RPGM Swan Song of the White Angels [v0.14.5B] [H.ERO]

[Rosen King]

Hi, dev here i haven't realize that when people read it the title they first thought was it a gay game but it not so i will change it title name, i created this game just for fun, well i still need to improve alot, sorry fo the inconvenience

I have bad news. "Lolita" is also a word that will make people assume it has a certain fetish, and I'm pretty sure it's a banned fetish on this site. You'll get an even more extreme reaction with a name like Lolita Adventures, lol.

Edit: Since some people seem to be reacting to this post two years after I made it, the context is that the dev had changed the name to Lolita Adventures at the time. They didn't change it to Swan Song of the White Angels until after enough people got confused and thought this was a loli game.

 

[wraec]

Its a fun game though. I like it

 

[RayAsher]

Certainly looks like an interesting game , best of luck

 

[H.ERO]

I have bad news. "Lolita" is also a word that will make people assume it has a certain fetish, and I'm pretty sure it's a banned fetish on this site. You'll get an even more extreme reaction with a name like Lolita Adventures, lol.

I have ask the staff member they say my game is safe Yay!

 

[anubis1970]

Not a bad start, I'm looking forward to see where this goes. I do have one suggestion, see if you can get a native English speaker to edit the dialog before you compile the game.

 

[H.ERO]

Not a bad start, I'm looking forward to see where this goes. I do have one suggestion, see if you can get a native English speaker to edit the dialog before you compile the game.

I have ask few people but they don't have time to help edit all of it, i be more careful on the new dialog and not force it like add comedic scenes like i did before

 

[deathknight002]

I have bad news. "Lolita" is also a word that will make people assume it has a certain fetish, and I'm pretty sure it's a banned fetish on this site. You'll get an even more extreme reaction with a name like Lolita Adventures, lol.

but it is also the name of the pc and a dress style not just sexual.

 

[deathknight002]

I have ask few people but they don't have time to help edit all of it, i be more careful on the new dialog and not force it like add comedic scenes like i did before

if you have what you want as a script i can edit it for you as english is my native and i have nothing else to do.
put it up here as a text doc and i will go through it and make it read better.

 

[.Inori]

I actually have interested in the game. Despite the grammar, I see some potentials in the game. The plot is one of my favorite fetishes, but this could have been developed more. Keep going.

I just start the game, and just think that it would be great to leave a review so yeah, here it is.

 

[.Inori]

if you have what you want as a script i can edit it for you as english is my native and i have nothing else to do.
put it up here as a text doc and i will go through it and make it read better.

Yeah, if you need someone to improve your editing, I will give you a hand

 

[H.ERO]

Thank both of you, currently i still focus on drawing the Arts maybe finish it in 2 days after that i focus on the dialog script and gameplay, maybe i ask deathknight first for help if he still have free time

 

[deathknight002]

Thank both of you, currently i still focus on drawing the Arts maybe finish it in 2 days after that i focus on the dialog script and gameplay, maybe i ask deathknight first for help if he still have free time

i will as i'm a childfree pensioner so i literally have nothing but time.

 

[shakey2]

Yeah i not a native English, my native is Indonesia i will try to improve the English text a little better in next update and more

Good luck on your learning experience. I respect your courage in putting yourself out there despite your limited understanding of the language. Don't take the harsh words too seriously. Most people (myself included) are just salty because of all the lazy bad machine translations out there.

 

[hirakoshinji2]

is the girl in the second pic a quad amputee?

 

[wraec]

is the girl in the second pic a quad amputee?

yep she is

 

[hirakoshinji2]

yep she is

Thanx will download

 

[Karnewarrior]

Good luck with English man, it's a tough language.

 

[Kmanlv]

This Game Rocks! Good Plot So Far! Better than prob 85%-90% of the Bondage or Body Mods games on here so far that I've tried that don't have a plot to hold it together only Body Mods!

 

[WellIGuess]

>organization named Kavliaris

Let me guess, they get their power from poutsa particles?

 

[FookU2]

Good luck with English man, it's a tough language.

Like, for real. With multiple words that look the same but mean different things and are pronounced differently...then multiple wods that look different, sound different, yet mean the exact same thing...then multiple words that even native English speakers think mean the same thing, but they have subtle difference...yeah...within languages that use an actual alphabet, it's gotta be top 3 most difficult. So bad that even native speakers can't get it right. lol
The phonetics make absolutely no sense. Tough & dough....driveway & parkway...restroom & bathroom....their, there, they're...you, ewe, ew..........wouldn't've, couldn't've, shouldn't've (for the Southerners haha)