Ren'Py Suspicious [v0.35] [Azteca]

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Overview:
You start the game for the scientist Dr. Henry, whom his superiors decide to dismiss from his job. In view of the circumstances, Henry does not find a solution better than to escape to the house that he once gave to his friend. There he decided to conduct an experiment on himself. However, Richard suddenly intervenes in the experiment. After that, Henry realizes that somehow, his mind has moved into Richard's body. This is where the game begins, you have to decide what you will do.
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Thread Update: 2024-09-25
Release Date: 2024-09-25
Developer: Azteca -

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Censored: No
Version: 0.35
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[RainMaker323]

Almost a gigabyte, 0.12 ... seems like there is plenty of content. Gonna give it a try.

 

[KeyvinCarter]

In the course of the experiment, which went a little 'beyond' the plan, Richard had to share his body with his long-time relative. Now they are 'trying' to find a way to get everything back.

Fullmetal alchemist on viagra. Nice

 

[Deleted member 15555]

@Azteca sounds pretty good, can you tell us about what type of content can we expect in the future? what type of game will be? vanilla clasic love or you will include some "fetishes" that some people may or not like?

 

[Dadboii]

Like the screenshots say Mom with the lady appearing in a cpl pics including one with her head in your lap
I feel there might be some incest there but, yush.
Even if that somehow is not the case, the game looks pretty good.

Some nice models and even a tomboy it seems.

Im going to try this one out tonight for sure.

 

[Azteca]

@Azteca sounds pretty good, can you tell us about what type of content can we expect in the future? what type of game will be? vanilla clasic love or you will include some "fetishes" that some people may or not like?

Corruption so far don t sure about vanilla, and maybe mind control but not to soon right now im planning more locations and events in them, to better simulate school.

 

[Loatgoan]

looks nice, ill check it

 

[Deleted member 15555]

Corruption so far don t sure about vanilla, and maybe mind control but not to soon right now im planning more locations and events in them, to better simulate school.

vanilla refering to games like dreams of desire, dating my daughter, melody, milfy city where all the romanceable heroines only have sex with the mc, what im asking is if you will focus the story on the mc only or there will be other male npcs i guess invested in the girls we can have.
also btw is there incest? or landlady as it is called those days xD

 

[Azteca]

vanilla refering to games like dreams of desire, dating my daughter, melody, milfy city where all the romanceable heroines only have sex with the mc, what im asking is if you will focus the story on the mc only or there will be other male npcs i guess invested in the girls we can have.
also btw is there incest? or landlady as it is called those days xD

There will be others male npc interested in girls.
Only groping and voyeurism in this version of the game.

 

[Deleted member 15555]

There will be others male npc interested in girls.
Only groping and voyeurism in this version of the game.

well i hope those male npc dont have sex with rubi or any other girl close to the mc

here is what i think after trying the game.

is kinda hard for me to get invested into the game because of it having 2 mcs at the same time, dunno if more people have this problem. Maybe in the future we can get rid of the kid or viceverse and be only 1 mc?
the english is pretty weird sometimes too, i guess you will need a editor in the future to help you.
also try in the future to avoid too much grind for stats or relationship points. (though we can always cheat the stats i guess some people enjoy playing the game with no cheats.)
So far i liked the game, the girls are pretty good looking (will see how you do in next updates)

 

[vengefulspirit]

The synopsis really needs to be expanded. It's two sentences long and seems to have very little to do with most of the sample images. Who is Richard as a character? Who does he share his body with? Why is Richard doing weird body sharing experiments when he is a school kid? Which characters does he have an interest in? How does the body sharing work, in a basic sense - does Richard retain full control and have the other character speaking in his ear, does he have to fight for control, does he black out when he sleeps and the other character does shit on their own?

1.2 gig is a big download for a lot of people, many people around the world are still on data caps, giving them more than two vague sentences is important. You should also probably look at compressing your image files, 1.2 gig seems exteremely large for the number of renders you have. Your patreon page has even less info on the game than this page does. You should fix that as well.

But on the plus side, your patreon tiers are simple, reasonably priced, and don't gate content, so huge props on that. A lot of devs get that really wrong, and youve gotten it right on your first try which is impressive. The renders also look quite good, with the exception of some weird posing. The blonde girls arms are reallllly thin and lanky, and the way she uses them is odd. In particular how she sits at the school desk looks incredibly uncomfortable.

Last little nitpick. Unless youre talking people marrying into the family, most relatives are long time relatives

Overall, best of luck on your game! It shows a lot of promise. All the issues I raised are easy fixes, for an otherwise really cool looking product.

 

[xmilteach]

Thx..

 

[mike32]

I wish, a hero will share compressed version

 

[B1r1b1r1]

Is there any chance the text speed can be fixed? The slider doesn't seem to do anything.

 

[Azteca]

The synopsis really needs to be expanded. It's two sentences long and seems to have very little to do with most of the sample images. Who is Richard as a character? Who does he share his body with? Why is Richard doing weird body sharing experiments when he is a school kid? Which characters does he have an interest in? How does the body sharing work, in a basic sense - does Richard retain full control and have the other character speaking in his ear, does he have to fight for control, does he black out when he sleeps and the other character does shit on their own?

1.2 gig is a big download for a lot of people, many people around the world are still on data caps, giving them more than two vague sentences is important. You should also probably look at compressing your image files, 1.2 gig seems exteremely large for the number of renders you have. Your patreon page has even less info on the game than this page does. You should fix that as well.

But on the plus side, your patreon tiers are simple, reasonably priced, and don't gate content, so huge props on that. A lot of devs get that really wrong, and youve gotten it right on your first try which is impressive. The renders also look quite good, with the exception of some weird posing. The blonde girls arms are reallllly thin and lanky, and the way she uses them is odd. In particular how she sits at the school desk looks incredibly uncomfortable.

Last little nitpick. Unless youre talking people marrying into the family, most relatives are long time relatives

Overall, best of luck on your game! It shows a lot of promise. All the issues I raised are easy fixes, for an otherwise really cool looking product.

The synopsis really needs to be expanded.

I agree with this

It's two sentences long and seems to have very little to do with most of the sample images.

Hm, I haven't thought about this problem before.

Who is Richard as a character? Who does he share his body with? Why is Richard doing weird body sharing experiments when he is a school kid?

- Richard goes to this experiment because he sees in the old man something like his hero, so he easily agrees. This is not fully covered in the story.

1.2 gig is a big download for a lot of people, many people around the world are still on data caps, giving them more than two vague sentences is important. You should also probably look at compressing your image files, 1.2 gig seems exteremely large for the number of renders you have. Your patreon page has even less info on the game than this page does. You should fix that as well.

- game size reduction on my to-do list
- patreon there also


The blonde girls arms are reallllly thin and lanky, and the way she uses them is odd. In particular how she sits at the school desk looks incredibly uncomfortable.

- I'll recheck it.

Overall, best of luck on your game! It shows a lot of promise. All the issues I raised are easy fixes, for an otherwise really cool looking product.

- Thank you for your detailed review.

 

[soleroth]

oh! would you look at all the pretty, definitely having a long hard look at this one.

 

[User_23654]

Here is a compressed pc and mac version of v0.12!

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[vengefulspirit]

- Richard goes to this experiment because he sees in the old man something like his hero, so he easily agrees. This is not fully covered in the story.

See this is the issue, not having played the game I had no idea who was doing the experiment, where the experiment was held, that an old man even existed etc. Given the description only mentioned Richard, I assumed he was doing the experiment. A description needs to tell the player roughly what to expect from a game WITHOUT the player having to play the game. And like a previous commenter mentioned, having a list of planned fetishes is also usually a good way to get people interested in your game. Many devs include a dev note in a spoiler box at the bottom of their OP. That's a good way of telling people what you intend for the game to develop towards.

Points you should cover in the description:
- One sentence on who Richard is as a character: his age, that he is a student, and a couple of defining character traits (ie. he might be smart, or kind, or scheming etc.)
- A brief description of the setting: where does the game take place (a small town, a bustling city etc.), where does the character live and who with, what is his school called and is there anything unique about it
- A description of the experiment and its immediate results: who is running the experiment, what are its goals, why does Richard sign up, who else signed up/was involved, what did the experiment do to the characters
- Finally give the player an idea of the games direction: How do the characters react to their change, what are the first things theyre going to do about it, what is the tone of the game (serious, comedy, mystery, romantic etc.)

You can honestly do all that in two-three small paragraphs. Look at some of the other descriptions of the higher rated games on this site for inspiration. Your page here and your patreon page is about you selling your game. Your sample images do a good job of it, but some people care a lot about writing, show them you can do it!

PS. @crust is a god.

 

[Minengeschoss]

Nice renders, but I don't understand anything. Because...

Language: English

Well, not exactly. The weird word order and incorrectly used words probably points to some Slavic language spoken with English vocabulary.

When there's no back story and the text utterly broken, it makes the game unplayable for me. Sorry.

 

[ecoli]

As stated by others,
Am 3 mins into this and i haven't a clue what's going on, pity because it looks good but 3 mins in is as far as I'm going. I might check back after a few updates to see if the writing has improved