RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.83] [Fujino]

[mos555]

Don't forget how they never say their names when Kirito is watching

This is also strange. I noticed it. The situation with Asuna is clear. Kirito thinks she's Inoda's cousin, so it doesn't matter if she calls him by his first name or not. But why does Inoda, if he doesn't know that he's being watched, never call Asuna by name? Either he knows about Kirito's surveillance, or the goddess of fortune shuts his mouth at the right moment.

There is no mention of this anywhere. In a blog post, I think Inoda wrote that he used Kirito to get a hacking program. And that's it. Inoda forgot about it. Another hole in the narrative, covered by Inoda's band-aid of boundless luck.

 

[Aniky Light]

This is also strange. I noticed it. The situation with Asuna is clear. Kirito thinks she's Inoda's cousin, so it doesn't matter if she calls him by his first name or not. But why does Inoda, if he doesn't know that he's being watched, never call Asuna by name? Either he knows about Kirito's surveillance, or the goddess of fortune shuts his mouth at the right moment.

There is no mention of this anywhere. In a blog post, I think Inoda wrote that he used Kirito to get a hacking program. And that's it. Inoda forgot about it. Another hole in the narrative, covered by Inoda's band-aid of boundless luck.

If Inoda said the name Asuna while Kirito was looking at the camera, he would say: How strange, I didn't know that Inoda's cousin also has the same name as my girlfriend

 

[mos555]

In fact, if you look closely, you can see that the whole game is based on two fragile pillars - Kirito's boundless stupidity and Inoda's boundless luck. If you just squander everything and jerk off to sex scenes, it's unnoticeable. But if you watch the narrative thoughtfully, it eventually gets annoying. And for some reason Kirito is dumb only when it comes to Asuna, in the investigation plot he quite demonstrates intelligence.

I understand that nothing can be changed now, but Fujino needed to develop the game according to a different scheme. For example, "a willing cuckold." It wasn't Asuna who would have discovered Kirito in the brothel, but on the contrary, Kirito would have discovered Asuna in the hotel, using Liz's glasses. But after the lessons on "How to be a cuckold and enjoy it" from the holy father in the church and Klein, Kirito would have realized that he likes to watch. With this arrangement, everything would immediately become simple and logical. Kirito didn't have to be dumb, and Inoda didn't have to have supernatural luck. And the fact that Kirito would suddenly start fucking Suguha and Sinon would be easy to explain - "Asuna is cheating, so I can too." And the fact that the memory is erased after leaving the blog would simply not be necessary, and Kirito would be happy that Inoda was fucking Asuna's mother - "She treated me badly, Inoda avenged me."

And the endings would be simple -
1.Kirito tells Asuna that he knows everything and becomes a cuckold in full.
2.Kirito remains silent and watches, even when Asuna has already become pregnant by Inoda.

The game would have ended long ago and Fujino would have gone to rest. Right now, he's just trying to untangle a tangle, consisting of plot holes, plenty characters, and events based on the 2 pillars I mentioned above. And at the same time extending the game until the end of the year. Poor Fujino, I hope he has a clear idea how to get out of this shit.

 

[kinglionheart]

In fact, if you look closely, you can see that the whole game is based on two fragile pillars - Kirito's boundless stupidity and Inoda's boundless luck. If you just squander everything and jerk off to sex scenes, it's unnoticeable. But if you watch the narrative thoughtfully, it eventually gets annoying. And for some reason Kirito is dumb only when it comes to Asuna, in the investigation plot he quite demonstrates intelligence.

For better or worse there is an third pillar, Administrator. I still don't know if including her was a good idea or not. Without her, all the good things that happened to Inoda was because of the first two pillars. With her, we are now never sure which pillar gave Inoda the good results. Like I am pretty sure the only things confirmed to be Administrator helping Inoda are Inoda's stealth ability and his early success with Asuna's massages. But with how crazy good timing it was that the quarantine happened right as Inoda was in Asuna's hotel room, how do we know it wasn't Administrator intervention? Some people might like having a easy reason for Inoda's wins and some people won't.

 

[mos555]

For better or worse there is an third pillar, Administrator. I still don't know if including her was a good idea or not. Without her, all the good things that happened to Inoda was because of the first two pillars. With her, we are now never sure which pillar gave Inoda the good results. Like I am pretty sure the only things confirmed to be Administrator helping Inoda are Inoda's stealth ability and his early success with Asuna's massages. But with how crazy good timing it was that the quarantine happened right as Inoda was in Asuna's hotel room, how do we know it wasn't Administrator intervention? Some people might like having a easy reason for Inoda's wins and some people won't.

I would not call the Administrator a pillar, rather she is the surface on which these pillars stand. She calls Kirito her chosen one, but erases his memory and helps Inoda. That is, she is the gray cardinal who stands behind Kirito's stupidity and Inoda's luck. You're right, there are too few examples of her direct involvement in the game, but in fact, almost all the strange events and coincidences can be attributed to her. I think Sensei Fujino should have expanded the scope of Administrator visible influence on events so that there would not be so many questions about luck and stupidity.

 

[drag0nf6y]

while asuna's busy with inoda, suguha steps in to fulfill her onii-chan's desires >.<

 

[denialfailure]

Kirito: "Hey, just finished work. How was your day, Asuna?"
Asuna: "Nnh... G-good... Just meetings... Paperwork..."
Inoda: "Paperwork my ass. You’ve been doing dickwork all day."
Asuna: "Ngh... s-stop... h-he’ll hear..."
Inoda: "Let him hear what kind of filthy slut his perfect little Asuna turned into."
Kirito: "Must be boring being stuck inside, huh?"
Asuna: "A-ah... I-it’s not so bad... Keeps me busy..."
Inoda: "Busy getting your holes stretched, slut."
Kirito: "Haha, sounds like you’re holding up better than me, Asuna!"
Asuna: "Y-yeah... Mnh... I’m holding up... R-really..."
Inoda: "No you’re not. You’re creaming all over my meatstick while you lie to him."
Asuna: "P-please, Inoda... I’ll always be yours, Kirito... Love you..."
Inoda: "Sure you are, my loyal little sefure-chan."
Kirito: "Love you too, Asuna. Get some rest, okay?"
Asuna: "Nghh... I-i will... Goodnight..."
Inoda: "Yeah, good little sefure-chan. Tell your boyfriend goodnight while you're sucking me dry."
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sauce, my lord?

 

[drag0nf6y]

sauce, my lord?

that gif is vittorio veneto from azur lane (artist: doukkun)

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

while asuna's busy with inoda, suguha steps in to fulfill her onii-chan's desires >.<
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That's why she's best girl XD

Also, is report day everyone, depending on what exactly Fujino's "early update" is gonna be we may have more relevant info today so is anyone excited?

 

[denialfailure]

that gif is vittorio veneto from azur lane (artist: doukkun)

thank you, my lord.

 

[Kazuto123]

That's why she's best girl XD

Also, is report day everyone, depending on what exactly Fujino's "early update" is gonna be we may have more relevant info today so is anyone excited?

I am excited that there will definitely be a new version update this week, but I am not showing too much enthusiasm because I might be disappointed if the update turns out to be available after the end of May.

 

[Aniky Light]

I don't think there will be answers to the questions today, it's like saying: you'll only find out by playing

 

[Infeno2.0]

I would not call the Administrator a pillar, rather she is the surface on which these pillars stand. She calls Kirito her chosen one, but erases his memory and helps Inoda. That is, she is the gray cardinal who stands behind Kirito's stupidity and Inoda's luck. You're right, there are too few examples of her direct involvement in the game, but in fact, almost all the strange events and coincidences can be attributed to her. I think Sensei Fujino should have expanded the scope of Administrator visible influence on events so that there would not be so many questions about luck and stupidity.

I would say, there's no depper meaning in these "pillars", although interesting as they are, more than simple plot conveniences used by Fujino to not have to explain anything "these things just happen".
What happen when you write a story based upon conviniences is the fact that you force too much the suspension of disbelief from your public, which leads to ideas of extreme dumb luck or excessive stupidity, and the story becaming dull because of that.
And becuse of that Fujino storyline so far is devoid of conflict or tension, but he can't continue like that for the last chapters the ending of any story demand conflict and tension to be a interesting payoff, maybe that's why he's having a hard time to put that in motion.

 

[Infeno2.0]

That's why she's best girl XD

Also, is report day everyone, depending on what exactly Fujino's "early update" is gonna be we may have more relevant info today so is anyone excited?

I don't think there will be answers to the questions today, it's like saying: you'll only find out by playing

The early update or mid may update, i think will be several small sex scenes with larger one in the end, probably Kirito's video call, put togheter as a big scene showing the sefure Asuna and the last days of the Hotel arc, this way Fujno can save some time an start the 0.85 with Asuna/Inoda already back in the city.

The QnA sessions from Fujino are cool, but he probably will need to tone down or stop all togheter, since they are very close to spoilers terrirtory and he wants to avoid that.

 

[tamago4life]

At night when in the dream/replay realm, in the Asuna & Inoda section you can "purchase" the blog unlock with anxiety, one of Inoda's first unlock options.
Then check the PC in your room next time you get the chance.

Dude, you're a life saver

 

[kinglionheart]

The early update or mid may update, i think will be several small sex scenes with larger one in the end, probably Kirito's video call, put togheter as a big scene showing the sefure Asuna and the last days of the Hotel arc, this way Fujno can save some time an start the 0.85 with Asuna/Inoda already back in the city.

The QnA sessions from Fujino are cool, but he probably will need to tone down or stop all togheter, since they are very close to spoilers terrirtory and he wants to avoid that.

The mid-may update will probably several in-game days of
- Kirito goes to work.
- Kirito checks Inoda work computer and see Inoda getting naughty with his "cousin". Kirito keeps wondering if could do the same things to his "cousin".
- Kirito goes home and video-chats Asuna. For whatever reason, i.e. the image is burry or obstructed while Inoda gets naughty with Asuna.
- Kirito goes to sleep and there is a longer sex scene waiting for us in the recollection room.
The update will just be a long set of small sex scenes while Inoda breaks down Asuna during before the finisher next update where Inoda turns Asuna from temporary sefure to permanent one.

I hope Fujino can continue the Q&As. They are a great distraction from the lack of preview pics. But if there are not enough recurring questions that doesn't go into spoilers then there is no point. At least those Q&As are great for nit picking details but I doubt Fujino wants that!

 

[kinglionheart]

5.5 Progress Report

Current Progress:
Scripts：70%
Events：60%
CG：50%
Map：100%
I planned to take a break during the golden week, but I spent most of my break in hospital with a lot of examinations. Thankfully, it wasn’t anything serious. Back then, I make a few new outfits for Asuna and other girls.

目前的進步報告：
文本進度：70%
事件進度：60%
CG進度：50%
地圖進度：100%

本來想黃金周在家好好休息一下，結果因為身體有些異樣，中途還有些發熱，沒有感冒症狀，也不是新冠和流感，還是花了幾乎一半的假期預約這個那個診所做檢查，采完血做心電圖然後又是超聲波檢查，還好沒有大的問題。還是利用在家的時間寫完了大部分對話，順便也給亞絲娜和其他角色增加了一些新服裝。

 

[mos555]

5.5 Progress Report

Current Progress:
Scripts：70%
Events：60%
CG：50%
Map：100%
I planned to take a break during the golden week, but I spent most of my break in hospital with a lot of examinations. Thankfully, it wasn’t anything serious. Back then, I make a few new outfits for Asuna and other girls.

目前的進步報告：
文本進度：70%
事件進度：60%
CG進度：50%
地圖進度：100%

本來想黃金周在家好好休息一下，結果因為身體有些異樣，中途還有些發熱，沒有感冒症狀，也不是新冠和流感，還是花了幾乎一半的假期預約這個那個診所做檢查，采完血做心電圖然後又是超聲波檢查，還好沒有大的問題。還是利用在家的時間寫完了大部分對話，順便也給亞絲娜和其他角色增加了一些新服裝。
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Poor Fujino continues to suffer, but thank God, he doesn't seem to be going to die.

Liz has a pretty chaste costume. What if Kirito goes on a date with Liz instead of Suguha? Or both of them? Liz's clothes look like date clothes from romantic anime.
We've already seen Alice's clothes, but her hairstyle is different.

 

[Infeno2.0]

5.5 Progress Report

Current Progress:
Scripts：70%
Events：60%
CG：50%
Map：100%
I planned to take a break during the golden week, but I spent most of my break in hospital with a lot of examinations. Thankfully, it wasn’t anything serious. Back then, I make a few new outfits for Asuna and other girls.
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目前的進步報告：
文本進度：70%
事件進度：60%
CG進度：50%
地圖進度：100%

本來想黃金周在家好好休息一下，結果因為身體有些異樣，中途還有些發熱，沒有感冒症狀，也不是新冠和流感，還是花了幾乎一半的假期預約這個那個診所做檢查，采完血做心電圖然後又是超聲波檢查，還好沒有大的問題。還是利用在家的時間寫完了大部分對話，順便也給亞絲娜和其他角色增加了一些新服裝。

Boy oh boy, Liz in some modest clothings is weird and here we go again with Alice, for the life of me i can't understand Fujino almost obsession with Alice, and yeah he's at least is taking care of himself good to know.

 

[Aniky Light]

Poor Fujino continues to suffer, but thank God, he doesn't seem to be going to die.

Liz has a pretty chaste costume. What if Kirito goes on a date with Liz instead of Suguha? Or both of them? Liz's clothes look like date clothes from romantic anime.
We've already seen Alice's clothes, but her hairstyle is different.

a skirt so long as if it has to hide someone underneath XD