RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.80] [Fujino]

[mos555]

This tool-like player-controlled character sometimes makes the plot weak. Now we know (especially from Inoda’s words as he envys and hates Kirito) Kirito is strong and respected, but in the game Kirito is not like that. He is very passive, having almost no goals to achieve but is only driven by other people.

Comparatively, Inoda is very active, always making plans, learning new skills, trying out new strategies, and chasing his goals. We can say Inoda is fundamentally a garbage, having no feelings but only wants to have his sextual needs satisfied. But this is also a goal to pursue, and Inoda works hard for it. Not like Kirito. What Kirito does contradicts who he is described as.

Although in the first part we are given to understand that Kirito is a famous character and Inoda recognizes him immediately. In the second part, Liz is also a fan of Kirito and wants to take him away from Asuna. But judging by the perks, apparently Liz gets disappointed and ends up in Inoda's harem.

Kirito is not an ordinary character, he has a huge background. And in the first part, Kirito was just such a character, Asuna was corrupted through strange situations in the game. Loss of consciousness in the sewers, capture by bandits. And in real life, Inoda made Asuna feel sorry for himself and behaved like a cute fat man. Kirito was a more lively character, he suspected something and did not trust Inoda.

But in the second part, Fujino made Kirito "the usual main character of the NTR." A wooden log that exists to justify the ring on Asuna's finger. They could be called anything, they could not be Kirito and Asuna, but Hiroto and Yukina. But Fujino insists on adding elements of the original novel. And sometimes it looks out of place. Maybe this is my preconceived opinion, but the first part was done perfectly. The second part has gone into some kind of jungle and, judging by the perks, it becomes an ordinary NTR game.

 

[outbalancing]

I fixed it, try it.

Brooooo, thank you so much, that helped.

 

[outbalancing]

Someone before you solved this transfering saves from early game version

Well, that was also a brilliant and simple option))) very logical, no longer needed, but thanks anyway))))

 

[mos555]

I also fixed the status bug.
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If you have trouble starting over, click here to fix it.
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Everything really works, thank you very much. Fujino is that you? Log in under your real nickname.

 

[outbalancing]

I honestly don't know what you're discussing, because I don't want to spoil what will happen))) but after the first part it becomes perfectly clear that the game is a complete cringe ahaha, just an NTR sandbox, I don't know what else to call it, there is no logic and something else)), although there is subtle logic behind everything at the same time))). The point is that poor Kirito was turned into a complete cuckold, with all the ensuing characteristics, a typical pathetic cuckold. You just play and enjoy and partially laugh because of the absurdity of what is happening))) The second part, honestly speaking, after the first, is a bit boring for me so far, but this generally makes the subsequent game more interesting (probably), what I liked was all sorts of things with perks and a type of menu with Asuna's "state" at the moment, what they do with her, to put it simply))) I really liked this thing. Minus, for me, either only I have a glitch in the game, or everyone, because of the quick messages that were added in this version and also the save menu takes a long time to load, I don’t know if this can be fixed, but it’s really a little annoying))) And I’ll be honest, I don’t like playing as a cuckold, although I’ve already gotten used to it here, but I’d rather play for the same Inoda than for Kirito. Because as an example it was with the first part where I clear the entire location from monsters as Kirito (when Asuna was kidnapped), and fucking Inoda is having fun at this time)))) The essence of course is the same in general, the event is still visible, but I wanted to play for the “main” protagonist (Inoda) hahaha, as for me. But I don’t know, maybe playing for Kirito here somehow makes the game more atmospheric, as for the NTR genre, but honestly I’d rather play for Inoda as the main protagonist. (Glory to Netori)))

 

[brevvv]

hey do y'all have any good recommendations of games similar to this?

 

[cp2020]

Although in the first part we are given to understand that Kirito is a famous character and Inoda recognizes him immediately. In the second part, Liz is also a fan of Kirito and wants to take him away from Asuna. But judging by the perks, apparently Liz gets disappointed and ends up in Inoda's harem.

Kirito is not an ordinary character, he has a huge background. And in the first part, Kirito was just such a character, Asuna was corrupted through strange situations in the game. Loss of consciousness in the sewers, capture by bandits. And in real life, Inoda made Asuna feel sorry for himself and behaved like a cute fat man. Kirito was a more lively character, he suspected something and did not trust Inoda.

But in the second part, Fujino made Kirito "the usual main character of the NTR." A wooden log that exists to justify the ring on Asuna's finger. They could be called anything, they could not be Kirito and Asuna, but Hiroto and Yukina. But Fujino insists on adding elements of the original novel. And sometimes it looks out of place. Maybe this is my preconceived opinion, but the first part was done perfectly. The second part has gone into some kind of jungle and, judging by the perks, it becomes an ordinary NTR game.

Yes, I share the same feeling, and maybe many other players too.

SAO Part I story is more nuanced, including coincidence (such as the storm) and planned actions (such as Inoda acting like a vulnerable teenager who needs love, and he seceretly taking away the key under Kirito's door carpet), which altogether pushed Asuna to a cornered place where she finally had sex with Inoda, not entirely willing to but somehow she did. I think this is a big reason why Part I story ends with a nice peak. It also explains why Asuna regrets a lot at the beginning of Part II.

But now as the story goes, the characteristics of Kirito and Asuna become less meaningful, although these characteristics are the things that contain the whole background information and make Kirito and Asuna who they are, especially their strengths and weaknesses that let Part I story make sense.

I do hope Fujino can realize this in later development: He is creating a NTR game of SAO, and this "SAO" background means a lot. It's okay to corrupt Asuna, but this female character must still be Asuna instead of a regular girl. Kirito too. He has to act like Kirito in order to be Kirito in the story.

 

[mos555]

Yes, I share the same feeling, and maybe many other players too.

SAO Part I story is more nuanced, including coincidence (such as the storm) and planned actions (such as Inoda acting like a vulnerable teenager who needs love, and he seceretly taking away the key under Kirito's door carpet), which altogether pushed Asuna to a cornered place where she finally had sex with Inoda, not entirely willing to but somehow she did. I think this is a big reason why Part I story ends with a nice peak. It also explains why Asuna regrets a lot at the beginning of Part II.

But now as the story goes, the characteristics of Kirito and Asuna become less meaningful, although these characteristics are the things that contain the whole background information and make Kirito and Asuna who they are, especially their strengths and weaknesses that let Part I story make sense.

I do hope Fujino can realize this in later development: He is creating a NTR game of SAO, and this "SAO" background means a lot. It's okay to corrupt Asuna, but this female character must still be Asuna instead of a regular girl. Kirito too. He has to act like Kirito in order to be Kirito in the story.

I agree. Due to the fact that the characters in the game are increasingly moving away from their prototypes and losing part of their individuality, the game becomes just NTR Online 2, and not Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic II . All these pregnancies, harems of mothers and daughters only make the situation worse.

It's a shame if Fujino noticed that NTR Online 1 sells better with the same name from Saikey than with the original Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic from Ci-en and Patreon. And decided that there was no need to tie the characters too much to the original and focus more on the future sale of NTR Online 2

 

[cp2020]

I honestly don't know what you're discussing, because I don't want to spoil what will happen))) but after the first part it becomes perfectly clear that the game is a complete cringe ahaha, just an NTR sandbox, I don't know what else to call it, there is no logic and something else)), although there is subtle logic behind everything at the same time))). The point is that poor Kirito was turned into a complete cuckold, with all the ensuing characteristics, a typical pathetic cuckold. You just play and enjoy and partially laugh because of the absurdity of what is happening))) The second part, honestly speaking, after the first, is a bit boring for me so far, but this generally makes the subsequent game more interesting (probably), what I liked was all sorts of things with perks and a type of menu with Asuna's "state" at the moment, what they do with her, to put it simply))) I really liked this thing. Minus, for me, either only I have a glitch in the game, or everyone, because of the quick messages that were added in this version and also the save menu takes a long time to load, I don’t know if this can be fixed, but it’s really a little annoying))) And I’ll be honest, I don’t like playing as a cuckold, although I’ve already gotten used to it here, but I’d rather play for the same Inoda than for Kirito. Because as an example it was with the first part where I clear the entire location from monsters as Kirito (when Asuna was kidnapped), and fucking Inoda is having fun at this time)))) The essence of course is the same in general, the event is still visible, but I wanted to play for the “main” protagonist (Inoda) hahaha, as for me. But I don’t know, maybe playing for Kirito here somehow makes the game more atmospheric, as for the NTR genre, but honestly I’d rather play for Inoda as the main protagonist. (Glory to Netori)))

I think nothing is spoiled because most of our discussions are about what had happened in the past updates. The perks (especially the hidden ones now in game) I summarize from data file (here: https://f95zone.to/threads/sword-ar...ic-part-2-v0-551c-fujino.154352/post-15015205), in my opinion, are just what Fujino was thinking when he was planning Asuna's corruption very long time ago, and is highly possible to be changed in the future game.

Your feeling is shared, because this is what I say "Fujino has his habits in developing a NTR game" here https://f95zone.to/threads/sword-ar...ic-part-2-v0-551c-fujino.154352/post-15020730. The main male character controlled by players are always like this in his games, either a fool who can't realize what is happening to his girl or a cuck who gradually becomes enjoying his girl being fucked by other people.

So one way is to split our mind, that although we are playing Kirito, we are in fact being Inoda who is corrupting Asuna. That'll be cooler.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

I did catch the scene during my playthrough, although I didn´t exactly pay very much attention to the dialogue of the technician since I was focusing more on whatever the piggy was saying to Liz at the time, my general perception of that hidden snippet is that it was mostly a set-up of the location for a possible IRL scene with Asuna and the Fatso like the title-screen foretold us.

(I was also expecting some kind of lewd content or mini-event to go on on the balcony, alas, nothing came of it.) (yet)

I don´t have a Suguha image with me right now, so I just want to comment on the way she was titty-fucking Kirito during the last update. It was absolutely hilarious, and not just because of the incestual context. The way she had lifted his entire lower body is just super funny for me for some reason.

Probably because of how casually she was doing it XD Here is a reminder 99% of Hentai SAO writers forget when they make not-NTR of her, Suguha is STRONG. Even before the shitty retcon/justification of the movie took that to ironically nonsensical levels, she was a national-level kendoka, she literally could break everyone else in the main cast in half IRL, she could have broken Hebishima six ways to sunday every time if he hadn't drugged her. Fujino actually constantly brings this up subtly or in the background, like Hebishima constant comments of how she was the only one he had ever had that could outfuck him at first, and why during the AV she literally got so into the roleplay imagining she was doing it with Kirito that she was constantly making him look back for how little stamina he seemed to have in comparison. So for her doing that to Kazuto IRL would be laughably easy

Liz should know pretty much everything Inoda has done. At least she knows everything he has done since she appeared in the game. Her goal is Kirito and Asuna to break up and date Kirito. But she knows if Kirito breaks up with Asuna he won't automatically go to her. So she is trying to show Kirito she is girlfriend material before Kirito breaks up with Asuna. Also MAYBE she is trying to be a good friend to Asuna too by leaving her a Inoda fuck toy? All the jerk off and breast fucking with Inoda was training so she can do with Kirito later. But she is so bad at trying to be GF material that Kirito actually likes her less now. Suguha has done a lot better job at being GF material to Kirito. She thinks she is a smart character but really she is a dumb girl.

Actually no King, MASSIVE correction/misunderstanding you have there: Liz DOESN'T know. I know over the course of months is easy to lose track of 'minor' things in the plot, but I would recommend a replay at some point to fully refresh your memory; during the Liz & Inoda 'alliance' plot, it's kinda a big deal that Inoda is completely lying to Lisbeth about what he has managed or how far he has gone with Asuna, Liz doesn't know about the rainy night, about the extent he can push his powers, etc. There is even a 'report' of him not that long ago after the massage where he tells her that the further he has gotten with Asuna is a kiss, and she has no reason to believe he's lying, she in fact punished him about 'wasting the precious opportunity she made for him'. The "joke" here is that this is to further make Inoda seem like some 4D chessmaster (Or Administrator's second favorite toy in this case) because at the same time he has "allied" with Liz to further his goals he's also playing her to eventually catch her off-guard and turn her into his slave-slut #3 as he has been doing with Asuna and Kyouko, the more "harmless" Liz thinks he is if he's constantly failing on her chances, the easier it's for him to get her in situations where he can start corrupting her, like the 'massage practice/spanking' he gave her not long ago.

 

[cp2020]

hey do y'all have any good recommendations of games similar to this?

Maybe try "NTR Survival Z" or in Japanese "NTRサバイバル Z". The CGs are not as good as the SAO ones. The female status system is similar and synchronized. Plus, players who control the husband has the chance to avoid the wife being fucked, in other words, more routes available: Cuckold, NTR, NTR & revenge, no NTR.

 

[mos555]

I think nothing is spoiled because most of our discussions are about what had happened in the past updates. The perks (especially the hidden ones now in game) I summarize from data file (here: https://f95zone.to/threads/sword-ar...ic-part-2-v0-551c-fujino.154352/post-15015205), in my opinion, are just what Fujino was thinking when he was planning Asuna's corruption very long time ago, and is highly possible to be changed in the future game.

Your feeling is shared, because this is what I say "Fujino has his habits in developing a NTR game" here https://f95zone.to/threads/sword-ar...ic-part-2-v0-551c-fujino.154352/post-15020730. The main male character controlled by players are always like this in his games, either a fool who can't realize what is happening to his girl or a cuck who gradually becomes enjoying his girl being fucked by other people.

So one way is to split our mind, that although we are playing Kirito, we are in fact being Inoda who is corrupting Asuna. That'll be cooler.

I have been a fan of the Sword Art Online for 14 years and I can hardly perceive this game in isolation from the original. Everything was correct in the first part. Asuna is a kind and trusting girl like in the Novel. Kirito is brave and smart. Everything was right. And even Inoda was well suited to Asuna's kind nature and her maternal instinct. And the second part... Well I do not know. The same 18-year-old Asuna, kind and gentle, turns into a sow in a month who fully realizes herself as a fallen whore.

Judging by how Fujino's number of subscribers increased after he started making SAO, there are a lot of people like me. Fujino, in fact, took advantage of a well-known and popular novel and at the moment merges the history of the world and characters in favor of the usual cliched NTR logic.

This is my opinion. Don't swear at me too much. And maybe it will change everything, because so far there is a little more than half game. But it's unlikely. Fujino thought out the ending at the very beginning. Usually, in this case, the developer hardly wants to change anything.

 

[4-kun]

Probably because of how casually she was doing it XD Here is a reminder 99% of Hentai SAO writers forget when they make not-NTR of her, Suguha is STRONG. Even before the shitty retcon/justification of the movie took that to ironically nonsensical levels, she was a national-level kendoka, she literally could break everyone else in the main cast in half IRL, she could have broken Hebishima six ways to sunday every time if he hadn't drugged her. Fujino actually constantly brings this up subtly or in the background, like Hebishima constant comments of how she was the only one he had ever had that could outfuck him at first, and why during the AV she literally got so into the roleplay imagining she was doing it with Kirito that she was constantly making him look back for how little stamina he seemed to have in comparison. So for her doing that to Kazuto IRL would be laughably easy



Actually no King, MASSIVE correction/misunderstanding you have there: Liz DOESN'T know. I know over the course of months is easy to lose track of 'minor' things in the plot, but I would recommend a replay at some point to fully refresh your memory; during the Liz & Inoda 'alliance' plot, it's kinda a big deal that Inoda is completely lying to Lisbeth about what he has managed or how far he has gone with Asuna, Liz doesn't know about the rainy night, about the extent he can push his powers, etc. There is even a 'report' of him not that long ago after the massage where he tells her that the further he has gotten with Asuna is a kiss, and she has no reason to believe he's lying, she in fact punished him about 'wasting the precious opportunity she made for him'. The "joke" here is that this is to further make Inoda seem like some 4D chessmaster (Or Administrator's second favorite toy in this case) because at the same time he has "allied" with Liz to further his goals he's also playing her to eventually catch her off-guard and turn her into his slave-slut #3 as he has been doing with Asuna and Kyouko, the more "harmless" Liz thinks he is if he's constantly failing on her chances, the easier it's for him to get her in situations where he can start corrupting her, like the 'massage practice/spanking' he gave her not long ago.

Yeah, I guess Liz will fall as soon as Asuna accepts irl sex, because there would be nothing she can offer Inoda to keep playing along with her schemes.

 

[4-kun]

I have been a fan of the Sword Art Online for 14 years and I can hardly perceive this game in isolation from the original. Everything was correct in the first part. Asuna is a kind and trusting girl like in the Novel. Kirito is brave and smart. Everything was right. And even Inoda was well suited to Asuna's kind nature and her maternal instinct. And the second part... Well I do not know. The same 18-year-old Asuna, kind and gentle, turns into a sow in a month who fully realizes herself as a fallen whore.

Judging by how Fujino's number of subscribers increased after he started making SAO, there are a lot of people like me. Fujino, in fact, took advantage of a well-known and popular novel and at the moment merges the history of the world and characters in favor of the usual cliched NTR logic.

This is my opinion. Don't swear at me too much. And maybe it will change everything, because so far there is a little more than half game. But it's unlikely. Fujino thought out the ending at the very beginning. Usually, in this case, the developer hardly wants to change anything.

Well, they are only 18 because it's an porn game, If you take into consideration that the whole story takes place after SAO, the characters are around actually 14-16

 

[kinglionheart]

Actually no King, MASSIVE correction/misunderstanding you have there: Liz DOESN'T know. I know over the course of months is easy to lose track of 'minor' things in the plot, but I would recommend a replay at some point to fully refresh your memory; during the Liz & Inoda 'alliance' plot, it's kinda a big deal that Inoda is completely lying to Lisbeth about what he has managed or how far he has gone with Asuna, Liz doesn't know about the rainy night, about the extent he can push his powers, etc. There is even a 'report' of him not that long ago after the massage where he tells her that the further he has gotten with Asuna is a kiss, and she has no reason to believe he's lying, she in fact punished him about 'wasting the precious opportunity she made for him'. The "joke" here is that this is to further make Inoda seem like some 4D chessmaster (Or Administrator's second favorite toy in this case) because at the same time he has "allied" with Liz to further his goals he's also playing her to eventually catch her off-guard and turn her into his slave-slut #3 as he has been doing with Asuna and Kyouko, the more "harmless" Liz thinks he is if he's constantly failing on her chances, the easier it's for him to get her in situations where he can start corrupting her, like the 'massage practice/spanking' he gave her not long ago.

It is hard to track of all the details especially on the side characters. I know she doesn't know about the Lustful Night. That is why I said "At least she knows everything he has done since she appeared in the game.". She would know about the church confessions and massages since she planned those. I guess I didn't know if she knew how far Inoda has gotten with Asuna.

It would be nice to replay the previous parts to refresh my memory. But with the current state of the game, that is not possible. It would be better to wait until the game is done before doing that. At least here there is always someone who can remember stuff other people forgot or not understand.

 

[mos555]

Well, they are only 18 because it's an porn game, If you take into consideration that the whole story takes place after SAO, the characters are around actually 14-16

Asuna was born on September 30th, 2007, she is 19 in the game. Kirito was born on October 7, 2008. He is 18, and according to history, they all study at a school for those stuck in SAO. If Inoda kohai is for her, then he may also be 18, or maybe even 17.

 

[kinglionheart]

Yeah, I guess Liz will fall as soon as Asuna accepts irl sex, because there would be nothing she can offer Inoda to keep playing along with her schemes.

Either that or Liz falls first and helps corrupts Asuna in the real world too. She really is not making any leads with Kirito anyway and all the "practice" she does with Inoda, it is hard to know what else she can for Inoda besides blocking Kirito.

Asuna was born on September 30th, 2007, she is 19 in the game. Kirito was born on October 7, 2008. He is 18, and according to history, they all study at a school for those stuck in SAO. If Inoda kohai is for her, then he may also be 18, or maybe even 17.

It is best not to count on canon information unless Fujino said so. Asuna has said in-game she is barely 18. As 4-kun, that is only she can pass as legal in porn game.

 

[cp2020]

I have been a fan of the Sword Art Online for 14 years and I can hardly perceive this game in isolation from the original. Everything was correct in the first part. Asuna is a kind and trusting girl like in the Novel. Kirito is brave and smart. Everything was right. And even Inoda was well suited to Asuna's kind nature and her maternal instinct. And the second part... Well I do not know. The same 18-year-old Asuna, kind and gentle, turns into a sow in a month who fully realizes herself as a fallen whore.

Judging by how Fujino's number of subscribers increased after he started making SAO, there are a lot of people like me. Fujino, in fact, took advantage of a well-known and popular novel and at the moment merges the history of the world and characters in favor of the usual cliched NTR logic.

This is my opinion. Don't swear at me too much. And maybe it will change everything, because so far there is a little more than half game. But it's unlikely. Fujino thought out the ending at the very beginning. Usually, in this case, the developer hardly wants to change anything.

Exactly. SAO is famous and has a lot of fans, or at least many people know it and its characters like Asuna, Kirito, Sugu, etc. I do believe that many people want to play Fujino's game because they are attracted by these names. It happens to me. Otherwise, this will just be another regular NTR game. The feeling will be completely different.

Like I said, it's okay to see all these female characters corrupt and Kirito becomes a cuck. No problem to me because this is a NTR game. I am aware of that and I still choose to play. It's just a little sad to see that these characters are not who they are in SAO. After all, it's a waste of the SAO background because I don't think Fujino will make another SAO NTR game after finishing this one.

 

[4-kun]

Either that or Liz falls first and helps corrupts Asuna in the real world too. She really is not making any leads with Kirito anyway and all the "practice" she does with Inoda, it is hard to know what else she can for Inoda besides blocking Kirito.


It is best not to count on canon information unless Fujino said so. Asuna has said in-game she is barely 18. As 4-kun, that is only she can pass as legal in porn game.

Also, wasn’t Asuna one year older than Kirito in the original? Which would make Inoda actually two years younger

 

[kinglionheart]

Also, wasn’t Asuna one year older than Kirito in the original? Which would make Inoda actually two years younger

Since Inoda is a OC, it is just as likely he was held back for four years and he is two years older than Asuna.