Ok Moskyx,
I finally stumbled on to this 'fan game'...or VN sequel...or movie...call it what you will.
I applaud enthusiastically. It has some Serious art and story work and comes across very 'professional' (which is high praise from me) I enjoyed the graphics, development, and story line and look forward to seeing where it goes from here. I was especially surprised by the "Easter Egg" ala SW tradition but it also was very polished.
With the amount of effort you put in this first episode, I know the second will be a long time coming...which is ok by me.
In looking to offer helpful hints, I only found two text errors of any consequence...mispelled words are so easy to miss sometimes, so the text gets an "A" from me. The Easter Egg was only available after a very long wait at a dead screen at the end of the credits and you might want to shorten that up. It may have been waiting for a 'click' from me and since no one clicks during credits, you might want to make it automatic. As far as helpful hints in the story, the only 'put off' thing for me was that the MC was sooo dumb and docile throughout the majority of the plot it became uncomfortable. Giving him SOME competency greatly enhances his 'hero-believeability' later in the plot...(this guy was a little too wimpy) Please consider that in the future even though I know it can't be changed in this story. Other than that ...and for some of the text being pretty long between image/plot changes, I have little to add in the way of help.
It was THAT GOOD! Congratulations. I love a game / VN that emphasizes story over just h-scenes (which were also excellent animation). Yours rates among my top three games on F95. And that is saying something. Professor X10