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Both noted, thank you.
Both noted, thank you.
Yeah, there are millions words of dialogue and content currently in the game, so the amount of grammar mistakes is already a big higher than I'd like it to be.
Here have another...
Sneaky S is something I noticed a few times now.
I would really suggest you get someone to prove read your scripts and I mean all of them. There are a lot of mistakes there.
The only flaw of the game really. No hard feelings.
I had a friend that was a writer that had that same problem. Seems to hit even harder when your not writing a "standard" story. By the time they got done. What made there story (there story) was no longer there.Yeah, there are millions words of dialogue and content currently in the game, so the amount of grammar mistakes is already a big higher than I'd like it to be.
I intent to go back through all the older content, not only fixing the grammar issues, but also to
smooth out some of the writing. (especially level 5 for M&S).
However, my focus currently is 100% on producing new content, and I don't have time to do that, yet.
As for hiring a proofreader, we used to have one for a while, but unfortunately he had to stop
because of personal reason. (Although I'm expecting him to come back early 2023.)
Hiring another proofreader is not that easy for me, simply because it's hard for me
to trust someone else with my hard work.
I put 70/80 hours a week in Sweet Affection and I put everything that I have in it, and for me it's more than a job.
And, in the past when I hired proofreaders, well, let's just say that I had bad experiences with some of them.
- Some proofreaders like to make a script their own, instead of just fixing the mistakes.
- Or, some proofreaders can't handle the amount of work.
So, in order for me to hire someone, I don't only need to trust their capabilities, but also trust them personally.
And, of course something like that isn't build in one day.
So, after a couple bad experiences, I just decided to do it myself, and to do my best.
I know that it's not 100% perfect, and trust me... each time someone posts a grammar mistake, I want to hit myself in the face.
But, I like to believe that I'm still doing a good job of it.
Of course I'd like to have everything 100% perfect, right away.
But is still a game in development, so small mistakes are to be expected. (And, apart from coding, all work is being done by 1 person.)
But, 100% sure.
Before this game is finished, all grammar and visual mistakes will be fixed.
I agree and shared some of my thoughts on that a long time ago, but it is what it is. While if it those happen that way it would not be the direction I would have liked the story to go ultimately what I like about the story still outweighs what I dislike.
I mean AFAIK it hasn't happened yet... I hope J..D changes his mind about that.
I think everyone knows that I don't like giving out spoilers regarding the story and the events.
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Please don't misunderstand me. I DO want you to tell your story it's YOUR game after all.I think everyone knows that I don't like giving out spoilers regarding the story and the events.
So, I'm not going to do that.
And, regarding me changing my mind?
I hope that this is not going to sound too harsh or disrespectful, because I don't mean it like that.
But, I follow my own ideas and plan and have done that since day 1.
I know that a lot of people want to see different things, and that is okay.
But, this is the story that I want to tell. (Oof, suddenly Final Fantasy 10 flashbacks.
One thing that I will say though,regarding this topic, and I will put this in spoiler tags.
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