VN Ren'Py Superhuman [v0.999] [WeirdWorld]

[DecadentDesires]

who said as a female?

I was with everything you said as future sex options with Jared but nah I definitely want him as a female.

Fucking Jess in front of Jared, getting him erect before fucking her in the "insert most dominating and Jared humiliating way" and refusing to allow him to cum before "insert finishing with Jess in the most dominating and Jared humiliating way" before Gender Bending Jared into a Hot Blue Eyed Blonde(not enough of those in this game) who loses his erection but becomes aroused. Who we now tease until the point of begging to suck us off to lubricate us properly before fucking them in "insert in the most dominating and humiliating way" in the anus first before we begged to move to his newly formed pussy and then "fucked in the most dominating and humiliating way" all in front of a cognizant Jess until he agrees to being our new sexsubcum slave, get finished on or in "in the most dominating and humiliating way"and gets collared right in front of his sex subby exgirlfriend makes my blood boil in all the right ways.

Complete domination over a former enemy and his former lover all at once while remaining(straightish, I don't know. They're a girl now biologically.)

In meaner word terms: Bitching a former so-called Alpha Male in front of his bitch and making them sister bitches while remaining straight.


AHHHH THE EROTICISM POTENTIAL GLORIOUS I SAY GLORIOUS.

You just have to bring your new puppy on a leash to visit their Daddy. They should see what their progeny was meant to be. He would be so proud! With similiar art or dimisimiliar but erotic enough art and writing, someone could make a Azienda/Hangover Cat fanfiction spinoff of Jess, Jared, and MC's Dynamic alone with guest appearances by : Alice and Poison Dude, Liz and College Dude. NTR fansespecially NTR/Trap, NTR/Gay and NTR/Gender-Bender would eat that shit up! Spend good on subscriptions too.

Despite what I just wrote I'm neutral towards NTR. That neutrality goes down when I don't like "cuck" in question to pleasurable. I do not like Jared or Poison guy!

 

[DecadentDesires]

I agree. Good narrative tension is built on expectation, on having ideas of how the story could go that are either validated or subverted. If anything can happen, then you can't have that expectation.

This person seems to know creative writing. The ideology behind your statement is perhaps the biggest contributing factor as to why the The Penguin was such a critical and commercial success last fall on HBO.

 

[DecadentDesires]

Being OP is one part of it, but it's the lack of identity that's the big issue which is why I think it's a bad idea when people hope the MC will be able to copy powers, because at that point they will lose their identity, they lose a recognisable way of fighting, it just becomes whatever.

Great points. Totally agreed.

 

[DecadentDesires]

Also his warning about evolutions is crazy, him going to level 5 in a week is totaly new info to me.

Played twice. Still missed that. You've made me feel good that you've played five times and just caught it. I thought I was a moron.

 

[DecadentDesires]

Honestly, maybe it's my lack of imagination speaking, but how do you even write a fight that isn't a one shot featuring Henri ?
It's hard to imagine, I mean Sylla's dream environment allowed the developer to write a very entertaining fight where her unique powers are on display, but writing a fight where someone like Henri, with reality bending, overpowered as hell power seems very hard to imagine to me.

I mean how does someone with abilities based in the physical realm even counter reality bending ?

I imagine his power either have limitations(like, not being able to directly affect living beings) or Henri himself rejecting them make them work badly.

His ability to invoke his will on his opponents is probably dependent on the power differential between him and his target(s), We saw all of the games that Truth's Chosen Eis was able to play with Kira and Elijah but as soon as Daddy Gunvald appeared, she seemed a different fighter.

Her ability to warp the surrounding reality around Bernie to affect him seemed to be dramatically less significant.

I would imagine that Glae couldn't imprison or fool Malik's mind with illusions anywhere near as easily as she were able to with Alexis.

Just like Indra was able to simply "power" through Syla's memory deletion at a certain point during their fight.

It seems...

Trait Advantage or Disadvantage Against Particular Ability*Monster Power*Natural Will*Effort*Knowledge of Said Ability=Time It Takes To Stop or Potentially Reverse Said Ability In One's Vicinity


For each particular will altering, mind altering, power dampening, reality warping, or creation power like Authority, Memory, Darkness, Truth, and Fantasy, this equation probably includes other unlisted variables that vary for each particular ability that affects this proposed equation for that ability

It is probably at least partly due to this that Elijah is confident that Bernie is the strongest being on Earth while having a seemingly close relationship to Henri and knowing of decent depth, his capabilities. Bernie and Malik can probably just straight up ignore Henri's statements. The stronger ones consciously and the weaker ones unconsciously.

We've seen Bernie's aura seemingly ignore Eis' reality warping commands on the environment and himself. His aura seemed to outright ignore commands made by someone of Eis' power level completely.

I think these capabilities come about at level four if you make to that level. It probably comes about later in the fourth evolution compared to traits such as not needing to sleep, eat, drink, breath, or body propulsing.

 

[BenoTF25]

Agreed, I'm just stating that I wouldn't write it that way. I'm not disagreeing with what you are saying being a possibility. I think, granted you can take it too far, but for the most part, "The longer and bigger the Big Three are as threats, the more content you can write."


With that said, you don't want to get into milking territory like Walking Dead or my old love One Piece. To see Superhuman walk the dreaded milking path with plot content(milk erotic content forever fuck yea) would be a tragedy. I think there's three type plot writing options for writing good enough to even pay attention to depending on any particular audience member's viewpoint: Rushing things, Doing things just right, and milking.

Hitting the middle sweet spot for a majority consensus of your total audience is rare and hard but worth the attempt.

My personal view is that what you are describing would be trivialize the MC competing and fighting against Lieutenant HERO level threats during this arc and I would categorize that as rushing, but you and anyone else are certainly free to disagree!

I liked watching MC go from fighting a group of armed humans in a diner, to fighting a weak monsterfied human like Kenny, to fighting a weak monster or monsters, to fighting same level superhumans like Oscar or Klaus, to fighting against a stronger superhuman like roided Klaus, to fighting much stronger monster or monsters to eventually fighting Lieutenants, Chosen, Captains, Apostles, Extrauniversal threats and maybe, just maybe an Arbiter.


I want to see him be compared to, compete with and fight against Lieutenants of all their varying powerlevels.

I'm not judging your wants or desires. I'm just stating that mines are different unless you are suggesting that MC catches up to the Big Three towards the end of his level four progression, in which case, I would have much less of a problem. I'm sorry if that's the case. I thought you meant stronger than them fresh off their fourth evo

I'm gonna laugh my ass off if I misunderstood you.

Nah, i mean the MC being also "build different" by his 4 lvl like Henri said he and the other two top dogs were on that same evolution.

I also appreciate you taking the time to explain your view on the topic.

 

[DecadentDesires]

Nah, i mean the MC being also "build different" by his 4 lvl like Henri said he and the other two top dogs were on that same evolution.

I also appreciate you taking the time to explain your view on the topic.

I also appreciate you taking the time to explain your views on multiple topics and providing your insights, far before I even became active on this forum.

Oh you mean like a separate bracket of level 4ism that Henri or Malik explained, and being part of the Big Three caliber of level four. Sure that would be cool. It may even be cool if he was in a even superior bracket to their level 4 as level 4, but I wish we could see just what the hell they were getting up to as level three and below. Perhaps MC hasn't yet earned being in superior or even being in a equal bracket as level 4.

They nearly conquered the whole globe and have been active at least somewhat in monster hunting for decades. Granted, the monster caliber, I imagine was quite low then.

We need those Big Three flashbacks before this is all over.

 

[DecadentDesires]

Nah, i mean the MC being also "build different" by his 4 lvl like Henri said he and the other two top dogs were on that same evolution.

I also appreciate you taking the time to explain your view on the topic.

Level Fours are basically powerful enough to be seen as literal demigods by the average human. They are even gifted new abilities totally unrelated to their monster trait, almost as a sign of so. It's almost like God in the in-game universe is like,

"Here's your reward for being genetically and evolutionarily superior due to luck while also training hard enough."

Be fruitful and multiply. Make more great models of my creation perfection.

 

[FrapFrapper]

Yeah, this is his first project after all but The concept and story of superhuman (and current MC) is too good to simply end with one game, so i hope hat whatever WW decides he continues on a later date, id rather wait, than get a shit ending

Sometimes creatives need a break, either to recharge or to expand their horizons. It also helps to work on other projects to explore ideas and new concepts to experiment with, and implement they proven successes of new ideas and experiments into your main game instead of risking the flagship product or your main project with a risky but cool idea and mess it up.

 

[FrapFrapper]

I think hsuaisbsjsh is confusing ignoring the Lizz plot completely with the NTR route. You can just leave and not do any of the routes, I think that's what they're on about.

I think there are a few variables in the ntr/non ntr route. If you go full cuck Liz snaps and kills like everyone after they threaten Amber, on the less ntr and rescue path you have the option to NOT kill the swimming couch guy scouting liz (langford?), but I think most people take it as a given to kill him.

 

[Youtiy]

I was with everything you said as future sex options with Jared but nah I definitely want him as a female.

Fucking Jess in front of Jared, getting him erect before fucking her in the "insert most dominating and Jared humiliating way" and refusing to allow him to cum before "insert finishing with Jess in the most dominating and Jared humiliating way" before Gender Bending Jared into a Hot Blue Eyed Blonde(not enough of those in this game) who loses his erection but becomes aroused. Who we now tease until the point of begging to suck us off to lubricate us properly before fucking them in "insert in the most dominating and humiliating way" in the anus first before we begged to move to his newly formed pussy and then "fucked in the most dominating and humiliating way" all in front of a cognizant Jess until he agrees to being our new sexsubcum slave, get finished on or in and gets collared right in front of his sex subby girlfriend makes my blood boil in all the right ways.

Complete domination over a former enemy and his former lover all at once while remaining(straightish, I don't know. They're a girl now biologically.)

In meaner word terms: Bitching a former so-called Alpha Male in front of his bitch and making them sister bitches while remaining straight.


AHHHH THE EROTICISM POTENTIAL GLORIOUS I SAY GLORIOUS.

You just have to bring your new puppy on a leash to visit their Daddy. They should see what their progeny was meant to be. He would be so proud! With similiar art or dimisimiliar but erotic enough art and writing, someone could make a Azienda/Hangover Cat fanfiction spinoff of Jess, Jared, and MC's Dynamic alone with guest appearances by : Alice and Poison Dude, Liz and College Dude. NTR fansespecially NTR/Trap, NTR/Gay and NTR/Gender-Bender would eat that shit up! Spend good on subscriptions too.

Despite what I just wrote I'm neutral towards NTR. That neutrality goes down when I don't like "cuck" in question to pleasurable. I do not like Jared or Poison guy!

Bro went from discussing plot to discussing P.L.O.T ..... would smash though, 100% agree.

 

[FrapFrapper]

I was with everything you said as future sex options with Jared but nah I definitely want him as a female.

Fucking Jess in front of Jared, getting him erect before fucking her in the "insert most dominating and Jared humiliating way" and refusing to allow him to cum before "insert finishing with Jess in the most dominating and Jared humiliating way" before Gender Bending Jared into a Hot Blue Eyed Blonde(not enough of those in this game) who loses his erection but becomes aroused. Who we now tease until the point of begging to suck us off to lubricate us properly before fucking them in "insert in the most dominating and humiliating way" in the anus first before we begged to move to his newly formed pussy and then "fucked in the most dominating and humiliating way" all in front of a cognizant Jess until he agrees to being our new sexsubcum slave, get finished on or in and gets collared right in front of his sex subby girlfriend makes my blood boil in all the right ways.

Complete domination over a former enemy and his former lover all at once while remaining(straightish, I don't know. They're a girl now biologically.)

In meaner word terms: Bitching a former so-called Alpha Male in front of his bitch and making them sister bitches while remaining straight.


AHHHH THE EROTICISM POTENTIAL GLORIOUS I SAY GLORIOUS.

You just have to bring your new puppy on a leash to visit their Daddy. They should see what their progeny was meant to be. He would be so proud! With similiar art or dimisimiliar but erotic enough art and writing, someone could make a Azienda/Hangover Cat fanfiction spinoff of Jess, Jared, and MC's Dynamic alone with guest appearances by : Alice and Poison Dude, Liz and College Dude. NTR fansespecially NTR/Trap, NTR/Gay and NTR/Gender-Bender would eat that shit up! Spend good on subscriptions too.

Despite what I just wrote I'm neutral towards NTR. That neutrality goes down when I don't like "cuck" in question to pleasurable. I do not like Jared or Poison guy!

Why would you want to help Jared out, and give him a good time or a better life in the end? We should just turn him into a full sissy bitch and make him bottom for Demi, and slap a cuck cage his broken/torn dick from when we messed him up as a girl. Hell, we should make him the new Nikki from the prison, spare alpha breaker, and make him the prison bicycle bitch. That prison needs more bitch.... for the good of society and "their rehabilitation".

 

[JicioJ]

I wonder if lvl 4 MC will face off against an S-Class, even if they're weakened since as a level 3 we've already faced off against a weakened A-Class(Asura), and 2 on 1 against the green monster

 

[John3829]

I see a lot of talks and discussions about what powers or abilities the MC can cook up but not so much with what the MC can equip himself i.e weapons and tools. He's an adaptive powerhouse no doubt but that's all with in, Some good gear can really be helpful or come in clutch like the match up against Shen. MC got folded bad by Shen's mind powers and left him vulnerable to get captured, yes the tentacles stepped up and mom saved him from the nightmare version of eternal tsukuyomi but still MC got caught lacking, Something like a psychic hood would level the playing field. But what do you guys think?

 

[OmegaAlpga]

I see a lot of talks and discussions about what powers or abilities the MC can cook up but not so much with what the MC can equip himself i.e weapons and tools. He's an adaptive powerhouse no doubt but that's all with in, Some good gear can really be helpful or come in clutch like the match up against Shen. MC got folded bad by Shen's mind powers and left him vulnerable to get captured, yes the tentacles stepped up and mom saved him from the nightmare version of eternal tsukuyomi but still MC got caught lacking, Something like a psychic hood would level the playing field. But what do you guys think?

He needs Magneto's helmet, then.

 

[Sayajin2205]

Nah, i mean the MC being also "build different" by his 4 lvl like Henri said he and the other two top dogs were on that same evolution.

I also appreciate you taking the time to explain your view on the topic.

Don't forget Deus.The eye states the big three and Deus as aberrants .He was pretty clear about it and it makes sense with Deus.So we know 4 freaks among the freaks.

 

[BenoTF25]

Don't forget Deus.The eye states the big three and Deus as aberrants .He was pretty clear about it and it makes sense with Deus.So we know 4 freaks among the freaks.

You are right, but my liking for the 'theory' of Deus being the spawn of one of those Alien Deities Ella mentioned aside, I see him as something different.

The eye talk about the Big Three as Monstrosities, overwhelming creatures that normally wouldn't be allowed to live and thrive to such level of strength, Deus is different in his description, he is an 'Aberrant', something wrong is going on with, to the level than the eye can't even read him(like it did with Bernhardt), it even put on dobut if Deus is a superhuman at all, he is a freak, as much as the big three, but seemingly for a different reason, or at least an extra one beyond his power alone.

 

[DecadentDesires]

Why would you want to help Jared out, and give him a good time or a better life in the end? We should just turn him into a full sissy bitch and make him bottom for Demi, and slap a cuck cage his broken/torn dick from when we messed him up as a girl. Hell, we should make him the new Nikki from the prison, spare alpha breaker, and make him the prison bicycle bitch. That prison needs more bitch.... for the good of society and "their rehabilitation".

Sorry beforehand for not reacting to your post. I went, "HAM" yesterday with the reactions and have been hit with reaction limit block. I will do so once I'm unlimited.

To answer your question:

Because I want to sexually dominate a Blue Eyed, Big Breasted Blonde for my own amusement. Granted, you're right. It isn't much of a punishment, but everything you said, can still be done later when I've grown bored of my new subbie. I was thinking more my pleasure and reward for finally conquering an annoying pest than their punishment for irritating me and defying my will. There's so many nonlinear options a depraved enough erotic writer could go with Jade/Jared.

Prison bicycle bitch. I like that. "Everybody gets a ride." could be their marketing slogan.

You have great additional ideas that some fans out there would eat the fuck up. Good shit!

 

[DecadentDesires]

You are right, but my liking for the 'theory' of Deus being the spawn of one of those Alien Deities Ella mentioned aside, I see him as something different.

The eye talk about the Big Three as Monstrosities, overwhelming creatures that normally wouldn't be allowed to live and thrive to such level of strength, Deus is different in his description, he is an 'Aberrant', something wrong is going on with, to the level than the eye can't even read him(like it did with Bernhardt), it even put on dobut if Deus is a superhuman at all, he is a freak, as much as the big three, but seemingly for a different reason, or at least an extra one beyond his power alone.

Sorry beforehand for not reacting to your post. I went, "HAM" yesterday with the reactions and have been hit with reaction limit block. I will do so once I'm unlimited.

Don't forget the Eye looked at him called him a spawn then looked at him again a second later and declared him human. It couldn't even quickly discern if they were a spawn or human despite reading the whole Big Three near instantly. Valrav'n also seemed highly suspicious of him as an entity as well and if I remember correctly, found his existence repulsive and got away from him as soon as possible(this could've just been the sensed power differential, I don't know).

 

[shujuku]