Since this is just the beginning, I don't have enough info to writhe a proper review but from what i could gather:
- bad setup (A guy trying to have 'fun' and make up for his time lost studding [in his own words], while also putting his relationship an a "break"? not appealing, really... Also, they really had to lost contact for so long? Now he is in a open relationship
kinda, and the sister is dating
kinda, pretty unfavorable scenario for building a relationship, of course everything is gonna work out well for the MC at the end [still MrDots after all],, but being a Mr. Steal Yo Girl while still supposedly having other girl
[without any choice in that matter] is REALLY not my thing).
- incest (pretty useless, the sister could easy be replaced by a "generic" childhood friend, cousin fits the same category, "being related" here is just an adicional flavor, not the main plate... And there just ONE half-sister? why a half sister? no mother? incest is pretty "useless" in this scenario).
- weak personalities (the characters are just... TOO BASIC, nice, but basic... I know its pretty unfair to judge by just 1 chapter but that was the impression I've had, probably
hopefully some deep will be added in the future).
- weak personality (Again, this could change... but the MC will have to grow some balls urgently, for exemple, he isn't slightly pissed at Ashley for prohibited the contact with the sister... He is so bland and basic that we can classify as Ph 14)
Overhaul:
Disappointed
If I had to give a ratting right now will be probably 2 of 5, maybe 3 cause I like the renders, but again this is just the beginning maybe it gets better
OBS: planing to adapt this into a proper review, unfair... probably, but since the possibility exist (and I think i didn't break any rule), so why not?
OBS2: I just hope my comment won't get removed... Again.
Well I didn't joke in this tread... Yet.