RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.65] [Fujino]

[4-kun]

you totally understand me the opposite.

What make a good NTR game? It will never be a good NTR story if the girl is a slut nympho from the start, or if the girl get corrupted by the antagonist who isn't even trying. The more the couple are bonded to each other, the more the two loves each other, the tastier the fruit will be when the girl get inevitably corrupted in the end.

What I want to see is that Asuna tried to fight against her lust to Inoda with her love to kirito, but no matter how much she tried, the fate makes her fall from body to mind, and become cumdump only for Inoda as we all already knew from the beginning.

Why I like that her affection to Kirito goes back to 100. It's because it's a really good way to tell a story where the female protagonist struggle between her body lust to Inoda with her mind affection to Kirito. I don't mean for "desperate to take back a girl". No, not at all. I want to see her struggle. But no matter how much she try, she can't change the end story. And this is not reflected by the affection meter, it's beyond that, which is called fate(or Fujino's taste).

Absolutely valid points. I would argue that the portrayal of the MC is also crucial for a good NTR. The MC should not be completely clueless; he should figure out at some point that something is wrong and at least comment on things and try to interfere at times. There are many ways to portray believable behavior, such as overconfidence, fear of confrontation, emotional dependence, lack of suspicion, etc. There is no need to make the MC blind, deaf, and braindead ^^

 

[ViihX]

This update was great.

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[Queen_Nothing]

This update was great.

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Agreed, but hopefully their PoV will have the effects that were missing. It makes sense we didn't get the effects because they were 'cut-ins' while we played Kirito.

 

[4-kun]

This update was great.

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Disagree, the purpose of the event was to highlight a breakthrough in the relationship, and it was intended to be impactful. If he had focused on Inoda x Asuna, that would have been simply another scene.

 

[kinglionheart]

This update was great.

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This was Kirito's POV of the event. Of course we don't get enough to satisfy us. We have to wait to get update to get Asuna's POV for the full experience. There is even the in-game explanation of his new skill to explain why he can't hear sounds unrelated to battle.

It is like the Lustful Night all over again. We have a wait extra long time for the hottest sex scene so far. Damn Fujino and his torture.

 

[ViihX]

Agreed, but hopefully their PoV will have the effects that were missing. It makes sense we didn't get the effects because they were 'cut-ins' while we played Kirito.

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[4-kun]

This was Kirito's POV of the event. Of course we don't get enough to satisfy us. We have to wait to get update to get Asuna's POV for the full experience. There is even the in-game explanation of his new skill to explain why he can't hear sounds unrelated to battle.

It is like the Lustful Night all over again. We have a wait extra long time for the hottest sex scene so far. Damn Fujino and his torture.

Thats such a stupid skill Not that he would hear anything midbattle anyway ^^

 

[kinglionheart]

Thats such a stupid skill Not that he would hear anything midbattle anyway ^^

You don't know! Maybe Kirito was able to curb stomp everyone was because they were so horny from hearing Asuna loud moans of pleasure. Or maybe Inoda used his skill so no one can see and hear them thus making Kirito's skill superfluous.

 

[albakr0ss]

Hey can someone confirm, I was replaying the latest update again to see if I missed anything and after the train scene if you go to the boys bathroom you can actually hear Asuna masturbating to what happened to her earlier? Even dirty talking herself?

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Hey can someone confirm, I was replaying the latest update again to see if I missed anything and after the train scene if you go to the boys bathroom you can actually hear Asuna masturbating to what happened to her earlier? Even dirty talking herself?

Yes, you can hear her if you go to the bathroom before going to class, but not actually SEE her. It's just one of the two (I believe?) missable 'story-bits' of the update, the other one is seeing Hebishima and Leafa heading down to the undercity if you head that way after seeing them but before going back to the house to head for the Bird Quest.

 

[basejr]

But fixes, almost always after every new version release Fujino makes one, sometimes two, 'updates' to fix bugs that escaped him when testing the chapter for himself (Which are even more noticeable now that he's way busier even if understandable), so he takes notes of the reported bugs in his comment section and fixes them with an update.

Ahh i see. Thankyou bro

 

[noiceman420]

Does the player get ntr or he does the ntr?

 

[LordFrz]

Does the player get ntr or he does the ntr?

The player is playing the game behind a screen. But Kirito gets NTRd.

 

[gaka200]

This was Kirito's POV of the event. Of course we don't get enough to satisfy us. We have to wait to get update to get Asuna's POV for the full experience. There is even the in-game explanation of his new skill to explain why he can't hear sounds unrelated to battle.

It is like the Lustful Night all over again. We have a wait extra long time for the hottest sex scene so far. Damn Fujino and his torture.

That part makes this the most amusing to me. This is too similar to the lustful night, because we have to wait for a long period of time again. Hopefully it's not another 5 months like the last time.

 

[kinglionheart]

That part makes this the most amusing to me. This is too similar to the lustful night, because we have to wait for a long period of time again. Hopefully it's not another 5 months like the last time.

As long as he doesn't announce he has to leave the country again. My little kokoro can't take the pain again.

 

[SaiyaTop]

This?
https://f95zone.to/threads/sword-ar...agic-part-2-v0-31-fujino.154352/post-13062664

oh thank i didn't see lol

 

[oozaru2023]

I had made a video with all the scenes of the cabin with the storm in the background I uploaded it to my KO FI I don't know if anyone wants it xd

 

[NitroZus]

I had made a video with all the scenes of the cabin with the storm in the background I uploaded it to my KO FI I don't know if anyone wants it xd

where the hell is your ko fi then?

 

[Fashionable Bandit Killer]

я так понял
та где они доме то это пока конец

 

[killerjeb]

Absolutely valid points. I would argue that the portrayal of the MC is also crucial for a good NTR. The MC should not be completely clueless; he should figure out at some point that something is wrong and at least comment on things and try to interfere at times. There are many ways to portray believable behavior, such as overconfidence, fear of confrontation, emotional dependence, lack of suspicion, etc. There is no need to make the MC blind, deaf, and braindead ^^

I agree, and in the part 2 where Kirito become suspicious on what is happening is exactly what you are talking about. And it's good.

I think when his cuckold meter goes high enough, he will start to enjoy it.