RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.83] [Fujino]

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toxicduo

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Great update imo he definitely used the extra time to show everyone's desires and added to the pacing of the story with the days remaining, while it could've been better most ntr games turn into this plot wise especially as you near the end however fujino has the opportunity to give this one of the most comedic endings of all time.

Asuna & kirto : I have something to tell you.

Asuna : I've been sleeping with inoda for awhile now. kirito : I've created a harem with liz, sinon and suguha and alice

asuna & kirito:

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toxicduo

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Barcuiii said:
Yes, this seems no less than those mindless hentais now.

Slow corruption was indeed the way to go, quarantine must have ended with Asuna anal, nothing more...
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I think that would've been way to slow especially considering all that's happened, if she would've been straight up ignoring or not even thinking about kirito and maybe just doing it raw 24/7 i woulda felt like it was moving too fast but i think this is fine as it is, she clearly can't resist inoda's whims but she still has enough of her mind left to make sure he has a condom on and to still be thinking about kirito although that could change in the last remaining quarantine days.
 
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gaga2128

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While I understand that now they crossed a line (with the sefure stuff), I feel like the last scenes could be improved by having more build-up to them (as in: tits stuff > bj > sex). The fast that it goes straight to sex and that the only new thing is a costume is a bit meh, imo. (I understand that there's some build up uring the day at work and you can kinda look at it with echap, but having during the recollection scene itself would be nice as well)
(maybe it's just because I like how Fujino does bj scenes and the last one we got was quite short :cry:) Really hope we'll get a IRL deepthroat or something before the end

I hope the phone call/BJ will be a complete scene with Asuna's POV
 
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Mark21800

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Barcuiii said:
Slow corruption was indeed the way to go, quarantine must have ended with Asuna anal, nothing more.
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Please no, any slower and the story would lose all forward momentum. This game is already around 20 hours long, 24-ish if you count part 1, it doesn't need to be any slower.
 
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it suck that we not see blowjob and meting press scene i just hype for what costume asuna gonna wear next maybe married dress ? but it kinda suck when inoda make asuna wear maid outfit but he not ask her not suck his ball or something
 
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elbro said:
That does show the level of corruption she's advanced in. She's already lied several times, had sex with Inoda in FOG just like in real life, and is already turning into a selfish person.
Well, it's Inoda's influence, and it shows what a bad guy he is, the real villain.
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The fact is that, at the moment, there is no corruption. Asuna just does whatever Inoda wants, and Inoda does nothing but just whine. To be honest, the dialogues before sex look extremely ridiculous to me. Asuna falsely resists, says 3-4 phrases, pretends to be angry, but it's worth saying Inoda - "But you promised!" or "I need your help, I'm suffering so much." And Asuna immediately agrees to everything. Why this ostentatious resistance, if it's already clear that Asuna has already completely fallen anyway. And if in the remaining 3 days she even stops pretending to resist, then it's generally ridiculous. Then why do we need the rest of the game?

The 2 weeks of quarantine look like a separate game and it looks like a remaster of the first part - it starts with footwork (as at the beginning of the first part) and ends with full-fledged sex without a condom. "SAO 2.5 Quarantine edition" Fujino should have started part 2 with Asuna going on a business trip and being quarantined. The game would have ended last year.

elbro said:
I can't take it seriously because Fujino uses that situation for humor and provocation, which is totally fine by me.
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Well, my opinion is that Asuna should have said the phrase "I love you" anyway - it would have increased the feeling of NTR, but as it is, it just worsens the perception of a fake relationship between them. I was also hooked by the ending of this conversation. Fujino should have added some kind of reaction from Kirito- a little upset or anger. And by the way, this is the second time the fitness excuse has been used. Stupid Kirito didn't even have thoughts of déjà vu.
 
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Kazuto123

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Despite this, it was a short update, but I liked Asuna Yuuki's scenes and dialogues.
Despite Asuna denying that she is not perverted and lascivious, but when she has sex with Inoda, she turns lascivious and is perverted. I'm glad that Asuna denies it, but still accepts that she is lustful and perverted. Asuna's sex scene with Inoda was beautifully shown, even Inoda brutally fucked her pussy and ass. Respect to such a fat guy who has strength and greater endurance to fuck Asuna hard :D
I do not like rimjob, because it is disgusting.

For me, it is good that Fujino sped up the plot and wants to finish this year. Then when Fujino finishes creating the SAO game, he deserves a rest.
Kirito is unfortunately stupid, blind, deaf like most MCs in the NTR game. As a long-time fan, I am mentally used to it because I have seen worse sex scenes, like peeing and drinking pee, etc.
 
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drag0nf6y said:
even in the bad ending kirigoat will end up with suguha (aka the best girl)
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Yeah, absolutely the best; she'd be an great ntr-antagonist, she has diffenently the right mindest and skills.

But there’s still a chance that Fujino is building that harem up on purpose, just to have them all fall to the council in the end with some bs excuse. So let's enjoy it for now :LOL:
 
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drag0nf6y

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4-kun said:
Yeah, absolutely the best; she'd be an great ntr-antagonist, she has diffenently the right mindest and skills.

But there’s still a chance that Fujino is building that harem up on purpose, just to have them all fall to the council in the end with some bs excuse. So let's enjoy it for now :LOL:
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>just to have them all fall to the council in the end
i hope not... kirito don't deserve to end up alone again. it's better if parodysuna leaves him and he ends up with suguha in both happy & bad ending
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mos555 said:
The fact is that, at the moment, there is no corruption. Asuna just does whatever Inoda wants, and Inoda does nothing but just whine. To be honest, the dialogues before sex look extremely ridiculous to me. Asuna falsely resists, says 3-4 phrases, pretends to be angry, but it's worth saying Inoda - "But you promised!" or "I need your help, I'm suffering so much." And Asuna immediately agrees to everything. Why this ostentatious resistance, if it's already clear that Asuna has already completely fallen anyway. And if in the remaining 3 days she even stops pretending to resist, then it's generally ridiculous. Then why do we need the rest of the game?

The 2 weeks of quarantine look like a separate game and it looks like a remaster of the first part - it starts with footwork (as at the beginning of the first part) and ends with full-fledged sex without a condom. "SAO 2.5 Quarantine edition" Fujino should have started part 2 with Asuna going on a business trip and being quarantined. The game would have ended last year.


Well, my opinion is that Asuna should have said the phrase "I love you" anyway - it would have increased the feeling of NTR, but as it is, it just worsens the perception of a fake relationship between them. I was also hooked by the ending of this conversation. Fujino should have added some kind of reaction from Kirito- a little upset or anger. And by the way, this is the second time the fitness excuse has been used. Stupid Kirito didn't even have thoughts of déjà vu.
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I can't argue with anything you've written because it's totally normal to react that way, but we knew that at some point the characters would change their ways because that was the goal of the game, good girlfriend to bad girlfriend, and we already have two games with a lot of content where a lot of things have happened. For me, we're already at the final corruption stage where it won't be long before Asuna accepts herself as a girl other than Kirito's girlfriend. When that happens, Inoda's villain will triumph.
To be honest, I don't see any redemption arc for Asuna where she thinks things through and stops cheating on Kirito with Inoda.
 
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