Kaintfm
Newbie
- Apr 26, 2021
 
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Brief update to my review from 2023:
Still loving the story. Writing is great as is the pacing. The new way to track events is excellent and easy to use. I found out that I'd missed a good hour or two worth of events thanks to it, so it's a big improvement.
Sadly the adult content is still sub-par with not a single scene "working" for me. I'd recommend either farming that stuff out the way some other authors have, or perhaps study some of the animation-free greats like Sisterly Lust, Farmer's Dream, Summer Heat, and Midlife Crisis (to name a few) to get an idea of how to take them to the next level.
	
		
			
		
		
	
								Still loving the story. Writing is great as is the pacing. The new way to track events is excellent and easy to use. I found out that I'd missed a good hour or two worth of events thanks to it, so it's a big improvement.
Sadly the adult content is still sub-par with not a single scene "working" for me. I'd recommend either farming that stuff out the way some other authors have, or perhaps study some of the animation-free greats like Sisterly Lust, Farmer's Dream, Summer Heat, and Midlife Crisis (to name a few) to get an idea of how to take them to the next level.