I absolutely love this plot, it's my favourite game right now.
As the author having real life experience, i have no idea. Maybe, who knows. Points of improvement? Stick to his vision, saying this from an artist perspective. Do not sway for the audience or critics or judges, be true to you and if it's wrong, be wrong by being true. It's the best way to win and also the best way to loose.
The ones that cheated on their SO's with me, were not rich by any means. Only lovey dovey young and good looking housewives. I'm not into sugar loving girls (had some, looked good, but zero passion and stiff) and never had milfs (i think).
Like Asuna? Sex wise, absolutely and much worse.
Dynamic wise, no. In my experience, I was more like Kirito stealing the girl from a guy like Inoda.
One of them, once I left her, she started cheating with her boss at work.
So same dynamic, her husband was oblivious and she was cheating with the more powerful guy.
And yes, they did badmouth their husbands. Yes, we were being risque. Real life conv would go like this
Me: Does your husband know how much you like to take it up the ass?
Her: No, he does not, so shut up and fuck me.
So pretty much like Asuna, you would never guess what huge sluts with incredible bodies are under their lovey dovery demeanors.
But now, as I'm writing this, they are back at their husbands without them having no idea.
Probably moved on to the next guy. It's a sad life for everyone.
And of course, bringing out the slut from inside is the guy's job. You gotta play the right keys.