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Despite the fact that I liked the update, in my opinion there are fundamental flaws in the scenes with Asuna.

The scene in FOG after Asuna received the clothes from Liz was supposed to be done. Yes, the author is trying to tell us that now for Asuna, sex is in the game, it's like smoking a cigarette and showing all her activity is basically impossible... But in my opinion, this scene is crucial! The bottom line is that when talking to Kirito, Asuna wonders how long it will take for him to appear in the game, and then we find her there with Inoda having sex. That's the most important thing! If earlier they had sex either because of chance encounters in the game (yes, they were all set up by Inoda), or Inoda himself dragged Asuna into the game for sex, now Asuna dragged Inoda into the game for sex with him, because she was not satisfied the previous night. And in this scene, the author could show Asunas acceptance that sex with Kirito IN THE GAME is no longer interesting to her at all, and she wants to fuck exclusively with Inoda. In the dialogue during sex, you could write a couple of phrases like, "Yes, that's what I needed yesterday! ". And in my opinion, Asuna's change should definitely be reflected in a full-fledged scene. BUT maybe the author still plans to do something like this in the future, although there are doubts(

And about the battles. Again, in my opinion, the miasma scene is unnecessary. Yes, the author has already created a scene in the forest with a Asuna in Koikatsu, but he could have made fragments from it for a regular battle. Like that.
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But, as for me, it would be better if it were like this! As in the first part of the game
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This is for an example. Kirito in the game itself approach the monster and start fighting, and we are shown a screen with Asuna and Inoda and their negotiations with Kirito.
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Why I think their negotiations are fundamental and their absence in the latest update is the author's mistake.

If this was an ordinary campaign against monsters, then Asuna's disregard for combat would be understandable. but! This quest is actually initiated by Asuna. She's the most interested in the outcome of the quest, but in the game it turns out that she doesn't care if they finish this quest or not... "Oh, big deal, they couldn't bring Yui back into the game. But I got fucked!" Seriously?! She can have sex in a game with Inoda any day and in any quantity. Therefore, I think that such a development is rather stupid. Sex is necessary in battles, but Asuna should try to support Kirito at the same time. Inoda build their own dirty tricks)

By type

Asuna - Inoda, let go! I can't see the battle!

Inoda - Relax! I'm in control of everything! Hehe! Kirito-senpai doesn't need any support right now...

---

Asuna-Kirito, I'm going to fire a spell now. Move a little bit

Inoda-Senpai, stand still. I'm going to shoot now too! Ha-ha

and so on.

Again, the characters' conversations make the scene much more exciting.

Well, there would be no dissatisfaction that there is no scene of Asuna's POV)

That's how I would change this update. But, there is what there is, and in principle it turned out to be acceptable.
 

Alex040677

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I'll say my piece, I wasn't completely satisfied with the update. I liked the sex scenes during the battle phase less in the second part from Kirito's one and only perspective, on this point I preferred part 1 of the game when Asuna is captured by the criminals and Inoda finds her and fucks her first in the cell and then in the hotel. It's clear that Asuna is practically submissive to Inoda, an interesting aspect, but it would have been more interesting to see her more attracted, like in the latest update where you can see the kisses on Inoda's penis as if to say that she enjoyed it well. I find the sex scene with Kirito useless and superfluous, short and you see little is nothing. I hope I've seen everything and not missed anything. The last scene is Liz's who also leaves time running out. In addition there is an unseen scene when Kirito in the house in the FOG hears voices in the warehouse on the second floor and sees and doesn't see that Asuna and Inoda are having sex, I found no trace of that scene. I would have expected more since it's been almost two months, I hope for something more intense and provocative. I hope that Asuna at some point becomes totally independent and without limits of modesty in having sex with Inoda.
 
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Aniky Light

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if in real life Asuna will go on her own initiative to fuck with Inoda, then there is no point in bribing her and therefore it is understood that the relationship between Asuna and Kirito is over and therefore Game Over
Asuna: Kirito, I'm going to get milk (I'm going to drink Inoda's cum)
Kirito: ah, okay, I have to go train with two personal trainers (Sinon and Suguha)
 

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Despite the fact that I liked the update, in my opinion there are fundamental flaws in the scenes with Asuna.

The scene in FOG after Asuna received the clothes from Liz was supposed to be done. Yes, the author is trying to tell us that now for Asuna, sex is in the game, it's like smoking a cigarette and showing all her activity is basically impossible... But in my opinion, this scene is crucial! The bottom line is that when talking to Kirito, Asuna wonders how long it will take for him to appear in the game, and then we find her there with Inoda having sex. That's the most important thing! If earlier they had sex either because of chance encounters in the game (yes, they were all set up by Inoda), or Inoda himself dragged Asuna into the game for sex, now Asuna dragged Inoda into the game for sex with him, because she was not satisfied the previous night. And in this scene, the author could show Asunas acceptance that sex with Kirito IN THE GAME is no longer interesting to her at all, and she wants to fuck exclusively with Inoda. In the dialogue during sex, you could write a couple of phrases like, "Yes, that's what I needed yesterday! ". And in my opinion, Asuna's change should definitely be reflected in a full-fledged scene. BUT maybe the author still plans to do something like this in the future, although there are doubts(

And about the battles. Again, in my opinion, the miasma scene is unnecessary. Yes, the author has already created a scene in the forest with a Asuna in Koikatsu, but he could have made fragments from it for a regular battle. Like that.
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There's a forum member who does them well)))

But, as for me, it would be better if it were like this! As in the first part of the game
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This is for an example. Kirito in the game itself approach the monster and start fighting, and we are shown a screen with Asuna and Inoda and their negotiations with Kirito.
View attachment 4483197
View attachment 4483199
Why I think their negotiations are fundamental and their absence in the latest update is the author's mistake.

If this was an ordinary campaign against monsters, then Asuna's disregard for combat would be understandable. but! This quest is actually initiated by Asuna. She's the most interested in the outcome of the quest, but in the game it turns out that she doesn't care if they finish this quest or not... "Oh, big deal, they couldn't bring Yui back into the game. But I got fucked!" Seriously?! She can have sex in a game with Inoda any day and in any quantity. Therefore, I think that such a development is rather stupid. Sex is necessary in battles, but Asuna should try to support Kirito at the same time. Inoda build their own dirty tricks)

By type

Asuna - Inoda, let go! I can't see the battle!

Inoda - Relax! I'm in control of everything! Hehe! Kirito-senpai doesn't need any support right now...

---

Asuna-Kirito, I'm going to fire a spell now. Move a little bit

Inoda-Senpai, stand still. I'm going to shoot now too! Ha-ha

and so on.

Again, the characters' conversations make the scene much more exciting.

Well, there would be no dissatisfaction that there is no scene of Asuna's POV)

That's how I would change this update. But, there is what there is, and in principle it turned out to be acceptable.
You explained it perfectly. The fact there’s no POV or CG for some scenes takes away development and context. It just comes across as rushed
 

Aniky Light

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I don't mind at all if Kirito cheated on Asuna, as if to say "why you and not me?" fuck it, I'll do it anyway
 

Alex040677

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if in real life Asuna will go on her own initiative to fuck with Inoda, then there is no point in bribing her and therefore it is understood that the relationship between Asuna and Kirito is over and therefore Game Over
Asuna: Kirito, I'm going to get milk (I'm going to drink Inoda's cum)
Kirito: ah, okay, I have to go train with two personal trainers (Sinon and Suguha)
I think this is the point.. at a certain point Asuna will be completely dependent on Inoda and will look for him to have sex as apparently happens in FOG.. The relationship between Inoda is very different from the one with Kirito. The first is only about sex and pleasure therefore material and the awareness that enjoyment is transgression and pleasure is a natural and instinctive stimulus which she can't resist. The relationship with Kirito is about love, affection. There is a nice NTR both in comic and in video now I don't remember the title in which the wife agrees to go to work for her husband's boss to help him with his problems and submits to all types of depravity of the boss. At a certain point and in the end she herself becomes dependent on him and admits and accepts the fact that only with him can she enjoy asking for forgiveness while having sex with the boss who can enjoy in an uncontrolled way and so much only when she has sex with the boss without her husband knowing, but it is also understood that despite this desire now perverse she continues to love her husband. This should be for Asuna too or would that be the best way.

In the end the purpose or one of the endings should show that Asuna has become a real slut or whore unable to resist and wanting sex only and exclusively with Inoda.
 
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I don't mind at all if Kirito cheated on Asuna, as if to say "why you and not me?" fuck it, I'll do it anyway
He already does this, in the fog with Liz and Sinon, of course there is an excuse for Sinon, but this is the level when Asuna also justified herself by helping Inoda. And now Suguha is also in irl. Some Chinese fans are even complaining about this - “ Three different female supporting characters were created specifically for Kirito. What, Kirito is a winner in life and Inoda is a shoe picker?”
 

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You explained it perfectly. The fact there’s no POV or CG for some scenes takes away development and context. It just comes across as rushed
People has forgotten it, but in the past this happened quite a few times, sometimes Fujino would finish an update without adding the other PoV in the rec. room and only add it to the next one. The times he didn't are, sadly, almost always exclusively reserved for the secondary characters (Like how there was no PoV at all of the like 3 times Suguha first took advantage of Kirito's body by herself despite how they were the turning point of her character arc). So it may still be in the next one :O
 
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Despite the fact that I liked the update, in my opinion there are fundamental flaws in the scenes with Asuna.

The scene in FOG after Asuna received the clothes from Liz was supposed to be done. Yes, the author is trying to tell us that now for Asuna, sex is in the game, it's like smoking a cigarette and showing all her activity is basically impossible... But in my opinion, this scene is crucial! The bottom line is that when talking to Kirito, Asuna wonders how long it will take for him to appear in the game, and then we find her there with Inoda having sex. That's the most important thing! If earlier they had sex either because of chance encounters in the game (yes, they were all set up by Inoda), or Inoda himself dragged Asuna into the game for sex, now Asuna dragged Inoda into the game for sex with him, because she was not satisfied the previous night. And in this scene, the author could show Asunas acceptance that sex with Kirito IN THE GAME is no longer interesting to her at all, and she wants to fuck exclusively with Inoda. In the dialogue during sex, you could write a couple of phrases like, "Yes, that's what I needed yesterday! ". And in my opinion, Asuna's change should definitely be reflected in a full-fledged scene. BUT maybe the author still plans to do something like this in the future, although there are doubts(

And about the battles. Again, in my opinion, the miasma scene is unnecessary. Yes, the author has already created a scene in the forest with a Asuna in Koikatsu, but he could have made fragments from it for a regular battle. Like that.
View attachment 4483191
There's a forum member who does them well)))

But, as for me, it would be better if it were like this! As in the first part of the game
View attachment 4483193
This is for an example. Kirito in the game itself approach the monster and start fighting, and we are shown a screen with Asuna and Inoda and their negotiations with Kirito.
View attachment 4483197
View attachment 4483199
Why I think their negotiations are fundamental and their absence in the latest update is the author's mistake.

If this was an ordinary campaign against monsters, then Asuna's disregard for combat would be understandable. but! This quest is actually initiated by Asuna. She's the most interested in the outcome of the quest, but in the game it turns out that she doesn't care if they finish this quest or not... "Oh, big deal, they couldn't bring Yui back into the game. But I got fucked!" Seriously?! She can have sex in a game with Inoda any day and in any quantity. Therefore, I think that such a development is rather stupid. Sex is necessary in battles, but Asuna should try to support Kirito at the same time. Inoda build their own dirty tricks)

By type

Asuna - Inoda, let go! I can't see the battle!

Inoda - Relax! I'm in control of everything! Hehe! Kirito-senpai doesn't need any support right now...

---

Asuna-Kirito, I'm going to fire a spell now. Move a little bit

Inoda-Senpai, stand still. I'm going to shoot now too! Ha-ha

and so on.

Again, the characters' conversations make the scene much more exciting.

Well, there would be no dissatisfaction that there is no scene of Asuna's POV)

That's how I would change this update. But, there is what there is, and in principle it turned out to be acceptable.
Excellent analysis friend, many think that we are talking about the update badly in general, although we mean only Asuna's scenes in it. In general, the update, although not long, brought us new mechanics and scenes of Sugu, Sinon and Liz, they were all good.
 

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He already does this, in the fog with Liz and Sinon, of course there is an excuse for Sinon, but this is the level when Asuna also justified herself by helping Inoda. And now Suguha is also in irl. Some Chinese fans are even complaining about this - “ Three different female supporting characters were created specifically for Kirito. What, Kirito is a winner in life and Inoda is a shoe picker?”
Can't really blame the chi ese players. The fact that Kirito is still getting all the girls despite this being NTR game is jarring.

It really cheapens the whole thing like he is going to lose Asuna and perhaps even Liz but what is the point if he still has Suguha and Sinon ?
 

Aniky Light

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He already does this, in the fog with Liz and Sinon, of course there is an excuse for Sinon, but this is the level when Asuna also justified herself by helping Inoda. And now Suguha is also in irl. Some Chinese fans are even complaining about this - “ Three different female supporting characters were created specifically for Kirito. What, Kirito is a winner in life and Inoda is a shoe picker?”
I enjoy seeing them complain xD

As Fujino said, there won't be what people expect for Suguha and so in my opinion he was referring to those who wanted Suguha to end up with Inoda
 

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I don't know if we will see less of fog in the next update due to Asuna's condition having to go without vaginal sex for a week, but this leads us to possible anal sex in fog, of course Asuna will start to fall irl too, it will be interesting, what I most want to see is Inoda making advances while Kirito spies on everything at work, it's going to be a lot of fun. and of course, in this time without virtual sex with Asuna, Liz could become the replacement that will be on the tip of Inoda's dick.
 
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Can't really blame the chi ese players. The fact that Kirito is still getting all the girls despite this being NTR game is jarring.

It really cheapens the whole thing like he is going to lose Asuna and perhaps even Liz but what is the point if he still has Suguha and Sinon ?
He started getting all this just recently. And unlike Asuna, Kirito's love meter for her is constantly at 999. As for Sinon, I personally think that she is bored and is just playing with him. When he came to the dungeon, she was just doing her own thing and had no plans for him. Just like in the scene with Suguha in the fog, she then just decided to tease her. Suguha has been trying to get Kirito almost from the very beginning of the second part. And Liz, her fate is decided, she will not play for long and then will become a pig for Inoda.
 
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