mos555
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Yes, I know very well that this fetish has 3 iterations. And do you remember that thanks to its first version, Inoda and Asuna got one of the best sex scenes - sex in a tree house. Since English is not my native language, I missed the beginning of their conversation in a hurry, which can only be read in the memory room. And when I decided to translate this whole scene for myself, my eyes almost bled out from what I read - Inoda started his sad little tirade again. I am poor, unhappy. Only sucking mommy-Asuna's tits can make my life easier... Well, as for me, it's complete crap) I thought that he was telling her there that she was feeling bad, and Kirito left and abandoned them, but he was always ready to take care of her... NO! I'm a pathetic fuck, let me suck your tits, rub my dick against your crotch... I'll repeat - with such perks you can write any nonsense and always justify it with the logic of what's happening. Not that it's really bad. The worst thing about them is that they completely kill the intrigue of the work.
So I wrote that after getting these two perks, the story is over for me. And why? Because after that, even if Kirito finds out that Asuna is fucking Inoda and wants to get her back, he won't be able to. He can fuck Asuna 24 hours a day, 7 days a week... But Asuna needs to cum, and she can only cum from Inoda's dick... You can tell Asuna what a bastard Inoda is and how he manipulated her... But Inoda will say with a sad look that he is so pathetic and did it to be near Asuna, and now his life is over. And Asuna will run to console him. How - everyone understands))) That's how it is. I am ready to read nonsense and accept it, but such things actually kill the work for me.
4-kun
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Yeah, maybe, but this whole Yui arc felt like a regular quest, which is weird since it could’ve and logically should've been the last opportunity to show some emotional bond between Asuna and Kirito before the complete fall.
Oregairu. I'd like quality NTRs with consistent endings - about 10 of them))) (dreams-dreams). And not this - Dumb Yukino gets a dick on the forehead and into bed, Yui is immediately a slut, Iroha fucks the entire football team under hypnosis...
mos555
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Apparently, this was Fujino's idea to show by contrast how bad the relationship between Asuna and Kirito is now. It looks much worse than in the digital indicator. Inoda currently has 600, and Kirito has 800+. Although Asuna treats Kirito roughly like a 300+ Inoda. That's the problem, why do these numbers if they don't correspond to what's happening? You can only get confused. Or again, this is some kind of grand plan by Fujino... or great inexperience in prescribing romantic relationships.
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mos555
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Hmm, it might be suitable, but the main character is slightly peculiar. Maybe Hachiman will just think, "Well, it's good that someone else is fucking her now. It's easier for me that way. Finally having a rest" It might be worth paying attention to the Bunny Girl or Danmachi. While Bell is going through the dungeons, Hestia works part-time in another place, along with Aiz.
Let's remember who YUI is from the original... Part of the AI, created to accompany the emotional state of people in a deadly game and finally realized itself upon discovering an extra-strong emotional connection between 2 people against the background of a general background of hopelessness... And here Asuna and Kirito summon YUI to this world. YUI looks at them - and what the fuck happened here in a couple of months?! )))
I wonder what Asuna was thinking about when she passionately wanted to bring YUI back with her current relationship with Kirito and Inoda... Nothing. The author just needs decorations)))
I wonder what Asuna was thinking about when she passionately wanted to bring YUI back with her current relationship with Kirito and Inoda... Nothing. The author just needs decorations)))
aa-aa-aa
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I tried chatGPT image gen for the first time and wow that is actually impressive
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4-kun
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like, corrupting the girl that rapes her oni-chan while he's asleep?...right... good luck with making water wet
mos555
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Given the events with Inoda and the fact that Yui flew up to him instead of Kirito, the question arises, is it Yui? Probably not anymore.
Oh come on! It's just Kirito who got fat after a month of dieting on pies)))
4-kun
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I mean, we all knew beforehand, whatever the implementation of Yui would be, it wouldn't make any sense
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Aniky Light
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no. that's not what I'm talking about. WHAT will happen here will be more nonsense. I'm talking about Asuna knowing full well who Yui is and passionately wanting to bring her back. What kind of reaction does she expect from the original Yui who has returned? Mom, why is your emotional connection with this fat man so much stronger than with dad? Mom, why do you secretly log into the game every day to fuck him? )))
Yes, it was immediately clear, when the conversation about this quest started, that the outcome would be sex between Asuna and Inoda. Only then everyone was perplexed - Kirito can't be so stupid that Asuna would fuck Inoda at the end of the ritual. Voila! We smile and wave)
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Just try to imagine that is Kirito where he stopped dieting which resulted in him getting fatter and his vision worse.
Danmachi is good, but there are too many female characters.Hmm, it might be suitable, but the main character is slightly peculiar. Maybe Hachiman will just think, "Well, it's good that someone else is fucking her now. It's easier for me that way. Finally having a rest" It might be worth paying attention to the Bunny Girl or Danmachi. While Bell is going through the dungeons, Hestia works part-time in another place, along with Aiz.
Aniky Light
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he didn't tell her I love you or want them to get married
and also about the quest. Excellent quest. The best one! More precisely, ideal for our heroes. And let's imagine that another couple goes through it. So what? And let's imagine that not 4 people go through it, but 8. And at the end the girl will have a threesome? And who's the dad?! It doesn't matter! ))))