that a creator has withdrawn his/her permissions, I will change the artwork.
 

Ninjaman2

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Ugh, the scene with Nicole is complete garbage

I should specify, why is the mc such a bitch? Fuck no I'm not going to lick her boots, but you force me to anyway? That pretty much a 100% no interest in the game anymore.

I'm all riled up and annoyed now

I'm probably going to keep editing this as I go.

Voltage doesn't kill people Ivy, literally everything about Ivy doesn't make sense. Who made this :T

So pretty much every girl in this game is psychotic, and the mc is a complete wimp, game needs femdom and humiliation tags

game is ridiculously sexist against the mc too, personally this is a 0 star game to me, wouldn't recommend
I can't say any character has any good traits, half the loading zones break the game, and the content is just not my jam
Wow you seem to get easily triggered by femdom. Clearly not a game for you but you seem way more upset than you should be.
 

Artilaz

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<_<.....>_>........v_v...... i laughed at rapey rapey time

also is there a nicole route planned somewhere in the future?

oh and keep up the good work dont worry to much about the triggered people i am (and i'm sure plenty of other people) loving it so far (y)
 

ʎɯɯɐʇ

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I repeatedly asked Ivy for Ball and ended up in a dungeon, but nothing happens afterward and I don't see an option to do anything, is this end? Or what should I do?
 

SurprisedMoth

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But there is nobody in beside me and nothing is happening
Perhaps you've encountered another bug. There are a lot of them in this game. The scene is supposed to start right after asking Ivy to go to the ball few times. Try starting a new game or visit her after triggering few other events.
 

Dekarous

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<_<.....>_>........v_v...... i laughed at rapey rapey time

also is there a nicole route planned somewhere in the future?

oh and keep up the good work dont worry to much about the triggered people i am (and i'm sure plenty of other people) loving it so far (y)
Yup, Nicole is the main antagonist, the entire main storyline will include her. Her romancing route will be significantly different and more demanding than the other girls' though.

I repeatedly asked Ivy for Ball and ended up in a dungeon, but nothing happens afterward and I don't see an option to do anything, is this end? Or what should I do?
That's weird, can you pm me your save file so I can take a look?
 
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Dekarous

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I'll be uploading a fix for the Ball bug tonight.

The Ball is a scripting nightmare, so I apologize if I mess up stuff when I try to fix other bugs. Hopefully it will work perfectly after 1.0.2.
 
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KMJ96815

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Yup, Nicole is the main antagonist, the entire main storyline will include her. Her romancing route will be significantly different and more demanding than the other girls' though.
I really question the idea of "romance" in this game heh it probably means something completely different from what I would imagine as normal. I don't mind that the women are pretty brutal just because it's different and you don't see it very often but I hope the MC is at least put in two or more choice situations like for example two difficult decisions versus just a linear forced decision all the time like the Nicole hallway one. Someday I would be curious to see a game like this from an evil female MC point of view of being that brutal to others, but I've never really seen that before and I imagine it's because it's much more rare for this point of view to be popular. I actually hope there is some way for the MC to have a decent end, I generally have liked games where the majority of endings are basically horrible for the MC but with a very small chance to get a decent ending. I think if you clean up a lot of the bugs there is some potential for the game.
 

Dekarous

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1.0.2 released on Patreon, soon here as well. Fixed Ball bug where you couldn't progress if you chose Gwen or Laura and followed your brother to the toilets.
 

ipps

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I'm enjoying the narrative. It's definitely a *bit* OTT. Only disappointment was the lack of actual scenes. I guess dekarous is still learning his trade so its certainly acceptable. Point is it does kind of go pretty ham on its premise. And if you're into that you'll probably enjoy it, or at worst, see it as a decent show of potential. Bugs seem to be the serious barrier at the moment, but comment above shows dev is aware and trying to fix them. Overall decent start. Throws you right in. You're already a massive wuss in a world of psycho sadistic college students. No gradual breakdown through poor in game choices. Thus perhaps no actual 'game' to beat.

He's telling you a story. You're either on board or not. Choices are restricted to which type of (very heavy) submission you enjoy: The sadist/humiliatrix. The bully. The psycopath. The manipulator. Or the one who sees you for who you are and wants you to become your very best submissive self (yo! elliot!). Consider right now its basically pre-alpha (game breaking bugs) you might want to wait for a bug fix. Never got to the games most controversial scene. Not exactly sure where we go from there mind you? I mean if it was your nuts perhaps you might still function (or even a chastity device), but on a narrative point of order: once my dick is chopped off, you're going to find it pretty hard to use lust as a weapon against me... id rather just drop out and go work in a 7/11 (assuming the whole world is filled with lunatics anyway).

So maybe if youre interested pop back once the bugs are fixed since thats pretty much going to definitely happen. If you want it to change its direction though... i dunno. Its probably not gonna. It feels very much like someone's sub world fantasy. It'd be like trying to get someones ero-fiction storyline changed. And he seems to want his dick removed :) No idea why. Guess that's real submission to him and his audience. But perhaps... and i say this with all the kink-positivity and narrative awareness i have... build to it? And give us lesser kinksters an out. Chastity - no problem. Even ball castration... we can maybe go with it. But my dick? Unless im wearing that death collar, i can promise you, you've lost your purchase over me. I dont care how sadistic you are. If i cant even hope to cum, i'm off to find a minimum wage job. College stopped being worth it.
 
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KMJ96815

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Never got to the games most controversial scene. Not exactly sure where we go from there mind you? I mean if it was your nuts perhaps you might still function (or even a chastity device), but on a narrative point of order: once my dick is chopped off, you're going to find it pretty hard to use lust as a weapon against me... id rather just drop out and go work in a 7/11 (assuming the whole world is filled with lunatics anyway).
Yeah, I don't get that so early in the game unless later on it's somehow an early game over with other various outcomes out of that party. Doesn't it basically end the MC as a viable character for the story going forward? At least I think it would.
 
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