RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.65] [Fujino]

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Tomorrow we should be getting a progress report so hang in there guys.

Nothing, people just love discussing their theories, opinions on the game or general NTR stuff lol

When Fujino takes a 2 months break this tend to happen, people get so bored it slowly but surely gets more and more off-topic...we're gonna see the thread getting closed right before the next update again at this rate, aren't we?

 

[avervon]

I do tend to view parodies or these kind of stories within a vacuum, so I've been mostly enjoying the narrative being portrayed. Some illogical NTR logic just gets thrown to the side in my head because it's NTR. But anyways in regards to us rooting for Inoda, I personally doubt it'll happen. People were already complaining about Fujino's comment about humanizing Inoda, or making him more relatable.

I think people are just more interested in the "fall", and if not others then I can say that's pretty much what I'm interested in. Asuna canonically isn't really a character that would cheat, she's the type of character that would ideally be firm in her stances and morals. This makes her someone people would be interested in seeing how she falls and gets corrupted mainly due to how hard it should be.

In Kirito's case, he should be more or less similar to Asuna, but we're less interested in him falling since Asuna is the one most are here for. In relation to the example you mentioned, I'm rooting for the other "NTR protagonist" and that is Suguha trying to corrupt Kirito and steal him from Asuna rofl.

My personal experience to enjoying this game has to do with the conquering of Asuna, Suguha's domination, and the quirky game element ideas that Fujino introduced that feels new, fresh, and maybe exciting. Mainly my favorite part are the battles, even if all you do is press "Attack" to see the CGs, the basic narrative of that moment is similar to the BF or Husband lounging around obliviously while the GF/Wife is getting plowed by the next door neighbor. But I suppose it's just fun to see it happen in a more "real time" kind of sense, makes it exciting I suppose.



I'd jokingly say you've analyzed this game a little too much. I never really thought deep enough to make those connections, and just liked how decently logical most interactions have been portrayed, with whatever exciting corrupted twist is portrayed to us as well. My emphasis on decently logical is that while this game/story embraces the NTR tropes, it's doing it in a much more interestingly fun way.

While everyone is a little unhinged and trying to go behind everyone's backs stealing either Kirito or Asuna from their SO, the way everyone goes about it is generally fun and amusing. I like how Liz thinks she has the upper hand, and definitely makes some progress with Kirito, but doesn't realize she made a deal with the devil that is Inoda. Inoda constantly lies and plays down his results to Liz to maintain the upper hand. It's similar to how you mentioned that Inoda corrupting Kyoko is showing his "true power" so to speak. So everyone that dares interact with him is dancing in the palm of his hands, due to 50% genius, and 50% luck/coincidence/god intervention.

Suguha being corrupted by NTR therefore ends up trying to corrupt Kirito is also a fun way to go about it and I do like the potential Sinon and Hebishima storyline being portrayed. Some people think Sinon wants revenge; while I personally would go down the route similar to what you mentioned and that's Sinon got corrupted by NTR and is now the yandere possessive one in her relationship with Hebishima instead of Hebishima being control.

Basically NTR in this game isn't as you mentioned so plain and simple and that's what makes the ride fun.



King lion does mention that some of the npcs are back, so we can only hope. The only NPCs I really cared about though was the green haired guy, the charlie friend getting cucked without knowing, and that guy that looked like Inoda somehow dominating everyone else in the city. I personally don't miss the NPCs that were definitely filler, instead of being around for Kirito to make small comments about, which is why I mentioned the 3 NPCs from earlier. Green-haired guy shows like you mentioned where Kirito can end up. Charlie was a friend getting cucked in real-time that would make Kirito question some of the events that are happening to himself. I did like how whenever Kirito got anonymous messages that showed Asuna getting sexually harassed, Kirito ended up thinking it was Charlie who sent him the video. Lastly the Big Glasses dude is the opposite of the green-haired guy, which is Kirito's exposure to the one that will cuck others instead of the cuck (green hair guy) himself.

In terms of stuff I miss from Part 1; I mainly miss the black-market video store. That idea from Part 1 was one of the most interactive ways to see the NTR happen in a logical "non-recollection event" fashion. I'm hoping the store comes back, or the brothel does something to take its place.

I definitely did overanalyze. I think a better way to summarize my wall of text is that Fujino's writing feels natural and plays into itself. Nothing feels like it oversteps its boundaries to the point that I need to suspend my disbelief in order to make the writing believable. It's not 100% faithful to the characters, but it's faithful enough that I can say "If I were to write an NTR of SAO characters, this wouldn't seem out of place."

I think the fact that I can point out certain dynamics and story elements that are replicated in other stories is a decent sign that the writing isn't NTR fetish content with a story conveniently attached to it; the story is made with NTR in mind and attempts to make it cohesive.

The one part I fondly remember from Part 1 was when Kirito was working at the love hotel while his sister was getting banged three floors above in real time. That was fun.

I will also say, I appreciate how willing Fujino is to experiment with the various ways to show off NTR in his games. It's never stale, and the various ways that SAO NTR (as well as his previous games) portrays the gradual (or immediate) corruption is nice.

 

[Mimimon]

What the hell is going on? Can you summarize it for me? I can't keep up.

just ignore them bro, they are just have too much free time for a NTR game lol. I wonder why they have to put in so much effort in writing a lot of non-sense words. I just download when a new update is on and play the game. That's it

 

[avervon]

just ignore them bro, they are just have too much free time for a NTR game lol. I wonder why they have to put in so much effort in writing a lot of non-sense words. I just download when a new update is on and play the game. That's it

How dare you speak the truth about my misplaced fixation on this game

 

[4-kun]

I definitely did overanalyze. I think a better way to summarize my wall of text is that Fujino's writing feels natural and plays into itself. Nothing feels like it oversteps its boundaries to the point that I need to suspend my disbelief in order to make the writing believable. It's not 100% faithful to the characters, but it's faithful enough that I can say "If I were to write an NTR of SAO characters, this wouldn't seem out of place."

I think the fact that I can point out certain dynamics and story elements that are replicated in other stories is a decent sign that the writing isn't NTR fetish content with a story conveniently attached to it; the story is made with NTR in mind and attempts to make it cohesive.

The one part I fondly remember from Part 1 was when Kirito was working at the love hotel while his sister was getting banged three floors above in real time. That was fun.

I will also say, I appreciate how willing Fujino is to experiment with the various ways to show off NTR in his games. It's never stale, and the various ways that SAO NTR (as well as his previous games) portrays the gradual (or immediate) corruption is nice.

While I also like Fujino's experiments and especially how he directs the genre narrative—it's probably what interests me most in the game and keeps me playing it—I personally am not into the main story because there are some really story-breaking issues that I can't overlook. To name a few: the admin's restrictions on Kirito, which make him literally unable to build up suspicion; the overforced favoritism of Inoda; and the "VR is not real" aspect, which breaks the main foundation of SAO.

Btw, I don't want to start arguing about it (again), but I wanted to share a partially opposed opinion.

 

[kinglionheart]

When Fujino takes a 2 months break this tend to happen, people get so bored it slowly but surely gets more and more off-topic...we're gonna see the thread getting closed right before the next update again at this rate, aren't we?

That is what happens when Fujino conditions our dick to expect a release at the same time every month. Without that release all that excitement still needs to go somewhere. Maybe closing the thread will be the result again. Blame Fujino!

 

[4-kun]

That is what happens when Fujino conditions our dick to expect a release at the same time every month. Without that release all that excitement still needs to go somewhere. Maybe closing the thread will be the result again. Blame Fujino!

Are we still talking about the thread, or are we drifting off to the necessities of the physical realm?

 

[Heinz42]

Is the dev going to add non ntr ending? I hope so, because this is the first ntr game where i feel bad for the mc and dont to him to be cuckolded.

 

[SixDates]

Is the dev going to add non ntr ending? I hope so, because this is the first ntr game where i feel bad for the mc and dont to him to be cuckolded.

Unfortunately for you, while I do sometimes feel bad for Cuckito, there is no way there is going to be a happy ending for him.


That being said, this is something that makes me wonder if, during the next update, the piglet got a heart attack in the middle of fuck session with Asuna or Kyoko, and Inoda simply dies outright, would Asuna at this point is already considered to have gotten Netorare´d?
Because, while it´s clear that she is still in the process of falling into a deep corruption, nowhere near the end goal of what she will be by the climax of the game, she is still a cheater who ruined her relationship beyond repair.

Although, to me, the very first time she agreed to show her breasts to Inoda she already crossed a line I would never forgive, it´s interesting to think that while Kirito right now is an absolute cuck, Asuna technically still hasn´t gotten NTR´ed. Even if she is teetering on the edge of the cliff that is called Inoda´s fat cock.


Besides all that, and with me ignoring my desperate need for more Suguha content, I would really love it if, at some point in the future, Fujino gives us a side-by-side of Kirito and Asuna having disappointing next to the little piglet blowing Slutsuna´s back.
This could be implemented in several different ways, but perhaps the most fitting scenario would be with Asuna remembering a previous encounter with Inoda, or fantasying about a future one while getting tickled by Kirito´s little guy.

Fujino is at his best when he tries to put a spin of originality to his lewd scenes like he did with the treehouse event, so I´m sure he could come up with something fun that would work with this concept.

 

[4-kun]

Unfortunately for you, while I do sometimes feel bad for Cuckito, there is no way there is going to be a happy ending for him.


That being said, this is something that makes me wonder if, during the next update, the piglet got a heart attack in the middle of fuck session with Asuna or Kyoko, and Inoda simply dies outright, would Asuna at this point is already considered to have gotten Netorare´d?
Because, while it´s clear that she is still in the process of falling into a deep corruption, nowhere near the end goal of what she will be by the climax of the game, she is still a cheater who ruined her relationship beyond repair.

Although, to me, the very first time she agreed to show her breasts to Inoda she already crossed a line I would never forgive, it´s interesting to think that while Kirito right now is an absolute cuck, Asuna technically still hasn´t gotten NTR´ed. Even if she is teetering on the edge of the cliff that is called Inoda´s fat cock.


Besides all that, and with me ignoring my desperate need for more Suguha content, I would really love it if, at some point in the future, Fujino gives us a side-by-side of Kirito and Asuna having disappointing next to the little piglet blowing Slutsuna´s back.
This could be implemented in several different ways, but perhaps the most fitting scenario would be with Asuna remembering a previous encounter with Inoda, or fantasying about a future one while getting tickled by Kirito´s little guy. View attachment 3989225

Fujino is at his best when he tries to put a spin of originality to his lewd scenes like he did with the treehouse event, so I´m sure he could come up with something fun that would work with this concept.

Nah, that relationship is beyond repair. She would probably go along with it for some time, but in the long run, she'd start cheating. However, she'd be unable to ever find a real replacement for Inoda, living a frustrated life until the end.

 

[Deleted member 6471677]

God's Blessing on This Cursed Ring is amazing, not because the lewd scenes are admittedly incredible hot, but because it might

The best part is the animations are all mpgs so you can just download his 8 gig game and watch the videos.

 

[AlphaDlaW]

There was one NTR doujin I found particularly interesting in which a woman got "cucked" by the new neighbor next to them. It started out as an NTR, but progressed into a story in which the reader rooted for the heroine to get stolen away from her boyfriend. This was because throughout the story, it is revealed that the boyfriend is a terrible person who talked behind her back and degraded her to his friends, while the bull was an incredibly sweet person who cared for the woman. In this sense, the NTR becomes justified and transitions into a case of loyalty being punished and infidelity being rewarded.

This SAO parody is great in that there is a lot of potential that Fujino has set up because of how meticulous the build up has been. Now can SAO pull off a similar scenario as unique as what I've outlined above? Probably not. Inoda has already been portrayed as an irredeemable antagonist, and any attempt to portray him in a positive light in a vacuum would be going against the narrative Fujino has been writing. In addition, Kirito wouldn't be the type to cheat on Asuna, at least canonically.

With how Fujino has been pushing the dual "corruption" of Kirito between both Liz and Suguha, I'd be interested in knowing if people would begin to justify Asuna cheating with a more caring Inoda if Kirito indulged in other women of his own volition, or if that would ruin the NTR fantasy that's been happening up to this point.

it would ruin it for me.

 

[Aniky Light]

in your opinion, is a ntr about Kairi and Sora (KH) feasible?, because Sora is like Kirito, very protective, and like Asuna and Kirito, Sora and Kairi also have a strong bond

 

[mrbeat12333]

anything new guys??? some one tell me

 

[hecom]

anything new guys??? some one tell me

a bonus game might drop next week and ntr online update by the end of September.

 

[variaNTR]

Is the dev going to add non ntr ending? I hope so, because this is the first ntr game where i feel bad for the mc and dont to him to be cuckolded.

I don't think so since all the NTR events so far are unavoidable (unless Dev would go back to rework on some stuff at the beginning of the game for NO-NTR route which is unlikely imo). Or do you mean the route or ending where Kirito wins his girl(s) back? (which I think is still unlikely for Dev to implement it anyway )

 

[oozaru2023]

I love correcting other people's work xd

 

[Misarmor]

I love correcting other people's work xd
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[Kiri-Be]

Is the dev going to add non ntr ending? I hope so, because this is the first ntr game where i feel bad for the mc and dont to him to be cuckolded.

Then go play something else? Maybe not a NTR game? Why do people always try to change the main theme of the game into something it is not.


NTR is already niche and hard enough to find.

 

[4-kun]

Then go play something else? Maybe not a NTR game? Why do people always try to change the main theme of the game into something it is not.


NTR is already niche and hard enough to find.

1613 titles is not what I would call niche, tbh