You may be right about it being its own game but that just means its ending isnt good. Even if you plan on making a sequel you should still tie up the major plot points in the story except the over arching plot thatll connect all the games and you dont start a new plot thread right at the end. You can tease or foreshadow but you dont start it. how this game ended its like if at the end of episode 4 they showed imps invading hoth then rolled the credits.
Personally I think it wouldve been better to end after saving Drea and have the last planet be the start of episode 2. Maybe have some more interactions with the crew thrown in also.
Typos are inevitable unless you have multiple rounds of good-quality editing, which most stuff on f95 doesn't have the resources for. That being said, not sure what that screenshot is about because that line is fine. Not reading like ESL is already a big plus IMO.
That's why I'm not sure. The next line she spoke of was about "Fighter" pilots. So, I am confused.
well dev isn't native english speaker and even natives make grammatical errors.
"Freighter" is a class of spaceships used to transport commodities (
Says the one who didn't even capitalize the very first letter of the paragraph, didn't capitalize multiple I's, double-spaced, missed the period at the end, and also wrote a run-on sentence.
yeah, but it'd be diff if I wrote a game. I would do my best to write it. Don't hate the messenger lol.Says the one who didn't even capitalize the very first letter of the paragraph, didn't capitalize multiple I's, double-spaced, missed the period at the end, and also wrote a run-on sentence.
In case you are not aware, the developer Mortze is from a non-English speaking country. Spain if I recall correctly.
